Dream Lover

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Undome Tinwe

Undome Tinwe #1 · May 27th, 2021 · 6 · ·

This is incredible. It's tender and sweet beyond words, and I found my own aching with a longing for what these two share. I am in awe at your writing, how absolutely natural everything feels, and this is the kind of romance I aspire to be able to write one day.

Drynwhyl

Drynwhyl #2 · May 27th, 2021 · 3 · ·

That was a very pretty little story. I liked it.

wishcometrue

wishcometrue #3 · May 27th, 2021 · 7 · ·

This story is great, Dawn. I think the thing that strikes me the most about it isn't how tender and sweet it is -- although it is both of those, to be sure -- but the sheer domesticity of it. It's something that is not explored nearly enough, and you did a great job of it here.

Also, the Advanced Kissing scene was fantastic.

The Red Parade

The Red Parade #4 · May 27th, 2021 · 6 · ·

Loved this! Your takes on both feel so new to me yet so natural at the same time, you handled both of them perfectly and I loved the way everything played out from one scene to the next. Fantastic work!

themoontonite

themoontonite #5 · May 27th, 2021 · 3 · ·

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:tears: thank u wish!!! domesticity is smthn i lack in my life so i wanted to write it here so i had smthn to live in for a little while .... im very happy u enjoyed it

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