Kinda disappointed that hers was an inanimate TF, but that's just a me thing.
Not gonna lie, I kinda hope the transformations get reversed in the end, with the mental effects lingering after. It probably won't end that way, but I just wanted to throw that out there.
And even if the TFs are permanent, it's still a good story.
I even have an interesting idea for a Spitfire TF that could be an extra chapter if I could send it in
10964463 Thanks for sticking around even if it wasn't your ideal outcome! I've got the rest of the story planned out, but there's a lot of leeway for side stories.
Feel free to go with and write any ideas you have yourself with the same concept! I'm not likely to take any ideas for the remainder of this story at least. :P
My idea is that Spitfire comes to Ponyville to look for where Dash is for Wonderbolts practice, only for the Pixies to turn her into essentially a living toy bimbo version of Dash herself. Kinda similar to Dash's own TF, except she can still move around.
I do have possible ideas for other characters, but before I send any in, I'd like to know who else is getting changed in this main story
10964591 You can put them here if you want, I don't mind. I don't think anyone's really 'off-limits' with a TF, though obviously the younger characters wouldn't have sexual connotations.
10964852 Where has Discord been, anyway? This sort of thing has his grubby fingerprints all over it!
10965236 I just had to save Pinkie for last, since I enjoy writing her a lot and her chapter could be unpredictable as far as outcome! We'll see what the pixies have in store for her soon!
10965382 That does kinda change one thing I had in mind, but not by too much, fortunately.
As for the ideas I have: Apple Bloom gets turned into a literal apple Sweetie Belle gets turned into an actual dictionary (originally it was going to be of just sexual terms) Granny Smith gets turned into a young bombshell bimbo with no memory of her past as the Apple Family matriarch Big Mac, like I said when the AJ chapter was posted, gets anthropomorphized and memory wiped into thinking he's a cowboy with Bessie. Maybe even in a relationship with post TF Granny Smith. The other Pie sisters get turned into dildo shaped rocks that their former parents start using to get themselves off. Shining Armor gets turned into a young mare guard and a living toy for the others.
It was a fun chapter. But I rather expected something different for each chapter. I mean, wasn't becoming a toy is almost the same as what happened to Spike and Rarity?
10965472 A fair point, though I tried to spice things up with the shrinking and group sex. The bigger theme I was going for was each form being something the victim "wished for" in a way, and for all of Rainbow's bravado, I see her giving up control as a pet/sub.
10965566 What a twist! Truth is I just don't write Discord that often, and don't really enjoy writing his character personally. He probably won't make an appearance here.
Very nice chapter. Subby Dash is def the best dash, and I did enjoy this one quite a bit. I like that the focus here was slightly different from the previous chapter, helped it feel like not a rehash, though I do think it could have benefited from having like applejack between this chapter and spike's chapter just to break them up a bit. But yea very nice job overall, excited for the finale. :D
You see, with all of the havoc being caused in Ponyville far below, the weather ponies that normally handled newly-formed weather patterns were a little bit preoccupied in town. It was hard to do your job when you were rooted to the ground as a mailbox or slithering along as a snake, after all.
11376312 So far, none appear to have been reversed (and they're affecting more of Ponyville beside the Mane Six). No idea how it's gonna end TBH (only Pinkie's left, so she's most likely next, that's all we can reasonably expect).
Edit: Well, Twilight did manage to reverse hers in the latest chapter, so there's that.
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I didn't have the chapter ready last weekend, and have been working on it for a release this week. Hope you enjoy!
That was an interesting chapter.
Kinda disappointed that hers was an inanimate TF, but that's just a me thing.
Not gonna lie, I kinda hope the transformations get reversed in the end, with the mental effects lingering after. It probably won't end that way, but I just wanted to throw that out there.
And even if the TFs are permanent, it's still a good story.
I even have an interesting idea for a Spitfire TF that could be an extra chapter if I could send it in
10964463
Thanks for sticking around even if it wasn't your ideal outcome! I've got the rest of the story planned out, but there's a lot of leeway for side stories.
Feel free to go with and write any ideas you have yourself with the same concept! I'm not likely to take any ideas for the remainder of this story at least. :P
10964486
Alright.
My idea is that Spitfire comes to Ponyville to look for where Dash is for Wonderbolts practice, only for the Pixies to turn her into essentially a living toy bimbo version of Dash herself. Kinda similar to Dash's own TF, except she can still move around.
I do have possible ideas for other characters, but before I send any in, I'd like to know who else is getting changed in this main story
10964505
Just Pinkie, and then likely an Epilogue chapter. There might be a few other TFs mentioned in passing, but not focused on.
fives down one to go and that be all for this story right?
10964559
Alright.
Should I put my other ideas here or in PMs?
And are there any characters you won't do this kind of TF with or are they all fair game?
Breaking news: Actions have consequences. Let's just hope these pixies don't end up destroying Equestria.
Eh, if all else fails, Discord can undo this. (Though "can" and "will" are very different things.)
Pinkie the loving Pie. Eh no that won’t do it’s too obvious.
10964591
You can put them here if you want, I don't mind. I don't think anyone's really 'off-limits' with a TF, though obviously the younger characters wouldn't have sexual connotations.
10964852
Where has Discord been, anyway? This sort of thing has his grubby fingerprints all over it!
10965236
I just had to save Pinkie for last, since I enjoy writing her a lot and her chapter could be unpredictable as far as outcome! We'll see what the pixies have in store for her soon!
10965382
That does kinda change one thing I had in mind, but not by too much, fortunately.
As for the ideas I have:
Apple Bloom gets turned into a literal apple
Sweetie Belle gets turned into an actual dictionary (originally it was going to be of just sexual terms)
Granny Smith gets turned into a young bombshell bimbo with no memory of her past as the Apple Family matriarch
Big Mac, like I said when the AJ chapter was posted, gets anthropomorphized and memory wiped into thinking he's a cowboy with Bessie. Maybe even in a relationship with post TF Granny Smith.
The other Pie sisters get turned into dildo shaped rocks that their former parents start using to get themselves off.
Shining Armor gets turned into a young mare guard and a living toy for the others.
If I think of more later I'll post them
It was a fun chapter. But I rather expected something different for each chapter. I mean, wasn't becoming a toy is almost the same as what happened to Spike and Rarity?
10965382
Discord Thr author all along. Gasp we reading his fan fiction
10965472
A fair point, though I tried to spice things up with the shrinking and group sex. The bigger theme I was going for was each form being something the victim "wished for" in a way, and for all of Rainbow's bravado, I see her giving up control as a pet/sub.
10965566
What a twist! Truth is I just don't write Discord that often, and don't really enjoy writing his character personally. He probably won't make an appearance here.
Very nice chapter. Subby Dash is def the best dash, and I did enjoy this one quite a bit. I like that the focus here was slightly different from the previous chapter, helped it feel like not a rehash, though I do think it could have benefited from having like applejack between this chapter and spike's chapter just to break them up a bit. But yea very nice job overall, excited for the finale. :D
When the last two chapters going to be out?
So when is Pinkie Pie chapter going to be out?
Curious about that snake form.
So, I hate to ask, but it's been a whole year now and I was wondering if we could still expect to see the Pinkie chapter someday (hopefully) soon?
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So far, none appear to have been reversed (and they're affecting more of Ponyville beside the Mane Six). No idea how it's gonna end TBH (only Pinkie's left, so she's most likely next, that's all we can reasonably expect).
Edit: Well, Twilight did manage to reverse hers in the latest chapter, so there's that.