It's senior year and Fluttershy is worried about what the future may hold. She finds unexpected comfort in a certain apple farmer.
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Can't believe I'm giving this it's first like. Very well written and a nice take on their characters. Honestly, the only criticism I can give is that I wish there was more.
A good first story. You've got a good base here - honestly for your concerns about pacing and characterization, the greater sin is that you opened with that in your description. (Don't do that, it really sets a poor tone for the reader. If you're going to do it at all, put it in an author's note at the end or such. Let the reader make their own evaluation of the story.)
Definitely a good start to your time here, though. Welcome to the site.