Where did this feeling come from?

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Well duh!

Also This:

"The idea of you thinking you can beat me in single combat," He said as Celestia growled as she pointed to him.

"Like you can beat me! Your a child compared to me when it comes to combat! I'm over 20,000 years old and fought in over 100 wars! I control the sun and its power flows through me! You are nothing compared to me!" She said as he turned to her.

"And how many battles did you lead? How many battles did your troops need to fight while you rest behind in a gated fortress?" Alex asked as she snarled.

Hahahahahahaahahhaahahahahahaha!!!!!! Sun Bitch PLEASE!!!!! The God Emperor of Mankind will KILL you with only 5% to even 1% of his Full Power. And You WON'T LAST 1 Millisecond against the Four Chaos Gods.

"I guess it's fine just don't do it again," She said as Alexander rose.

Please, that is VERY DOUBTFUL, with the Sun Bitch messing with the Space Marine.

Anyway, WTF is Celestia's PROBLEM!!!! I hope she is Dethrone for her Stupidity and Arrogance!!

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So he’s a warbeast huh? Kinda wished that was said before but whatever. It does feel a bit rushed but still good

Wait a moment did that description just say FUCKIN TAU MARINE

edit: also why does a comment posted on the home page? get posted on the last chapter?

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hmm I see so that is where your loyalties lie

Alexander smiled as he turned to Alexander who smiled down at her and nodded.

Someone found the mirror pool already

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WHAT'S that supposed to mean? I just like BOTH the Imperium Of Men, and the 4/5 Chaos Gods with their Chaos Space Marines. And like the Xeno Races/Fractions of the Orks, Necrons, Tyranids, Tau. And Sometimes the Eldar/Dark Eldar.

P.S. I'm use the Nightmode 99.5% of the time. So, I can't see the Black Colored Words, until I highlighted it.

Nuke

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hmm indeed this will be fun

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Dude! You still Colored your words in Black. I CAN'T see it properly! But, what do you MEAN: "This will be Fun".

Are you with Khrone? Tzeench? Nurgle? Slaanesh? Or even Malal/Malice??!!

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none of these forces control me this is of my own will blood marine

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You mean your a Blood Angel or a Blood Raven?

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blood raven

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I'm the same man.

If I was in our armored friend's position, i would have been like "If I am such a threat because of my power, yet you claim to be able to defeat me in single combat, should you not off yourself? You are clearly too dangerous and 'a threat to all.'"

As for the story itself, I do think that this is a bit rushed but its still very good. If the author would like, it could be added to later and that would be nice but definitely a thumbs up from me

Alexander smiled as he turned to Alexander who smiled down at her and nodded.

What

So I'm guessing the fact he's something I've never heard of before and not either a Space Marine or some sort of buff Tau, makes me guess this is an original character?

Zero suit Alexander

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When she says the he's a threat to all living things its that she doesn't want to have another individual more powerful than her.

celestia's a bitch