Sunset Shimmer finds herself no longer alone in her own body. Questions of identity and morality are only a few of her new concerns as she learns that sometimes, the worst foe lies within the self...
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There'll be Actual Action next chapter? I don't know about you but Shy's tirade there was about as savage as the wide scale battle before they went into the ark in chapter 13.
Imma be honest even your dry chapters are fucking gold. And the Dazzlings getting a redemption is something I'm always here for.
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If I'm to be perfectly honest, I even kind of surprised myself as I was coming up with it. I had planned for her to be assertive but then that just kind of flowed out when actually putting it into words. I thought "Wow that would be a LOW blow... And now I HAVE to use it."
So yeah, it went from strong Shy to straight up Flutterbitch and I'm pretty glad about it.
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Oh I'm not too worried my calmer chapters are bad, not that much more than the general worry I have about all my writing, but that just comes with being an author . And with the heavy chapters that were Dryfield and The Ark there needed some recovery time but I didn't predict I had quite so many seeds to plant too lol.
But I am very glad you both are enjoying even these less intense chapters. I never planned for it to be a Purely action story but the core gameplay of the games is about fighting monsters, so I try to keep that in mind. But yes, It's very nice to know my attempts are still landing and it means a lot to me that readers like you are sticking with it.
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The core gameplay loop is combat but the draw was the Story and suspense, and on all three I think you're killing it
Correction necessary, made in red.