Cars are still parked outside. If the rapture had happened, why was it unrecognizable? Why was the sky blue? Why did no one tell me? Do these things not announce themselves?
Octavia might know that she's dreaming, but that doesn't make dealing with this any easier. (CW: references to suicide attempts and minor blood.)
Originally a Sofas and Quills Speedwriting entry that underwent substantial expansions and revisions. Read during the contest by Vis-a-Viscera , Nailah , HapHazred and Koren.
Second version proof-read with additional feedback from Vis-a-Viscera , wishcometrue, Silent Whisper, LegendaryBillCipher, and Seer. Thanks y'all!
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Really just utterly stunning stuff here mate, one of your strongest offerings to date.
The way your writing can switch so effortlessly between painfully tangible and ethereal and dreamlike is marvellous to behold, and it takes this fic to another level
Simply put, you smashed it :)
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I can't write a better comment than Seer can, and he usually gets to commenting on stories before I do, so...
This was amazing, I was so hyped to be able to read it, I'm still hyped to be able to read it, it made me feel things, your writing style reads like someone dunked poetry in reality like one would cookies and tea... etc. Remind me to write a better comment when I'm more awake.
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go to sleep Silent
thanks for reading ^^
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Your stories with these two are always my favorites! I always find myself wanting to know the next step in their continuity.
Dude, just the description and choice of cover art are really resonating with a part of me.
And not a very positive one either.