Updated the story description with material covered. I'll admit, nothing overly fetishy at this point, but the story is building towards a variety of things
If these boys don't kiss, or at least rub their dicks together and say it's not gay before the end of it, my heart might break, though.
All the characters really shine and feel likeable and distinct, and extremely attractive. I'm really not often into such... positive sex experiences, but there's something magical about the tone you strike. Whisper's consistent playful embarassment and humiliation is really really hot even though it's very friendly and you can tell everypony cares about each other!!
The performers are given just enough detail to be idyllically attractive and tempting and exciting without being a distraction from our real cast, and, well. Just, good job, I'm hopeful for more soon. I wanna see this journey get messy in more ways than one.
10940999 Thank you so much for the kinds words and the glowing review, you made my day. I'm glad you liked it so much, and not to worry, I'll have more coming, hopefully soonish.
What are the fetishes shown?
10940903
Updated the story description with material covered. I'll admit, nothing overly fetishy at this point, but the story is building towards a variety of things
This is heaven.
If these boys don't kiss, or at least rub their dicks together and say it's not gay before the end of it, my heart might break, though.
All the characters really shine and feel likeable and distinct, and extremely attractive. I'm really not often into such... positive sex experiences, but there's something magical about the tone you strike. Whisper's consistent playful embarassment and humiliation is really really hot even though it's very friendly and you can tell everypony cares about each other!!
The performers are given just enough detail to be idyllically attractive and tempting and exciting without being a distraction from our real cast, and, well. Just, good job, I'm hopeful for more soon. I wanna see this journey get messy in more ways than one.
10940999
Thank you so much for the kinds words and the glowing review, you made my day. I'm glad you liked it so much, and not to worry, I'll have more coming, hopefully soonish.
Really well written story so far, especially the scene with Heart and Whisper alone.
10942014
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it