Man they are some lucky students, getting some before all their classmates(I’m assuming)

His smell was different than a ponies

Wouldn't it be "different than ponies"?

“you can I get a little extra credit ?”

wut?

she’d be left to wile away her time without being bothered

while

for ravishing the moist and taught Trixie’s marehood.”

I think you want "taut" here

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I think "different than a pony's"