Starlight develops a vendetta against the pony who liberated her village, making her find a spell that will help bend the princess to her desires.
This was a pretty hot start.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Then the princess become her stepford wives.
Purple unicorn syndrome aside, this is off to a very promising start. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Starlight falling in love with one of her victims is an interesting twist on a well trod concept.
For a moment I thought she'd brainwashed Twilight to think she was the maid at the start.
Fun I take it she will pass as the maid and start to infiltrate the staff and subjugating the before getting up the food chain.
Fun start! Wish it were a little more mind control-ey, but that's just me. I think you're really onto something here though, looking forward to more!
Really looking forward to see and read more, promising start.
Oh yay another story where Starlight is a sexual predator because those are always fun.
This was a pretty hot start.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Then the princess become her stepford wives.
Purple unicorn syndrome aside, this is off to a very promising start. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Starlight falling in love with one of her victims is an interesting twist on a well trod concept.
For a moment I thought she'd brainwashed Twilight to think she was the maid at the start.
Fun I take it she will pass as the maid and start to infiltrate the staff and subjugating the before getting up the food chain.
Fun start! Wish it were a little more mind control-ey, but that's just me. I think you're really onto something here though, looking forward to more!
Really looking forward to see and read more, promising start.
Oh yay another story where Starlight is a sexual predator because those are always fun.