Starlight is framed for a crime she didn't commit and now she is banished from Equestria, Twilight is trying to find proof she is innocent while Starlight slowly breaks more and more.
I am a big fan of Starlight Glimmer most of my stories center around her. I do crossovers as well.
Starlight is framed for a crime she didn't commit and now she is banished from Equestria, Twilight is trying to find proof she is innocent while Starlight slowly breaks more and more.
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10756269
Attacking a royal is serious though.
10756272
Lies. See the S5 end.
10756290
I'll be honest I totally forgot that for a moment, but Twilight didn't press charges so there's a difference there.
That actually pretty good reason.Starlight can clone her self that one episode.But the question is why would Starlight do it? Want make her assualt him?
And when do they find out that Starlight is innocent and it was Chryssy?
Pretty interesting so far.Keeping it a track
10756353
Thank you for the positive feedback.
Wait, why would blueblood want to frame her?
No it doesn’t.
That’s true, but is that the only evidence you have.
What the hell kinda trial is this?
At that moment, I’m ready to fight.
Spike, is you don’t set them on fire soon, you lose all my respect.
10756381
I do agree.Want kind of trail was that?! They settle it by voting?!
God dangit Celestia this is not Among us?!
10756392
No, it was worse than among us. At least in among us there would sometimes be evidence and the voting would last longer.
Don’t worry about them.
What about them? They can’t stop you.
I suggest not getting an attitude with someone that knows your location better than you. Just saying.
Great start really enjoyed the first two chapters I hope you will be able to update again soon
I don’t really see the point in sunset leaving the human world.
Thanks for the update I will be interested to see what Sunset is going to do. I hop you will update again soon.
10757750
I guess that's fair.
Don’t worry about them There buried in the backyard
10758193
The beginning of the story wasn’t that happy until I saw it was Chrysalis who framed Starlight Glimmer by doing that cloning version of her to make everypony think it was Starlight is the one behind this madness when it wasn’t even her.
Very sloppy. Too much at once and not enough build. Also, the fact that he had a mark and nothing else is not enough evidence to BANISH someone. Need a better reason unless Celestia/RD/AJ/Rarity are all Changelings. Even then it wouldn't make any sense.
Well, that’s one problem solved, but another one added.
Damn it. Seriously, AJ? You are the element of honesty and a pony that is loyal to her friends. No! Rainbow Dash?!
In truth, I never liked Rarity in the actual show but seriously, this is pretty low of her.
ayooooo dude chill
10758193
damn. well done, how did you manage that?
Oh, okay. So chrysie was the one who cloned Starlight, makes sense now.
Also, are you still going to continue on this?
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Yes
Kind of surprised Chrysalis didn't go "Ok wow, I know my plan would work but this easily? How the hell did these ponies lasted this long if they were like this??". Like even she is baffled by how the others are acting.
When Sunset was talking with the other girls, where was human-world Spike?
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At his home.
10775122
Yeah that was a missed opportunity on my part.
10775239
Why did they left him behind like that from something that important?
10775298
Because he's still a dog.
10775304
That really doesn't justify the girls excluding him behind like that.
Really this adds fuel to the issue of Spike being a dog in EQG shows he isn't allowed to be equals with the girls.
In fact them leaving Spike out shows Sci-Twi essentially tossed him aside due to she has actual friends now.
She was willing to bring him to Crystal Prep despite risking her education(which she was really obsessed with) since he was the closest thing to a friend to her. And yet now she has actual friends, she is less willing to bring him with her.
10775315
Oof I get your point now I hate how he's a dog too, also how is the story so far?
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Its getting pretty interesting I say.
So she committed arson murder and jaywalking, but got punished for an act of jaywalking she didn’t even do? Satisfying either way.
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She didn't commit murder. Those timelines don't exist anymore.
10775395
Sure they don’t. Like that excuse even matters.
Those three are hard heads. When they see that Starlight was innocent, they will want to be friends again. I hope not.
So they basically came to the castle to start sh*t? Petty a** b*tches.
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Hope so too. As Punishment for their betrayal, and f***** up rude attitudes for trying to start petty fights and all.
They will be sorry for what they did
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I’m the type of person that’s ready to fight. So if they want a fight, then I’d give them one.
Part of me wants both Twilight and Sunset to chew Celestia out.
When will the next chapter be out
And you didn’t say anything?
A tad? I don’t even think it was an hour.
Why is she going to ponyville?
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You’ll see in the next chapter.
Weak
I’ll admit that I’m petty, but I’m not that petty.
They got mopped.
10881022
Well, it’s kind of their thing.
I still wanna see more but im not trying to rush you cause like you have a bunch of other stories aswell
Though i would like this to get updated! :)
10890415
Yeah I have other stories to work on as well as this one so how was the chapter?
10890460
I liked them
Even though my favorite character was banished it was i gud book :>
I was wondering when this would update.