Between A Rock and A Hard Place

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Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #1 · Aug 9th, 2020 · 3 · ·

Am a slight bit confused about why Starlight's journey makes front-page when the main dynamic is between Sunburst and Pharynx?

Regardless, every bit of the story inside is a damn treat, and I loved seeing how it unraveled.

Especially in the following part.

“Oh, well ummmm…” Sunburst ended up glancing away from Pharynx with a more embarrassed blush, and shrugged his shoulders sheepishly. “I was mostly trying to learn about how… how well changelings can sense arousal from others. Which I know is different from attraction or love,” he was quick to clarify, “but still, I… I was hoping to learn those details for a romance novel I was working on.”

“Wait, a romance novel?” Pharynx looked the stallion up and down for a moment. “Huh… And here I was thinking you were doing scientific research or something.”
“Hey, at least I’m not writing porn!” After making that point, Sunburst waited a few seconds before adding hesitantly, “I mean… The money would probably be better, but I work in a school now, so…”

1) Sure got meta up in here
2) That double space wasn't for effect, it's in the story too, if you wish to fix it.
3) Goodness, someone give Sunburst a raise. ~~No, not in that way, Pharynx~~

So I have this to say. Great story, great interactions, and thank you for another Patreon-fundedly fantastic FIMFic.

TheVClaw

TheVClaw #2 · Aug 9th, 2020 · · ·

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Thanks for the kind words! And I fixed that space too. :)

Shrinky Frod

Shrinky Frod #3 · Aug 9th, 2020 · 7 · ·

Should've just owned it Sunny.

"This is precisely what it looks like and you're all just trying to figure out which of us you're jealous of."

BezierBallad

BezierBallad #4 · Aug 9th, 2020 · 1 · ·

One down, two to go. Keep it up.

Comment posted by Perpetually Confused deleted Aug 9th, 2020

Bruno

Bruno #6 · Aug 9th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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What are you on about?

Infamous Paradox

Infamous Paradox #7 · Aug 9th, 2020 · 2 · ·

wait how is this safe sex?

TheVClaw

TheVClaw #8 · Aug 9th, 2020 · · ·

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Because of the use of condoms.

Infamous Paradox

Infamous Paradox #9 · Aug 9th, 2020 · 4 · ·

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This was more in regards to the cave in.

BezierBallad

BezierBallad #10 · Aug 10th, 2020 · · ·

Just saw this in the description.

Meanwhile, Starlight Glimmer’s Vice Headmare -- the former Crystaller Sunburst -- decides to tag along in hopes of doing research for his novel in progress.

Not sure if that was intentional or not, but