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Jedi Master Derpy Hooves embarks on what could be the biggest mission the Baker's Batch and the 197th Battalion have ever faced. The key capital of the Storm King's main control center has been located, and capturing it could make the turning point for the war. Unbeknownst to Derpy, a sinister threat awakens elsewhere in the galaxy, and everything will change forever....
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This looks like a nice start to me for a Clone Wars story. Really getting the feeling that we're gonna be heading into the final, catastrophic moments of the war soon. Hoo boy... can't wait to see how this will play out, Four!
Wow. This was a busy chapter for sure! I quite enjoyed the brothers' little "chat" so to speak, with the Storm King. Poor Bolt though... and poor Derpy, because I have a pretty good idea of what that's gonna lead into...
On a lighter note, Derpy's clone armor was a real joy.
I really had fun with her and the troopers going into battle, that was fun!
We seem to end on a good note for now, but I know that this is just the calm before the *real* catastrophe strikes...
Oh damn. That cliffhanger you dropped on us was *evil*.
Hell of a finale to this story, Four. Nicely done. Very nicely done.
Rest in peace, boys.
Excellent chapter. I was loving the battle scenes all the way through. Short, but still full of vivid detail and action. And we got to meet the Storm King, even if it was only for the briefest of times. I've always liked his manic, casual personality and the Robot Chicken lines you snuck in there fit naturally for him. Now they've got the brothers captured and Tempest is in search of an assassin who I have a pretty good guess as to the identity.
Great work and I'll be getting to the next chapter ASAP.
Wow, and now it begins. If I haven't said it before, Derpy was an interesting choice for the lead and it fits amazingly somehow. You write her in a way that is cute, goofy and endearing all at the same time and it really works.
Also, maybe it's the Fallout fan in me but Nevarro sounds like Navarro, one of the Enclave's last holdouts in Fallout 2.
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Aww, thank you
Nice!
¿And what happend with Anakin Skywalker?
He's not on the Dark Side?