The new human professor at Canterlot University has caught the eye of the returned Night Princess, a friendship and some feelings blossoming. But, something seems off, as if he's hiding something from her. She intends to find out what.
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My only nitpick is that Arles is a girls name both in Germany and where I live. Maybe it's different where you are from. Otherwise, this was a pretty good chapter!
-Schwabauer
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Really? I didn't know. I thought Arles was a boys name that kind of fell out of use, so I figured it would fit! Interesting
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It would still work, as my Great Grandpa was named Jean so that it looked like he was a girl on paper. His parent's were obsessed with the number of boys and girl being even in the family. Something similar would have been feasible.
"Nah, I want to be a medic like my dad in World War 1..."
Most during this point in the war still called it, "The great War", or "The Second Great War". It wasn't until it ended did it become common for people to call it WW2.
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I didn't notice that, but that would make much more sense! Thank you for pointing that out!
Canton! Wow, at first I imagined him to have something of a slight Louisiana drawl, but now I’ve got a much better idea. I grew up close to Hopkinsville, so seeing Canton in a story was a pleasant surprise for me! You’re also building the tension leading up to him recalling combat amazingly.
A Kentucky medic? That’s me!
Except I didn’t join the navy11121268
68W for the win
The Pacific reference. Nice.
Also, did they call it Basic Training? Cause last I heard, they always called it Boot Camp for Marine Corps and Navy whereas Basic Training is for Army (and later Air Force).
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You know, I was waiting for someone to notice the reference! As for the basic training thing, I wasn't really sure, so I just went with that. I couldn't get a definite answer from my research