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Damn. I wasn't prepared for this today.

I think there was a point in Chapter 2 where you accidentally wrote "Christmas", but other than that extremely minor nitpick, (EDIT: It's been fixed!)

This was a very well-written story! Kudos!

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Oh no, I'm gonna go find that

Edit: Fixed!

This was a very emotional piece. Thank you very much and Merry Jinglemas!

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You're welcome, and you too!

Definitely a pretty good concept, but it feels a bit rushed.

Not sure if that's due to how the chapters are split up, or if the story itself needed to be longer

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It was sort of rushed. I was trying write quickly and late at night, but I would argue it's one of my better and more emotional pieces.

oh no! What happened to Rainbow Dash!
even though this is a short chapter, I still think it's still really good and has a good amount of detail.
Can't wait to read more! :pinkiehappy:

Hello,writer! I'm a Chinese.I want to translate these articles in Chinese.
Can I do this?

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Thanks!!! I really appreciate it, I actually forgot I added my story to be reviewed haha :twilightblush:

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