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A simple holiday gift exchange between friends becomes the perfect place for a rather tender moment between Applejack an Adagio


This was a Breezie Story written for Rune Soldier Dan as a part of Jinglemas 2020! For more information about Jinglemas, checkout our group!

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Applejack chose… wisely

So, if she chose wisely... you're saying I shouldn't drink from this one? But it's so pretty :raritydespair:

Nah, joking aside, definitely a cutesie ship--one I'd entirely forgotten about tbh, but this was a nice go at it! I love their dynamic together, not something I was expecting. Literally the perfect couple, like, inna cute-what-the-fuck-how-work kinda way. Definitely a good entry, Priesty-boy!

“Nope. Ah’m evil now. Deal with it.”

That line had me make a sound that i can only describe as a squee-laugh.

Well done.

“Everything you can imagine is real.” happy wheels"

Sorry, I don't meant to nitpick but,

the hushed whispers

Shouldn't it be whisper since it's only one thought. Then again, it could work as a plural words, but shouldn't it then be "These were the hushed whispers".

Overall, great story! Never thought of this ship before, but now that I have, I think it can sail just fine.

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good catch. not many prereaders would have caught that.

I changed it to the hushed whisper

“Nope. Ah’m evil now. Deal with it.”

This is adorable.:rainbowkiss:

A very cute take on my crackship of choice, thank you very much for it. :heart:

(Oh I’m sorta nervous to actually comment on something I like--) Uh, I really liked this as I somewhat ship Appledagio-, you really nailed the dynamic between them if they were dating! It’s really cute- (AAAA-)

God I love Appledagio, and there's never enough of it.

“But haven’t they been dating for… three months now? Do you think they’re really going to last?” Rarity asked.

Imo rarity I'm not sure if they will or not tbh.

Sunset then spat the entirety of said gulp over Rainbow in a spiced cranberry fountain.

That's what you get for asking if it was hot. :ajsmug:

Sunset rose a finger to respond, but Pinkie had somehow picked up Sunset and pushed her across the floor to the pile of presents, face first.

Oofity that must of hurt. 😬

“I’ve still got a whole closet full of them,” Sunset said to Adagio. “It’s crazy the things you keep around after you go from evil to trying to be good.”

How many does she even have?!?!?

“Sorry!” She said hastily. “I just. Uhm. Thought. Of… something shocking.”

For a second there I thought she screamed because her dress got ruined, but nope. :ajbemused:

White Elephant exchanges are always exciting, and seeing the sirens partake in small, everyday things makes for great stories too. That said, I thought this would be about pony AJ being shipped with Adagio due to the character tags, not the EqG counterpart.

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