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Luna was raised in the shadow that Celestia cast. That was ok, she really didn't mind at first. Slowly, over the years the light got brighter and the shadow longer. Until, it all became too much.
For the quills and sofas speedwriting theme: a final dream. It had to involve Luna.
In the sandbox 9/29/20. Thanks!
Featured! 9/30 - 10/01 *excited* thanks :3
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This was really nice to read.
10457661
thank you very much <3 that means a lot!
10458502
I'm not sure who patton is but thank your for the comment.
10458947
unfortunately, I always have a hard time finding one. I'll submit it to a few groups and hope for the best.
There are always two sides to the story; that's my lesson taken from this.
10459654
thank you that was the attempt! ^u^
Two broken souls, who Both got screwed over dEStInY... And lousy parents I think... Good read.
I think this is the first story where I couldn't imagine the sisters as alicorns in their older years. Thats alone says a lot.
10459770
Thank you very much!
10459963
Thank you very much (I think this is a good thing?)
Wow! This was so amazing. I especially loved how one chapter was from Luna's point of view and one was Celestia's point of view. It was really interesting to see how each saw the same events so differently and at the same time so alike. You have a real talent for this and one Tartarus of an imagination to help that talent. I'm definitely putting this on my Favorites bookshelf.
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Thank you ^///^ for all your kind word it means a lot and your making me blush. I'm really glad you enjoyed my story. I hardly ever write tragedies and it was hard to do something different. thank you for the fav :)
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I do proofreading for friends and when I see a good story I always acknowledge it for a good story.
It's definitely a lot better than I could do... I'm pretty sure I'd be in violation of the Geneva Conventions if I were to try my hoof at writing
10460503
Wow, u sound like a good friend then. Thank you super much ^u^
*giggles* you never know. I wasnt good at this at first. Practice does wonders! *hugs*
10460017
Alicorns are usually known to be incredibly powerful leaders of ponykind. Something to be respected whether through fear or admiration. Other stories have tried this sort of angle before plenty of times. But for some reason I cant put my finger on this seems more authentic somehow.
10461468
Ah! I see what you mean now ! Thank you for your kind words ^//^ I'm glad it seemed authentic! I tried my butter best so thank you.
This was good. Nice short story.
10471554
thank you!
10458502
Patton was also a glory hound that had to be bailed out constantly.
As for the story, good read but it’s going to fly over most people’s heads.
10478075
Thank you glad you enjoyed the read.
Hello, I've done a review for your story over on My Little Reviews & Feedback. Great story and hope you find the feedback helpful.
10514013
oh thank you! I'll go check it right now! Thanks so much!
The problem was she never chose to honest to anyone about her feelings and Luna being shoved to the side to point where nobody acted like they cared. Celestia should have stood up herself even if was hard. So the people realize that she is a pony like them.