After Everfree, everything was fine between Flash Sentry and Sunset Shimmer, well, more or less. They were starting over as friends right? So why do they feel like they want something more? Flash and Sunset are very lucky to finally get some helpful advice by the most unexpected people, and dragon’s.
So far so good
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Thanks, I will go edit my other story when I have time.
YES I'M ONLY ONE WHO HAS THAT HEADCANNON
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Man I have had that idea in my head a long time, glad to know I’m not the only one!
Flash was quite a bitch in that one scene in the film causing Princess Twilight to cry which was sad
That was awesome! The story's great! The only tiny little nitpick I have is the spelling errors. There are moments throughout the story where "Yeah" is spelled as "Yhea", and "Morning" as "Mourning", and "come on" as "common", and quite a few more. This is a pretty small nitpick, and it doesn't take away much from the story, but I'd suggest you work on that a bit. Other than that, solid story!
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Thank you, I'll go through and fix it, glad you are enjoying my story!
Well, that escalated quickly... I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Enjoyed this one a lot
Annnd pinkie just broke the fourth wall.
Despite this was a bit short with not many longs chapters I enjoyed it
And, that, was amazing...
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and he was a bitch when he insulted Sunset
Awww
Dawww sunny
Hell nah, tricked with a– nevermind