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Hydreigon_Omega


I'm a universe hopping, goofy, pony loving dragon.

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Mael had always been a valuable asset to the holy war, even before he became an archangel. With his elder brother, Ludociel, being signed in as Stigma's new leader after his parents were killed in battle, Mael became one of the main targets of the demon race and ones who opposed stigma's ideologies. Ludociel loved his brother more than his own life, he didn't want Mael to grow up with the trauma's of the holy war, and being so active in the war, Ludociel wasn't home much for his little brother, and when he was he was usually to tired to care for him. Knowing that this life would bring a bad upbringing for his little brother, Ludociel and his two closest friends, Sariel and Tarmiel, who were not yet archangels, used a spell in secret to banish Mael from this world so he wouldn't have to grow up in war.


Meanwhile, in a parallel world, one of peace and little strife. A ruler of a great nation was mourning for her sister in her garden. Celestia knew that her sister wouldn't return for a long time and only had one wish, for someone to fill the void in her heart that appeared when she banished her sister, when she found a small alicorn colt who had 4 wings.


Other info:
Rated T for mentions of war through the story.
Cover art is Mine, I finally made some cover art, I also posted it on Derpibooru
~370 years before the main story.
Mael is about 4 years old at the beginning
Ludociel is about 19-20 years old
My first attempt at a 'Momlestia' fanfic.
Most importantly, contains a ponified member of the goddess race.

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Chapters (12)
Comments ( 43 )

This story getting interesting

Awesome start! Can't wait to see more!:twilightsmile::heart:

Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal

Oh I am so into this idea. :raritystarry: Please continue.

By the Supreme Deity! This is too cute! :rainbowkiss: I can't take it!

Sorry about this but I didn't notice until after I put the chapter number in that I put it in wrong. I fixed the chapter title

I love this so much! It's so cute! :fluttercry:
I wonder what the Archmage will discover about Maels magic, perhaps there are a race of angel like being in Equestria somewhere? :rainbowhuh:

The plushie is named Estarossa...ok wasn't expecting that but that's actually really cool
Also will Mael get Sunshine and what time period is this? Sometime after Luna was banished to the moon or soon before Twilight enters the school?

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Some-what heavy manga spoilers if you have read the anime, but
Estarossa was originally a dog's name, so I just named the plushie after the dog.

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Must have missed that part

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I didn't see the second part of your comment, so sorry for the late answer.
He will not obtain his grace, sun, during this story, but he'll have it in possible sequel.
I probably won't write Twilight or Luna, unless it is flashbacks or future visions, in this story because it takes place about 370 before the main story line of MLP FIM.

By Faust! I love story so much! :raritycry:

What is this a crossover of?

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Seven deadly sins, Season 4 in the anime, or season 5 on Netflix,
Mael kinda is a MASSIVE spoiler character so if you plan on watching the anime or reading the manga, don't look him up on the wiki.
You can read the manga for free here Seven deadly sins/Nanatsu no Taizai, there should be a button near the top the instantly sends you to chapter 1.

So this is interesting. It can also have a good big impact for the future. I’ll be interested to see where this will be going.

Wow! I did not expect that!:rainbowderp: I sort of forgot that this story plays like 1000 years in the past. I wonder what sort of impact this little friendship will have in the future. :raritystarry: :applejackunsure:

Ludociel was crying, something was (right) because Mael had never seen Ludociel cry before today.

Something was wrong?

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Fixed. Sometimes I write so fast the I forgot parts of their words meaning entirely.
But thanks for pointing that out, and I hope you enjoy the rest of my story.

Never seen the actual source that Mael and them are based on but Tis enjoyable story none the less and I can’t wait to see more wonder how your going to bring chryssi into the light as I said can’t wait to see more keep up the awesome work!

This is reminding me alot of Daughter of Discord, just the situation of two important children, one being a changling, in young love.

Oh no, I have a bad feeling. :fluttershysad:

Hmm, wonder who Archmage contacted?

Next chapter update this story is good

God damn, you actuelly made me cry. :fluttercry: Can't wait for the sequel. :pinkiehappy: All the possible things that might happen when Mael returns. Reuniting with not only Celestia but also Chrysalis and meeting Luna and the others. Telling them about the good and the bad that happened during the Holy War.
But I am wondering, who was Archmage? Ludociel seemed to know him.

Fuck ya I love this story wooh hoo :pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

Second story i followed from start to finish! And it was amazing!

there will be a new story explaining mael return and what happened and what happens next like with twilight and the others ????????

What a great way to finish this, I had a feeling at the end that Archmage was Gowther but didn't want to say anything. Now on to the sequal. :pinkiehappy:

oooooohhhhh chrissy is going to be ticked

Interesting start. Some weirdly worded parts here and there, but not bad.

Oh dang
I hope it’s just volunteers who is willing to do the test

Oooh man
That was intense

Dang that was a good fanfiction

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I am glad you liked it! I hope I can make the sequel just as good.

Does Mael really have "normal" parents? I thought the Supreme Deity created the Four Archangels herself. ...I only saw the anime, OK?!

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Yes, I believe he did have biological parents. It just doesn't make sense to me that if the surpreme diety had made him, then why not create him at his prime and leave him there. Also Elizabeth possesses memories of Mael as a child/preteen.

what a twist, this story was great from start to finish. I shall wait for the completion of the sequel.(but that doesn't mean i won't read it)

I’ve finally finished this story and I must say, Tis was an interesting read. Onto the sequel!

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