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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
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The concept is good the execuition not as good though not bad could be better. It is riddled with misspelling that cannot be understated, though i can mostly understand the words, there are so many mispelling that it hurts to read.
The pacing in some hie and aie stories can sometimes be rushed but this was one of the most rushed i have seen in a while, with certain action or occurence being done with such a fast pace, that even an aie story had a slower pacing then it.
Lastly the timeline or order of events are very confusing since it just keeps flipping in between back and forth of events by showing them as memories or even as dreams, it slightly confused me and was only barely able to tell what is going on.
Edit: is it worth the read? Yes, if u enjoy fast aie based story since it was the vibe i got from this story.
Thank you for the feed back I’m not very good at writing and I want to get better so I figured what better way to receive it was from a website(not kidding or being sarcastic) I just wanted to get theses stories out of my brain so I can focus on other things really.