Wow.. Just.. wow.. I didn't found much time for reading fimfics for a long while, and I forgot how great it was.
After the first scene in Chapter 1, it all felt like a childhood daydream. The BEST daydream of all. Just to say, I wasn't a Dash fan before, I just liked her like any other pony. But this fic made me really "like her - like her".
I didn't get a thing: How did Dashie manage to suddenly love a pony instantly after a kiss and a share of emtions? And share the same ones as "me". Or maybe she did had a crush on "me" before.. but still, "I" would have noticed XD .Or maybe she didn't want "me" to notice? ..but afterall, if she did had a crush, why did she acted so surprised when she found out about "my" feelings for her? And, of all the ponies in Equestria, why "me"? ..anyway that's not really important ^^; . I really liked her romantic way of beeing. Like only Rainbow Dash could be. It totally fit her character. (funny how I just noticed "totally" is something she would say - I actually said that with her voice in my mind and it felt so sweet >w< )
I was kind of expecting this to be a clopfic.. and I didn't wanted any sex scenes at first.. but after reading it all, that scene kind of completed the story. - Not that I don't like clopfics; in fact I am truly a fan of them. But I didn't want it to ruin my Rainbow Dash moment. Because you made me love her. You made me truly love her. And I wanted it to be the most romantic as it could.
I kept 'daydreaming' few minutes after I finished reading the fic ( though it's 3 AM - IDK if you can call it a DAYdream ^^; ) and in the end it felt like it was all too short. And my "Rainbow Dash moment" had gone. I'm not impying the fic should have been longer.. I just wanted it to last forever. I never felt like that before, not even about my first love. (now I'm feeling uncomfortable about posting this comment)
I think I'm gonna read it again. Right now! And read it slowly this time. And take as much as I can of it. <3
And besides the things said on the last line of the fic, I think I also have a fetish for the name Rookie. (because after all that, I wouldn't even thought about or want Dashie to call me by my real name. I liked it from the beginning. Because it was said by her.)
1016114 Thanks, I love it when my fics have big impacts! Looking back, I found it a little short as well, which is why I made a sequel later on (check out the other stories too, there's hints of Dash and "Rookie" throughout some of them).
1875641 Easy you just Jump off a reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally high cloud and try to go without Flapping your wings before you hit the ground or before the other person/pony/Creature with wing blehh
Lots o daaw in here.
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Shouldn't OC be in the character's list? Or does that not apply for second-pony stories?
But anyway, I'm looking forward to the rest of this!
at least you gave 'me' a nickname (Rookie)
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The unknown black pony is any oc in the character list, bar, thing
I suck at Freefall Chicken :L
Awwww
Activate d'aawww overdrive.
Wait"Rookie"...gamesprays.com/files/resource_media/preview/mother-of-celestia-6281_preview.png He's crossing his stories!!
515919is that supposed to be a reference off of GhostBusters:The Video game as in "He's crossing the streams"?
this was awesome. have a moustache
This reads a lot like a eroge...
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
awwwww
Wow.. Just.. wow..
I didn't found much time for reading fimfics for a long while, and I forgot how great it was.
After the first scene in Chapter 1, it all felt like a childhood daydream. The BEST daydream of all. Just to say, I wasn't a Dash fan before, I just liked her like any other pony. But this fic made me really "like her - like her".
I didn't get a thing: How did Dashie manage to suddenly love a pony instantly after a kiss and a share of emtions? And share the same ones as "me". Or maybe she did had a crush on "me" before.. but still, "I" would have noticed XD .Or maybe she didn't want "me" to notice? ..but afterall, if she did had a crush, why did she acted so surprised when she found out about "my" feelings for her? And, of all the ponies in Equestria, why "me"?
..anyway that's not really important ^^; . I really liked her romantic way of beeing. Like only Rainbow Dash could be. It totally fit her character. (funny how I just noticed "totally" is something she would say - I actually said that with her voice in my mind and it felt so sweet >w< )
I was kind of expecting this to be a clopfic.. and I didn't wanted any sex scenes at first.. but after reading it all, that scene kind of completed the story. - Not that I don't like clopfics; in fact I am truly a fan of them. But I didn't want it to ruin my Rainbow Dash moment. Because you made me love her. You made me truly love her. And I wanted it to be the most romantic as it could.
I kept 'daydreaming' few minutes after I finished reading the fic ( though it's 3 AM - IDK if you can call it a DAYdream ^^; ) and in the end it felt like it was all too short. And my "Rainbow Dash moment" had gone. I'm not impying the fic should have been longer.. I just wanted it to last forever. I never felt like that before, not even about my first love. (now I'm feeling uncomfortable about posting this comment)
I think I'm gonna read it again. Right now! And read it slowly this time. And take as much as I can of it. <3
And besides the things said on the last line of the fic, I think I also have a fetish for the name Rookie. (because after all that, I wouldn't even thought about or want Dashie to call me by my real name. I liked it from the beginning. Because it was said by her.)
oh.. and, are we gonna have babies? O_0
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Thanks, I love it when my fics have big impacts!
Looking back, I found it a little short as well, which is why I made a sequel later on (check out the other stories too, there's hints of Dash and "Rookie" throughout some of them).
Freefall Chicken????
How could you just drop off a cloud??
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It's not a Scootabuse fic, I promise!
1875641 Easy you just Jump off a reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally high cloud and try to go without Flapping your wings before you hit the ground or before the other person/pony/Creature with wing blehh
Don't play that game with a dragon, we can hit the ground and live. ;)
Fuck iiit hit the ground I don't care
After looking at the pictures, I feel like I was just as stunned as the stallion. (Sigh)
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Without the pinkie emoji it literally reminded me of pinkie