Older sister of Princess Cadance. Princess of a far away land. To find more about me, see my story in "Princess Skyla's Backstory"
Dash is very excited in the morning. Her brother is coming back after missing for 10 years. However, some of her new friends seem to know him already. Rainbow Dash also learns more about their past. She knew she was a descendant of somepony very important. But she never knew her other ancestor.
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This has potential. Proofread, proofread, and PROOFREAD.
Also there's a little too much happening in too short of a time. I used to make the same mistake. I just skipped the details and went straight into the action. It was fun to write but nobody found it fun to read. Flesh it out a bit. Give it life.
It takes time but it's worth it in the end. You're off to a good start though, I've written worse.
Forgive me. I was a bit in a rush since I wrote this at night just before sleep
I really like the concept of the story. I hope you go further into detail on his imprisonment though.
Great chapter, im interested to see what will happen next. Also kinda hopin this doesnt get left half finished or cancelled.
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Oh, I will. You have to be patient, though.
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Ofc! I never discontinue my stories.
It's good to hear you don't discontinue your stories, also no need to rush just take your time
. Bad or good, i'm not one to judge, i just like reading what peaks my interest.
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Thx!
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The next part might take a while since when I write my stories, there's always a little flashback of the prologue so that you won't have to remember what happened before.
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Of Course! It's just that I have school so I rarely update on week days. But maybe I'll update tonight.
Okay so... blitz is the ruler of the pegasus tribe. Which in show cannon doesn't even exist. I mean it did, but the three tribe united to form equestria. But I guess even if it didn't come with any authority, it could still be a respected title. But with blitz gone and no sign of Rainbow and Blitz not being blood related, wouldn't the title go to Rainbow? I mean I know they knew Blitz was alive, but if this title hold any importance, someone has to have it and if Blitz can't in his absence Rainbow should have been considered the leader. And if the holder of this title is a well known person than it stands to most people would have known that. Also even if they didn't, with their name, and appearance both being very similar didn't it occur to anyone that she might have been his brother?
Also was Blitz a Wonderbolt or not? Because he sure is friend with a lot of them.
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About Rainbow being the leader, since now Equestria is ruled by Celestia and Luna, there is no need of a leader. And ever since Blitz disappeared, they decided to not talk too much about it, as well as hide their identities if they want to. And plus, they're just admired at most. Which is why after ten years, no one talks much about it.
About the Wonderbolts knowing about Blitz is that as Wonder bolts, they know much about The Pegasi Tribe's history. And Blitz also pulled a rainbow lightning bolt. Which made him sort of known by people. The people he knew was Soarin, Fleet foot and Spitfire, who were his friends since childhood. And Blitz disappeared at the age of 15. Too young to be a Wonderbolt.
And the similarities. Just because two ponies have similar appearance doesn't mean they are related. So ponies just didn't assume they were siblings. Like Twilight and Starlight, they look similar but are not siblings.
More details about their family will be revealed on the next chapter so stay tuned!