If I can be completely honest, this hurts my eyes to read. I liked the concept (reason why I read it) but the grammar and relative storyline was lacking in refinement. There was inconsistencies in the plot. Please have a secondary source look over any drafts before you upload them.
If I can be completely honest, this hurts my eyes to read. I liked the concept (reason why I read it) but the grammar and relative storyline was lacking in refinement. There was inconsistencies in the plot. Please have a secondary source look over any drafts before you upload them.