Chapter 1: How it all began.
Sunset POV
“I was born to Sunbeam and Nightshine Shimmer in the magical land of Equestria. I was the eldest of 3 triplets. There was me, Nightstar and your uncle, Sunburst. Equestria was filled with multi-coloured ponies. My mother died when we were 7, my father died just days later of a broken heart. We were orphans. By then, we had all gone off to Celestia’s School for Gifted Unicorns and Princess Celestia adopted me and my brothers. I was an arrogant little bitch at that time, sorry, Flutters, and I demanded that I should become a princess. So I ran away into this world. In Equestria, I was 24. Here, I was 14. I wanted to prove myself that I was worthy and I stole the element of magic. Princess Twilight Sparkle, Sci-Twi’s counterpart came after me and made friends with these 5 great girls. Sci-Twi and I weren’t part of the group then. I then turned into a raging she-demon and they stopped me and I became friends with them.”
“It’s true,” said Flash. “She turned me and other students into zombies to try and take over Equestria.”
“Don’t remind me,” I groaned “Anyway, it’s school tomorrow. How about we tell you all the next part after school?”
“Sounds like a plan,” said Rainbow Dash. “Same time, same place?”
Nods went around the room.
“See ya!” called Pinkie Pie, exiting the room with Lil’ Cheese. “BYE!”
I sighed. “Flash, I’m sorry, okay? I’m so sorry…”
Hmmm, not sure what to feel when reading this. Although the waiting game till it's finished. So far this fiction is about 4/10 for me personally. However, more chapters might change the future of this fiction if it's done well.
Haven't read this yet, only noticed it on the 'New Stories' feed. Speaking of noticing... I can't help but feel a mild, primal fear from observing the cover art. Pinkie is hovering... her power is too great!!!
I am confused.
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I’m writing another few chapter today but basically the plot is Equestria Girls with a few extras. Just the main franchise, no shorts.
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Pinkie is just overexcited