The fierce battle on the vast snow plains of Hoth raged on. The Imperial walkers continued their slow, steady assault on the Rebel base, firing lasers as they lumbered ever onward. In the snow trench, Rebel troops fired large bazooka-like guns and dish-like ray guns as explosions erupted around them. A gun tower was struck by a laser bolt, instantly exploding. Another blast destroyed a ray gun.
As all this went on, things turned incredibly bad for the Equestrian group. Darth Seraphina and her dark entourage just landed at the entrance of the base and were ready to begin their assault.
“KILL THEM ALL!!!”
Together, Grievous, the Dazzling Inquisitors, and Demitria leapt into action as they ran rough shot through the base. Any rebel troopers unlucky enough to get in their path were instantly killed by the nefarious group. Seeing the carnage unfold before their eyes, Storm and the girls knew they couldn’t just stand around and do nothing.
“Alright… let’s do this,” Storm said determined.
Quick as a whip, the Jedi prince quickly sprinted towards the ongoing battle and made a beeline for General Grievous. Storm used the force to propel himself through the air toward the cyborg general, but Grievous’ sensors tracked his approach. Acting quick, Grievous whipped around and blocked an incoming attack with one of his own lightsabers as Storm landed before him.
“General Grievous…” Storm growled.
“Master Storm Shield…” Grievous chuckled darkly. “Still meddling in affairs of no concern for you I see. I may not have had the opportunity to end your miserable existence before, but I’ll be sure to rectify that now.”
“You talk too much…”
Storm Shield charged at Grievous, swinging his saber pike with such intensity. But Grievous easily blocked Storm’s attacks as if having the ability to calculate his moves. The reengineered war machine went on a vicious onslaught as he swung all four of his sabers one after another at the young Jedi. Thankfully, Storm had been trained immensely for situations like this and successful in blocking every blow.
While this went on, Twilight and the girls quickly rushed to grab a few blasters to defend themselves against the attack. Just then, the three sisters emerged, and the Third Sister ignited her own lightsaber.
“Bringing guns to a sword fight…” The Third Sister replied. “Sisters, I’d say these kids have made a most unfortunate mistake.”
“Actually, I think you got your ‘P’s and ‘Q’s mixed up,” Pinkie Pie pointed out. “The expressions is meant to be, ‘Never bring a sword to a gun fight’…”
“NEVER INTERRUPT ME!!!”
Pinkie Pie quickly shut her mouth as the group held their guns at the ready, prepared to fire in case the three Sisters made their move.
“You girls were very clever to hide from us these past three years…” The Third Sister continued. “Unfortunately, your meddling ends right here. Especially you… Twilight Sparkle…”
Twilight Sparkle held her ground as she stood beside her friends. Spike stood in front of her, growling fiercely toward the masked Inquisitors. A dark chuckle emerged from the Third Sister as she just glared through her mask.
“There’s someone who’s been just dying to see you…”
The Sisters slowly stepped aside as Darth Seraphina stepped forward. Twilight Sparkle felt a twinge of fierce magic emanating off of her being. Darth Seraphina stared at Twilight fiercely, as the latter could feel her fingertips twitched slightly off the trigger of her gun.
“Twilight Sparkle…” Darth Seraphina growled. “I’ve come for you…”
“D-D-D-Do I know you?” Twilight asked, frightened.
“No… and you never will.”
Darth Seraphina drew her own lightsaber out from her hilt, igniting the crimson red blade as she took a fighting stance.
“And today… I finally get the chance to kill you after everything you’ve done.”
“Not if we can help it!” Rainbow threatened, firing her gun.
But to their shock, Seraphina quickly raised a hand and the blast exploded before it contacted her. Rainbow’s eyes turned to pinpricks seeing how powerful this adversary turned out to be.
“My quarrel is not with you,” Seraphina spoke, turning to the Sisters. “Deal with the ‘vermin’, but Twilight Sparkle is mine.”
“As you wish…” The Inquisitors said, in unison.
Quickly, the Inquisitors charged forward as Darth Seraphina slowly stalked from behind the trio. The halls exploded with fire, as the Equestrians fired their guns toward the Sith most of their blasts brushed aside by lightsaber strikes as the four figures made their way close to the group. While Demetria, on the other hand, stood her ground waiting to strike on command.
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Meanwhile, General Veer studied the various readouts on his control panel in his Imperial Snow Walker.
“All troops will debark for ground assault,” Veers instructed. “Prepare to target the main generator.”
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Luke’s speeder and Rogue Two flew in formation, banking from right to left and flying above the erupting battlefield. Flak bursts all around them. Luke, glancing over, could see Rogue Two on his left. His ship shuddered as flak bursts nearby.
“Rogue Two, are you all right?” Luke asked, through commlink.
“Yeah. I’m with you, Rogue Leader,” Zev answered, through commlink.
“We’ll set harpoon. I’ll cover for you.”
The two speeders raced across the horizon toward the giant walkers.
“Coming around,” Zev informed.
“Watch that crossfire, boys,” Luke warned.
“Set for position three,” Zev informed his gunner. “Steady.”
“Stay tight and low,” Luke instructed.
Luke’s speeder moved in formation with Rogue Two, when suddenly Zev’s speeder was struck by a laser bolt. His ship bucked violently under the impact and the cockpit exploded in a ball of flame. Spewing smoke, the speeder hurtled toward a looming walker. Before they collide, Rogue Two exploded in a million flaming pieces.
Desperately, Luke worked the controls of his flak-buffeted ship. Suddenly, the speeder was rocked by a huge explosion. Luke struggled with the controls with a look of terror on his face. The speeder filled with smoke, as electrical sparks jumped about the cockpit.
“Hobbie, I’ve been hit!” Luke called, into commlink.
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Apart from the distant thunder of laser blasts, the corridor was strangely quiet and empty. Running footsteps echo through the freezing hallway when Han appeared. Cracks appeared in some of the walls and some pipes have been broken, sending hot steam billowing into the underground hallways. Han hurried into the command center. The whole place was in shambles, but some people are still at their posts. As he entered, a gigantic cave-in almost obliterated the entire room. He found Leia and 3PO near one of the control boards.
“You all right?” Han asked.
Leia nodded, surprised to see him.
“Why are you still here?” Leia asked.
“I heard the command center had been hit,” Han answered.
“You got your clearance to leave.”
“Don’t worry. I’ll leave. First, I’m going to get you to your ship.”
“Your Highness, we must take this last transport,” 3PO suggested. “It’s our only hope.”
“Send all troops in sector twelve to the south slope to protect the fighters,” Leia commanded, to controller.
A blast rocked the command center, throwing 3PO backward into Han’s arms.
“Imperial troops have entered the base,” The announcer informed, through loudspeaker.
“Come on… that’s it,” Han pushed.
“Give the evacuation code signal,” Leia instructed the head controller. “And get to your transports!”
Leia looked exhausted, as Han grabbed her and started to lead her out. As Han, Leia, and 3PO raced out of the command center, the code signal could be heard echoing off the corridor walls.
“K-one-zero… all troops disengage!” The Head Controller announced.
“Oh! Wait for me!” 3PO called out, waddling behind.
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Amongst all the chaos in the base, one of the doors slid open. A figure slowly emerged for a peak. Starkiller, barely recovered, stepped away from the room and leaned his head out. He could feel the familiar wave of the force flowing through the halls, powerful beings have already made their way into the base. With a look of determination, Starkiller slowly made his way down the hall drawing his lightsaber hilt.
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Rebel troops make to retreat under the awesome Imperial onslaught.
“Begin retreat!” An officer called out.
“Fall back!” The second officer shouted.
Troops flee from the battle, the ground exploding around them. Three of the giant walkers, firing lasers, advanced toward the Rebel headquarters. Continuing their retreat, the Rebels could see the walkers looming ever nearer.
On the battlefield, Luke watched as a walker foot rose and moved over him. He looked up at the underbelly of the huge walker, passing overhead. Running beneath the monstrous machine, Luke fired his harpoon gun at the walker’s underside. A thin cable followed the projectile from the gun. The magnetic head and cable attached firmly to the metal hull. Still running under the walker, Luke attached the cable drum to his belt buckle. Soon he pulled his way up the cable, dangling just underneath the walker.
The walker’s giant feet continued to pound onward across the frozen snow. Stray laser bolts whistled by Luke as he climbed up the cable to the walker’s hull, reaching a small hatch. Hanging precariously, Luke cut the solid metal hatch with his laser sword. He took a landmine from around his neck and threw it inside the Imperial machine. Quickly, Luke started down the cable and crashed onto the icy ground far below. He laid unconscious as a giant rear leg passed by—just missing him.
The giant walker stopped mid-step. A muffled explosion came from within—and then the walker’s mechanical insides spewed out every conceivable opening. The machine sat dead in its tracks, smoking like a locomotive on stilts.
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Veer’s walker continued to advance toward the Rebel base. The smoldering walker Luke exploded stood smoking just right of Veers’ path. Inside his walker, General Veers prepared to fire on the Rebel power generators.
“Distance to power generators?” Veers asked.
“One-seven, decimal two-eight,” The pilot informed.
Veers reached for the electro-orangefinder and lined up the main generator.
“Target. Maximum fire power,” Veers commanded.
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The Rebel troops continued their desperate retreat, pushed back by the relentless Imperial assault.
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With 3PO lagging behind, Han and Leia raced through the crumbling ice corridors. Suddenly, there was an explosion.
*BOOM!!!*
Han turned, grabbed the princess, and pulled her to the wall as a tremendous cave-in blocked their path. He took the commlink from his pocket.
“Transport, this is Solo,” Han called out. “Better take off—I can’t get to you. I’ll get the princess out on the Falcon.”
Han and Leia turned and raced down the corridor.
“But… but… but… where are you going?” 3PO called out. “Uh… come back!!”
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As they were dealing with their precarious situation, the Equestrians were still in the midst of their own issues. While Storm and Grievous continued their epic battle, the rest of the girls tried to fend off the Inquisitors. Rainbow Dash and Applejack in particular faced a difficult time with one Inquistor, who instead of drawing her blade, she blocked all the blasts with merely her hands. The two kept firing desperately until the Inquisitor drew forward and grabbed the guns by the head and crushed them with her own hands.
“Whoa!” Rainbow gasped. “Talk about being really good with your hands.”
Tossing the damaged guns aside, the Inquisitor lunged out and slammed the girls to their stomachs knocking the wind out of them. Then with great force, she sent the girls toward the walls with a grunt. Applejack stumbled forward and the Inquisitor took her down with a vicious swinging kick to the face knocking her out. Enraged, Rainbow cried out and lunged a series of fists toward her, but the Inquisitor smoothly dodged and brushed aside each strike. Rainbow leaned close when the Inquisitor grabbed her right arm, slammed her fist viciously under the armpit before twisting around with a spinning elbow to the side of Rainbow’s head knocking her out.
Meanwhile, there was a heavy grunt as Twilight Sparkle landed on the cold floor as Darth Seraphina loomed over her. The fiery Sith lady stared toward the princess through her mask, as she held her saber dangerously close to her throat.
“I’ve waited to do this for three years,” Seraphina said triumphantly. “Though I never expected this moment to be… disappointing. I hoped you’d work up more of a fight than this. Nevertheless, it’s high time I ended you once and for all. Goodbye, Twilight Sparkle.”
Seraphina raised her dual saber high above her head, ready to strike Twilight down. The rest of her friends saw what Seraphina was doing but could not get to her due to their dealings with the Inquisitors. Just when the blade came down, rather than striking Twilight, it collide with another blade of crimson red. Seraphina growled angrily and Twilight looked up with shock as Starkiller stood with his own saber clashing with hers.
“You…” Seraphina raged. “I thought we’d seen the last of you after shooting you into space.”
“I’m not easy to kill,” Starkiller responded.
Using the force, he pushed backwards by a few feet. She quickly regained her balance and stood at the ready again.
“You destroyed the only person I truly cared about,” Starkiller continued. “I won’t let you kill anyone else.”
Before Starkiller or Serpahina could act, Demetria leapt over Seraphina and stood in defense of her master. She too held her lightsaber drawn and ready to hack and slash.
“No one touches my master,” Demetria threatened. “Especially ‘traitors’ to the empire…”
“Two against one?” Starkiller asked, raising a brow. “I’ll take those odds.”
Together Seraphina and Demetria lunged toward Starkiller, who swung and blocked their ongoing assault with his own lightsaber. A two-on-one fight took place as the Sith and her apprentice took the fight to Starkiller, giving Twilight Sparkle time to recover. Everyone was in action, with Rarity thrown aside by the Third Sister as Fluttershy looked on from a hiding space.
With one of the girls disposed momentarily, the Third Sister stalked toward Pinkie Pie who looked around nervously. Acting quickly, she reached into her hair… and drew out a Qutluch in defense.
*SLASH!*
The Third Sister sliced the blade in half. Pinkie Pie again reached into her hair… and drew out a whip. She tries to hack the Third Sister…
*SLASH!*
The Third Sister merely slit the whip in the center. Pinkie Pie once more reached into her hair… and drew out a chainsaw. The Third Sister shook her head and simply tapped the lightsaber against the chainsaw… literally dismantling the chain as sparks flew before Pinkie’s eyes. She looked at the now damaged chainsaw and dropped it on the ground. She chuckled nervously toward the Inquisitor.
“Uh… parley?” Pinkie smiled.
“Wrong universe…” The Third Sister replied.
Just as The Third Sister lunged out, she felt a set of teeth clamp her leg.
“OWWWWWW!!!” The Third Sister cried out.
Dropping her lightsaber, The Third Sister looked down and saw Spike gnawing against her leg with his teeth. She tried to shake off the dog, but Spike fiercely hung on with all his might. The other Sister quickly came to the Third Sister’s aid and grabbed Spike by the collar, pulling him off. Spike waved his paws and growled trying to free himself as the Inquisitor merely looked at Spike.
“Aw, aren’t you just the cutest thing…” The Sister replied. “And… now I’m bored…”
She carelessly hurled Spike into the air sending him crashing into the wall. The pup plopped to the ground unconscious much to the shock and horror of Fluttershy, witnessing it from hiding. Suddenly, her right eye started to twitch… her nostrils flared out. Breathing heavily, Fluttershy emerged from hiding and charged toward the Inquisitor with a growl. Seeing Fluttershy, the Sister tried to use the force, but Fluttershy tackled into her before she had a chance and knocked her down with a squeak. She found herself holding her arms in defense, as Fluttershy rammed her fists against her enemy.
Seeing her sister in trouble, the Third Sister reached out to help when Pinkie Pie quickly came from behind and slapped her on the head. Suddenly, the Inquisitor started to twitch and shake as if she were struck by electricity. Pinkie Pie held onto her helmet for a few more seconds until she let go and the Third Sister crashed to the floor unconscious. Pinkie Pie held her palm out to the fallen Inquisitor, revealing a hand-buzzer.
“Can’t beat a classic…” Pinkie smiled.
Meanwhile, the unarmed Inquisitor saw her fellow Inquisitor in trouble and Fluttershy beating her down with her fists. The sister quickly raced to her aid as Fluttershy turned, her eyes partly glowing red. The Sister swung her fist toward Fluttershy, who quickly blocked with an arm and the two women found themselves firing a barrage of fists toward the other. The fallen Equestrian Heroes were still recovering when they saw the fight before them, staring in awe and shock.
In unarmed combat, Fluttershy and the Sister switched between fists and kicks. Fluttershy jumping over a leg sweep and the Sister ducking a spin kick. Neither blow managed to make their mark, yet surprisingly the Sister found herself backing away. Finally, Fluttershy managed a kick to the Sister’s stomach pushing her back and she turned… right into a pair of Superkicks to the face by Applejack and Rainbow Dash. The Sister stood there for a moment until she fell back onto the snow. The two girls looked down in triumph before seeing Fluttershy, who started to calm down slightly… before she too falls forward in exhaustion and the girls barely catch her.
Meanwhile, Starkiller and Storm Shield found themselves backing away while their enemies were pushing them back with their lightsabers. Both combatants blocked with their lightsabers, preventing their enemies from attacking them. Eventually, the two young men found themselves backing into each other. One quick look and they quickly formed a plan. They switched places, and Starkiller fired force lighting toward General Grievous, sending a shockwave through the cyborg’s circuits as the general growled in agony before bending to the floor. Storm Shield quickly sent a force push against the two Sith, knocking them backward onto the ground. As Storm struggled to hold them down, Starkiller approached Twilight Sparkle and helped her up.
“You… you saved me?” Twilight asked.
“I did not do it for you,” Starkiller answered. “I did it for her.”
Then Starkiller quickly took off past Twilight and made his way toward Storm Shield.
“Get the girls out of here,” Starkiller instructed. “Do not let them take the Princess.”
“You’re not coming with us?” Storm asked.
“You know why…”
“… I do,” Storm nodded, understanding. “Look for the Millennium Falcon. Captain Han can get you out of here.”
Starkiller nodded before he raced off down the hall. Storm released the force and lead the girls away, with Rainbow Dash & Applejack helping Fluttershy and Rarity lifting an unconscious Spike in her arms with Pinkie close behind. A growl escaped Seraphina’s lips, as Demetria raced to help her master.
“Don’t help me!” Seraphina shouted. “Stop him…”
Nodding in response, Demetria took off after Starkiller as Seraphina slowly picked herself up. She slowly marched down the pathway, passing the down General Grievous and leaving the other Inquisitors behind to recover. Only one thing was on Seraphina’s mind right now… getting Twilight Sparkle at all costs.
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Meanwhile, Imperial troops reached the base. As they pushed through the blocked passageway, Darth Vader strode behind them.
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Han and Leia raced toward the entrance of the main hangar where the Millennium Falcon was docked. 3PO still lagged behind.
“Wait! Wait for me!” 3PO called out. “Wait! Stop!”
The door to the hangar closed on his face.
“How typical!” 3PO exasperated.
Quickly, the door reopened as Han reached out and pulled the golden droid through.
“Come on!” Han grunted.
Chewie paced under the shelter of the Millennium Falcon’s landing gear. The giant Wookiee pat the underbelly of his beloved ship, barking a few reassuring words. As he searched worriedly for his captain, something at last caught his eye. Chewie released a relieved shriek seeing Han and Leia run toward the ship. The Wookiee raced out into the falling ice, releasing a howl, and ran up the ship’s ramp. Han and Leia ran up the ramp after him, closely followed by 3PO.
“Hurry up, goldenrod!” Han called out. “Or you’re going to be a permanent resident!”
“Wait! Wait!” 3PO shouted.
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Imperial troops run through the base corridors. Vader surveyed the place. A huge chunk fell, almost hitting him. But he calmly, purposefully, continued around it.
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A distant, huge explosion rocked the hangar deck. Ice crashed down along the Millennium Falcon. Inside, Han stood before a control panel and busily flipped switches as Chewie watched a troublesome gauge. A worried Leia observed their efforts.
“How’s this?” Han asked Chewie.
The Wookiee barked a negative reply.
“Would it help if I got out and pushed?” Leia asked sarcastically.
“It might,” Han remarked.
3PO clanked into the hold.
“Captain Solo, Captain Solo…” 3PO spoke up. “Sir, might I suggest that you…”
Han gave the golden robot a devastating look.
“It can wait.”
They move to the cockpit where Han flipped some more switches. Leia watched him, impatient and disbelieving.
“This bucket of bolts is never going to get us past that blockade,” Leia argued.
“This baby’s got a few surprises left in her, sweetheart,” Han remarked.
Han and Leia looked out the cockpit window and spotted a squad of stormtroopers rushing into the far side of the hangar. Quickly, Han strapped himself into the pilot’s seat and Leia into the navigator’s chair.
Stormtroopers hurriedly set up a large bazooka-like weapon. Behind them, the giant hangar doors opened slowly. And suddenly, a blast of electricity ignited the stormtroopers from behind them and they scattered about in all directions. Han looked out through the window and saw Starkiller slowly make his way through the scattered remains of his former comrades his eyes toward the ship.
“Room for one more!” Starkiller called out.
Without another word, Han opened the door into the ship and Stormkiller quickly made his way into the ship as the door sealed behind him. Chewie rushed into the cockpit amidst all the chaos while Han tried to get the ship started.
“Come on! Come on!” Han called out. “Switch over. Let’s hope we don’t have a burnout.”
A laser hit the window near Chewie as he settled into his chair. More Stormtroopers were coming toward the ship. Letting out a loud whelp, Chewie quickly pulled back on the controls and the first stage of engine fire could be heard. Han flashed a big grin at Leia.
“See?” Han spoke.
By then, Starkiller made his way toward the cockpit and Leia was not the least bit happy.
“You?! What’s a Sith doing on the ship?” Leia argued.
“This ‘Sith’ happens to be the guy saving your life,” Starkiller argued. “They’re coming into the Hangar and it’s not Stormtroopers I’m worried about.”
“He’s a good kid, Princess,” Han vouched. “We can trust him.”
“Someday you’re going to be wrong,” Leia warned. “And I hope I’m there to see it.”
“Punch it!” Han ordered Chewie.
The roar of the Falcon’s main engines blasted out everything as the ice-cave wall rushed by outside the cockpit window. Starkiller gazed toward the window as they made their escape, as more stormtroopers raced into the hanger. Followed closely are Demetria… and Darth Vader. Hearing the roar of the Millennium Falcon’s engines, Vader looked toward the main hangar doors just in time to see the Falcon lift up and disappear outside the cave. But he feels something in the force inside that ship, as he and Demetria looked on.
“Marek…” Vader spoke.
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In the meantime, Luke and the two other pilots looked up as the Millennium Falcon raced above them, flying very close to the ground. The three pilots turned and trudged onward toward their X-wing fighters, each going to their own ship. Luke waved farewell then headed toward his own fighter. R2, seated on his cubbyhole, chirped an excited greeting as Luke climbed aboard the spacecraft.
“R2! Get her ready for takeoff!” Luke ordered.
From his ship, Luke saw Wedge in his own X-wing, preparing for takeoff.
“Good luck, Luke,” Wedge waved. “See you at the rendezvous.”
Luke smiled with a nod toward Wedge, then lowered himself into the cockpit of his X-wing while R2 waited in the cubbyhole, beeping impatiently.
“Don’t worry, R2. We’re going, we’re going.”
The canopy over the X-wing lowers and eventually snapped shut. Luke’s fighter, its wings closed, sped away from the icy planet. Before disappearing into the stars.
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All the while, Storm and the girls were finally able to fully regroup once they escaped from a major threat. They took notice of Luke’s fighter speeding off into space.
“Looks like he’s on his way to Dagobah,” Storm pointed out.
“How are going to follow him now?” Twilight asked.
“All the speeders were destroyed in the assault,” Rainbow added.
“And that Starkiller feller is on the Falcon with Han and Leia,” Applejack spoke up.
Storm took a look out toward the oncoming Imperial forces quickly making their way towards the base. Thinking quickly, he remembered something he hid away years ago in an event he’d return here.
“I have just the thing,” Storm declared.
With a quick snap of his fingers and a bright flash of light, a giant ancient Jedi starship appeared at the entrance of the rebel base.
The girls and Spike looked wide-eyed and with mouths agape toward the giant ship before Rainbow turned to Storm.
“You have a speeder and a starship?” She asked in disbelief.
“Jealous?” Storm asked smugly.
“Kinda…” Rainbow mumbled, under her breath.
“What are we waiting for?!” Rarity yelled. “Let’s get out of here before those creepy Sith guys get us!”
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In his own X-wing, Luke, looking thoughtful, suddenly reached a decision. He flipped several switches. The stars shifted as he took his fighter into a steep turn. The X-wing banked sharply and flew away in a new direction. The monitor screen on Luke’s control panel printed out a question from the concerned R2.
“There’s nothing wrong, R2,” Luke spoke, through his commlink. “I’m just setting a new course.”
Suddenly his commlink buzzed as a new signal reached out to him. Luke adjusted the commlink to answer the call.
“Taking a slight detour, Luke?” Storm asked.
“Storm?” Luke answered. “You made it! Are the girls all right?”
“We’re all here. A few scrapes and bruises but we made it. The group is taking a rest while I’m taking the old girl for a spin. Look out your cockpit.”
And Luke did just that as he saw Storm’s ship following at a close distance behind him. R2 beeped excitedly at the site.
“Now… are you going to tell your friend about our little change of plans?” Storm asked. “Or else I should tell him?”
“He’s right, R2,” Luke confirmed. “We’re not going to regroup with the others.”
R2 began to protest, whistling an unbelieving, ‘What?!’. Luke read R2’s exclamation on his control panel.
“We’re going to the Dagobah system,” Luke answered, into commlink.
“There’s someone in that system we’re supposed to meet,” Storm added. “If he’s still alive, he has the tools we need to handle the Emperor and the Sith that are after us.”
Luke checked his readouts and made a few adjustments. He rode along with only the soft hum of the instruments to break the silence. Finally, R2 chirped up.
“Yes, R2?”
R2 uttered a soft, carefully phrased stream of whistles.
“That’s all right,” Luke chuckled. “I’d like to keep it on manual control for a while.
The little droid released a defeated whimper. Luke smiled, as he continued his course with Storm’s ship not far behind.
Meanwhile, in the comfort of his own ship, Storm Shield set his ship to autopilot. With the ship in forward motion, Storm climbed out of his seat and approached the other girls, he found them settled into whatever space they could find to rest. The poor girls had been through so much in the course of a single day and needed as much rest as they could get. Storm stood over Twilight Sparkle, lightly brushing a hand over her hair as she released a sigh yet remained undisturbed. Storm soon went back to the pilot seat and stared out toward the stars.
“Good luck Han and Leia,” Storm spoke to himself. “Stay safe…”
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The Millennium Falcon sped away from Hoth, closely followed by one huge Star Destroyer and four tiny TIE fighters. As it pursued, the Falcon raced toward two very bright star-sized objects.
Inside the cockpit, Chewie let out a loud howl. Han checked as the ship was buffeted by exploding flak. He appeared to be doing six things at once.
“I saw them!” Han shouted, harried. “I saw them!”
“Saw what?” Leia questioned.
“Star Destroyers,” Starkiller answered. “Two of them… they’re coming for us.”
3PO bumped and banged his way into the cockpit.
“Sir, sir! Might I suggest…”
“Shut him up or shut him down!” Han ordered Leia, facing Chewie. “Check the deflector shield!”
Chewie barked a reply as he readjusted an overhead switch.
“Oh, great. Well, we can still outmaneuver them,” Han sighed.
“True… but not for long,” Starkiller warned, looking out.
The Millennium Falcon raced toward one of the huge oncoming Star Destroyers. Suddenly, the Falcon started for a deep dive straight down, closely followed by four TIE fighters. The underside of the Star Destroyer continued on a collision course with two oncoming Star Destroyers. Slowly, it started veering to the left.
Out the front window of the bridge, the two approaching Star Destroyers veered to the left.
“Take evasive action!” The Imperial Officer shouted.
Alarms sounded all over the huge ship. Two other Star Destroyers got closer, one of them moving over the bridge so close that it makes brushing contact with it.
The Millenium Falcon raced away from the colliding Star Destroyers, still followed by four TIE fighters. Laser bolts spark the pitch-black skies.
Things have calmed down a bit, but the race isn’t over yet. Chewie barked at Han, while Leia was still trying to recover from the steep dive. Starkiller forced himself to stay balanced while the ship was buffeted by laser fire.
“Prepare to make the jump to light-speed,” Han announced.
“But sir!” 3PO called out.
The buffeting of lasers become louder and stronger.
“They’re getting closer!” Leia spoke.
“Oh yeah?” Han asked, a gleam in his eye. “Watch this.”
Expectantly, they looked out the cockpit window… but the stars don’t go into hyperspace. They just sit there. Han and Chewie looked at each other, thrown into an acute state of concern.
“Watch what?” Leia asked.
Han tried again… still nothing.
“I think we’re in trouble,” Han confirmed.
“You think?” Starkiller asked.
“If I may say so, sir,” 3PO spoke up. “I noticed earlier that the hyperdrive motivator has been damaged. It’s impossible to go to light-speed!”
“Why didn’t you say anything in the first place?” Starkiller asked.
“I tried!”
“We’re in trouble!” Han groaned.
Their worst fears are confirmed as the explosions become heavier. The Falcon raced into the starry vastness, followed by the four Imperial TIE fighters and an Imperial Star Destroyer. Stars race by as flak burst outside the Falcon’s window.
Han worked furiously at some control panels while giving various orders to Chewie.
“Horizontal boosters… (Chewie barks)! Alluvial dampers…! Well, that’s not it (Chewie barks). Bring me the hydro-spanners!”
Chewie hurried over to the pit, placing the tools on the edge.
“I don’t know how we’re going to get out of this one,” Han spoke.
Suddenly, a loud thump hit the side of the Falcon, causing it to lurch radically. Chewie barked as the tools fell into the pit atop of Han.
“Ow! Chewie!”
More turbulence rocked the ship.
“That was no laser fire!” Han observed. “Something hit us.”
“Han, get up here!” Leia called out, over commlink.
“Come on, Chewie!” Han shouted.
Han climbed out of the hold like a shot. Both he and Chewie raced out of the hold and toward the cockpit. Out the front cockpit window, they see hundreds of asteroids racing by.
“Asteroids!” Leia pointed out.
Han changed places with Leia who has been at the controls, and Chewie got into his chair. Han worked his controls as a chunk of rock crosses in front of the ship.
“Oh, no! Chewie, set two-seven-one,” Han instructed.
“What are you doing?” Leia asked. “You’re not actually going into an asteroid field?”
“They’d be crazy to follow us, wouldn’t they?”
“Crazy is the more polite term,” Starkiller replied. “But it could slow them down.”
Another asteroid thumped against the ship and Leia winced at the jolt.
“You don’t have to do this to impress me,” Leia remarked.
“Sir, the possibility of successfully navigating an asteroid field is approximately three thousand, seven hundred and twenty to one,” 3PO calculated.
“Never tell me the odds!” Han shouted.
The Falcon turned into the asteroid storm, as the ship completed its turn. Asteroids started coming straight at the cockpit windows.
A large asteroid tumbled away from the Falcon’s path at top speed. Several smaller asteroids crash into the big one, creating small explosions on its surface. Other asteroids of all sizes passed every direction, some colliding and exploding. The tiny Millennium Falcon veered around the big asteroid and raced past it through the rain of rocks, followed by four TIE fighters, which bobbed and weaved around the asteroids.
One of the pursuing TIE fighters connected with an asteroid and exploded. The other fighters pelted with a steady stream of smaller explosions. Two huge asteroids tumble toward the Millennium Falcon, which quickly banked around both of them. The three TIE fighters followed in hot pursuit until one of the fighters scraped an asteroid and tumbled out of control into deep space.
The massive Star Destroyer blasted oncoming asteroids as it followed the Falcon. Smaller asteroids explode across its vast surface.
The Falcon twists on its side as it raced around an oncoming asteroid. Two TIE fighters followed in the distance, coming from either side. Asteroids raced by the cockpit window as Han piloted his trusty craft through the dangerous field.
Looking out the cockpit window, the Falcon crew saw a big asteroid drop past the window, narrowly missing their ship. Chewie barked in terror as a slightly smaller asteroid comes especially close—close to—and bounced off the Falcon with a loud crunch. 3PO’s hands covered his eyes. He managed a short peek at the cockpit window. Princess Leia sat stone-faced, Starkiller a good distance away, both staring at the action. Han gave her a quick look.
“You said you wanted to be around when I made a mistake,” Han remarked. “Well, this could be it, sweetheart.”
“I take it back,” Leia muttered. “We’re going to get pulverized if we stay out here much longer.”
“Because there’s just no pleasing you is there,” Starkiller replied, dryly.
“Shut up…”
The group watched as more asteroids raced by outside the window.
“I’m not going to argue with that,” Han replied.
“Pulverized?” 3PO spoke worriedly.
“I’m going in closer to one of those big ones.”
“Closer?” Leia questioned.
“Closer?!” 3PO repeated.
Chewbacca barked the same word, only louder.
“There’s no other choice,” Starkiller spoke. “Beats ducking around and risk getting torn apart.”
The Millenium Falcon dove toward the surface of one of the moon-sized asteroids. There was a continued display of explosions against the starry void as smaller asteroids collided with larger chunks of rock. The two remaining TIE fighters followed the Falcon to the large asteroid. The Falcon skimmed the surface of the giant asteroid as, all the while, small asteroids exploded on the surface of the ship.
The TIE fighters approached the Falcon, but a giant asteroid hurtled directly into their path. As the asteroid continued on its way, it left remains of the two exploded TIE fighters tumbling into deep space.
Rattled by the violent rocking of the starship, 3PO was nearly in hysterics.
“Oh, this is suicide!”
Han noticed something on his main scope and nudged his faithful Wookiee with a single finger pointing.
“There. That looks pretty good.”
“What looks pretty good?” Leia asked.
“It’ll have to do for now,” Starkiller confirmed.
“Excuse me sir, but where are we going?” 3PO asked Starkiller.
“If we’re lucky… out of harm’s way.”
Out of the cockpit window, they see they are skimming the surface of the enormous asteroid and neared a large crater. The Millennium Falcon dove into the huge crater and disappeared.
“I hope you know what you’re doing,” Leia spoke.
“Yeah, me too,” Han nodded.
“And what are we going to do about him?”
The crew looked toward Starkiller, who merely stared at each of them with a blank expression. All the while the Falcon raced into the crater. The walls barely visible as the ship sped through the tunnel-like opening. A small cave appeared on one side of the crater, and the Falcon turned, slowing, and scooting into it.
Here's where the juicy parts start
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=S_WeAbsQYio
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=fZvHwuh5MGE
Once again they're splitting up, but they'll reunite eventually. And Sunset and the girls have reunited, but the girls don't even realize it's Sunset, not even Twilight. When they realize it oh they're going to be in for the shock of their lives.
Seems just about everyone ended up with Luke. Kind of expected more of split joining with the Falcon crew, but I know that meeting Yoda is more important. I have a feeling Starkiller some more feelings towards Sunny's current persona like Obi-Won did with "Vader killing Anakin" from a certain point of view. All around everyone seems to be more physical combat wise with their current human forms.
"I LIIIIIIIIVE!!!"
"So tell me what poor unfortunate soul needs my protection, Mr. ExtremeEnigma02? You just SAY THE WORD AND I'M THERE!!!"
"Hey just a sec. Anybody who is FOOLISH ENOUGH to threaten OUR FRIENDSHIPS?! Vengeance will be MIIIIIIINE!!! RRRrrrrggghhh!!"
Millenium Falcon is sure fast :)
Ooh, can't wait for more!!!
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Yep... this is where we 'really' get to the juicy, tender sections of that 'steak' in that 'steak and potato' dinner. We go through one battle and now one half of the team gets to meet one of the most iconic Jedi of all time, while the other half... tries to make a break to someplace where they can recover after a pretty failed defense of their base.
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Yeah... no way Seraphina was in the mindset to reveal her identity. She had this 'Kill Twilight' thought process going on and she nearly had her had it not been for the meddling traitor to the Empire.
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At least Starkiller is joining Leia's party so it's not just shot-by-shot stuff with those guys. Leia is not going to be comfortable having Starkiller with her since the last time he was there he was part of the team that caught up to her ship, killed most of her rebel guards, and made her a prisoner along with Sunset Shimmer. But 'maybe' she can learn something from him and determine if he's being truthful of having no part with the Empire anymore.
As for the girls and Spike, of course they 'have' to go with Luke. After all... they are going to need some 'special tools'. Don't they?
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We're ready for the reaction from the theater when you are. Hope we haven't driven you too crazy.
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She better be. Han stands by his belief that she's the fastest ship in the galaxy. Least in this dimension.
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It took us longer than we planned to get this chapter out. But better we finished now than never.
Seeing as how they were facing a losing battle, despite the Equestrians surprisingly holding their own with the Sith lords, an escape off this frozen wasteland was inevitable. And so the team is split apart for the time being. Han Solo having Leia (And surprisingly Starkiller) joining his ship to make their escape from pursuing Empire soldiers. Whereas Twilight and the gang are to regroup with Luke to journey to the Dagobah system to find the fabled Master Yoda. On the plus side, we get to see that Storm Shield has kept a ship ready in the event that this sort of travel would be needed.
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Crazy? No.
Brink of insanity? ...You guys were this close.
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True. It was worth the wait though!
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From one crazy individual to another, I bet I can have that beat in a jiff.
echo base has been destroyed, the rebellion and our heroes scattered.
Hopefully a certain 900 year old creature can help....
In the fight against the Sith, The Mane 6 have been outmatched. But their ability to work as a team, their adaptability to the situation, and the help of a Jedi, a previous Sith and a brave dog allow the group to win this fight. And hey with Luke, I've always found epic when he destroys the giant walker by himself.
Despite their best efforts, The Empire has won this battle. Following the saying of "flee today to fight tomorrow", the rebels had to run and escape. Now that they are aware of what they are facing, Luke and the others head to Dagobah, just as Obi-Wan told them, since there is a character there who can help them but it's possible that they also meet a girl who knows something about Darth Vader.
Storm never ceases to amaze me. I imagined that he and Grievous would have some story, although we have to wait if their rivalry is simply due to being on opposite sides of a war or it's something more personal. It's good that, like Twilight, he learned from his mother Celestia to always have a backup plan (by the way, I love the new ship. What secrets will it keep?). It is seen that the young prince also begins to see Twilight as more than just a friend.
Starkiller has proven to be a valuable ally for the group. I'm amazed at how quickly he has adapted to the situation to fight alongside Storm effectively. Now he is going to have to gain the trust of Han, Chewie, C3PO and Leia, which is not going to be easy. And as for the princess, I wonder if Marek will find out about her relationship between her and her former teacher.
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lmao, nice
My favorite moment in this story is when the box of tools falls on Han, HA........classic, always makes me laugh, another fabulous chapter Drama and Enigma
Yeah, once Sunset finds out how she was lied to and deceived by Palpatine, she is not going to take it well....especially once her real self comes to her senses and retakes full control.
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At least the Mane Six have demonstrated they are not entirely helpless against beings slightly more powerful. Even Spike got to take a 'bite out of crime' against one of the Inquisitors and that takes guts. Although as far as Starkiller coming to the aid of the group, as he made it perfectly clear, he wasn't doing it for either of them but only because it's what Sunset would've wanted him to do (Thereby proving that she's had a lasting effect on him). Course it will not be easy for Starkiller to gain the trust out of the others, despite the fact they were too busy escaping the empire. But once they land and have a chance to talk, Starkiller is not likely to get a pat in the back even after taking down some stormtroopers single-handedly.
As for Storm, so many secrets are revealed one after another. Not only do we learn he had a slight feud with Grievous to a degree, but he's kept a special mode of transport which can appear on command. Like having a flashlight you can turn on and off with a snap of your fingers. Which leads many to wonder how many secrets does he actually have.
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And we thought it was funny when a set of tools fell on Harry's head in 'Home Alone 2'.
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Yeah... Sunset Shimmer is definitely not going to be happy considering everything she is going through trying to regain some sense in her own body.
*Coughs and falls to the floor...singed, but undettered*
Me: "Wow. I feel...like my old self again...I haven't felt this much adrenaline in a long time. It feels...VIOLENT!" (Smiles like an insane madmen) "I love a good fight! And the need to write a fight scene to go with it!"
Patience, Spike. You'll get your chance. You will have your chance.
All right, new chapter, new excitement... new suspense... and new Family Guy references to quote! Again, don't take these seriously, I'm just having a little fun.
Han: Well, I just realized my spaceship works better... (grabs keys from nearby hook) When I HAVE THE KEYS! Duh!
LATER...
Vader: (to Imperial troops) I want the princess captured immediately! (Some troops run off as Vader turns to one trooper wearing a mesh tank top instead of the white suit.) You know, Gordon, I don't think today's the day to go out in your mesh Stormtrooper shirt.
Gordon: Sorry, it's just... I'm going out dancing after work tonight.
Vader: (pause) Wow... I can't remember the last time I went out dancing. I think it was... Life Day, about two years ago? (pause) No, you know what, it was actually four years ago! You know how long that was? It was on Alderaan, that's how long ago it was!
Gordon: (raises eyebrow from mask) Hey, aren't those guys getting away? We should probably get those guys.
Vader: Ah, those are the guys, we'll get them. So, what else?
LATER...
(WHAT IF R2 COULD TALK?)
R2: Uh, you may not remember, but I told you last week I got my niece's recital today?
(Smash cut over to a school with a few parents attending, including R2 and Luke in the front row as they watched a droid similar to R2 with black hair playing a violin. Luke looks a little nervous.)
Luke: Do we have to sit through this whole thing?
R2: It's not going to be much longer.
Luke: But she's number seven, and there's only 18 performers.
R2: Don't worry about it.
Luke: I mean... as long as she knows you came here...
R2: Look, this is happening, so just come to peace with it!
LATER...
C-3PO: Wah-wah-wah-wah-waaaaaaaahhhhhh.
Han: Crap.
Leia: No lightspeed?
Han: No lightspeed.
LATER...
Han: Well, it's either that, or go into the Strawberry Fields.
(Cut over to a space full of floating strawberries where the Beatles were hanging around.)
Paul McCartney: You know what I'm getting into, is one legged chicks.
John Lennon: Yeah, Paul? What's your new wife's name? Peg?
Paul McCartney: That'll be enough of THAT, lad.
Ringo Starr: How 'bout Eileen?
Paul McCartney: Ha! Ringo's got it!
LATER...
Han: (pause) Wait, actually, those aren't bad odds. Yeah, no, let's keep going.
LATER...
Han: Guys, we got at least five of fifteen of the main characters on this ship, I think we'll be fine.
LATER...
(Everyone looks out to see a huge piece of cherry pie floating in space.)
Han: Doesn't that pie look good? Too bad we can't get at it. It's in space, and we're in here. Otherwise, we'd be eating that right now. (looks over) All right, let's park over at that cave.
(As the Millennium Falcon moved closer, they noticed the handicap parking space near the cave.)
Starkiller: Wait, what are you doing? You can't park there!
(Han responds by pulling out a blue card and putting it on the ship's mirror.)
Leia: You're not handicapped!
Han: I have vertigo. It's a real medical condition!
Starkiller: I'm... I'm just going on record in saying I'm not comfortable with this.
(We later see Starkiller sitting in a room ala The Office, where he gives a confessional.)
Starkiller: I have just found that Leia's constant questioning of Han and me has not been productive to the atmosphere of the ship. And I think she needs to get some respect for herself!
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Nice chapter.
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A Moment With Discord
Discord: (Pauses the movie for a moment as he speaks to the readers) "Hey! Excuse me? Yeah. Hi. Two seconds here. This movie is about me and MY band of heroes. In case you're forgetting. One of these walkers was hijacked...by Puppy Spike and his robot pal, M.O.N.D.A.Y." (Draws a circle around the said walker) "Ok? This is about me and my friends. Not them!" (Tries to scribble out the Dazzlings, General Grievous, and the Equestrian Heroes) "You got that, guvnah? Ok. Good. Sorry to slow you down."
Cosmos: (Off-screen) "Oh, Discord~ Is that you I hear, sweetie? If you wanna co-star in the movie with me, you could've just said so~"
Discord: (Whispers) "I gotta go!" (Snaps his fingers and disappears in a flash of light)
Discord's Cut
Hiding behind a wall, Juniper Montage poked her head out and watched the whole battle take place, when Indigo Zap called in her ear bud.
Indigo Zap: "Yo! June! Talk to us. What's happening?"
Juniper Montage: "Oh you know. Some big baddies, say the Dazzling Inquisitors and that four-armed cyborg, General Grievous are here. THEY'RE SLAUGHTERING EVERYONE! And Prince Storm Shield is fighting the General! And Sunset Shimmer's here!"
Sunny Flare: "We're on our way dearie. Until then...try not to get killed."
Juniper Montage: "Easy for you to say..." (Brandishes her wand in one hand and a lightsaber in the other) "I'll try to at least stun one of them. Petrificus Totalus!" (Misses and hits a wall) "No one ever said this was gonna be easy..."
Meanwhile, back in movie theater(s)
Princess Celestia: "Come on, baby! COME ON! Make mommy proud!"
Rockhoof: "Give that bucket of bolt what for lad!"
Gilda: "COME ON, THUNDER BUTT!!! CRUSH HIM!"
Granny Smith: "Take his head off!"
Scootaloo (EQG): "GO, GO, WONDERCOLTS! GO, GO!"
The CMCs: "GO, GO, WONDERCOLTS! GO, GO!"
Equestria Girls Cut
With their Equestrian counterparts none the wiser, the Rainbooms quickly got out their own lightsabers, ready to charge into the fight and protect...well, themselves...
Skittles – EQG Rainbow Dash – wields a blue split saber.
Kellogg – EQG Applejack – wields an orange broadsaber.
Lady Marshmallow – EQG Rarity – wields a purple curved-hilt lightsaber.
Sci-Fi Twi wields an average lavender lightsaber.
Pinkamena Diana Pie wields a lightsaber pistol.
The Bashful Butterfly – EQG Fluttershy – wields an average yellow lightsaber.
Safely staying out of sight, the Rainbooms followed closely behind, ready to lunge whenever the need is arisen.
Discord's Cut
Sci-Fi Twi: (Scared and whispered) "Sunset Shimmer..."
Discord's Movie Theater
Princess Celestia, Sunburst, Stella Flare: "Sunset..."
Starlight Glimmer: "Sunset Shimmer..."
The CMCs: *Gulp*
Gabby: "Gilda? I'm scared!" (Hugs Gilda who wraps a wing around her for comfort)
Gilda: "Be strong. Rainbow will knock some senses into that girl..."
Equestria Girl Movie Theater
Scootaloo: "Awesome! A new Sith!" (Everyone looks at Scootaloo in bewilderment) "I mean...y'know, she's no Kylo Ren. But she's okay...What? The bad guys always get the good stuff..."
Discord's Cut
Skittles: (To herself) "Wait! DON'T–"
But too late.
Discord's CutSonic and the Black Knight – Knight of the Wind OST
During the fight, Skittles confronted the Third Sister.
Skittles: "YO! ADAGIO!!!" (The Third Sister turns and looks at the multicolored girl) "Remember me?! On Korriban? How you cheated us out of our victory?! It's payback time!"
Third Sister/Adagio Dazzle: "Oh. You again. I remember...you cracked my helmet!" (Points to the crack on her len) "And it seems your impersonation of a Jedi has improved...somewhat." (Chuckles) "And I see after all these years, you're still nothing but a Padawan."
Skittles: "I have you to thank for it! This braid is comin' off, once I'm done with you!"
Third Sister/Adagio Dazzle: "Then let's have another look at that unsightly Lightsaber fighting style of yours!"
Skittles: "BRING IT ON!!!" (Activates her geode and rushes in to clash blades with Adagio)
Equestria Girls Movie Theater
Scootaloo EQG: "WHOO-HOO! ROCK N ROLL, DASH!"
Discord's Cut
Not too far away, the Walker that Spike and M.O.N.D.A.Y. had hijacked was staggering as the little dog and robot dog were struggling to steer it.
Puppy Spike: "I've heard about dog license. But where do you get a driver's license?"
Discord's Cut
Up in the air, the Mandalorian-Shadowbolts were on their way back, when they saw what had happened. Sunny Flare urges her fellow Shadowbolts to go on, while she hangs back to see if she can do something to help Luke.
Next>>
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Princess Skystar: "Oh, this is all so intense. It's like the Storm King all over again. But worse!"
Queen Novo: (Holds her daughter for comfort) "I know, baby. I know. But mommy's here."
Shining Armor: "...Twily..."
Flurry Heart: (To Princess Cadence) "Mommy? I'm scared!"
Princess Cadence: (Strokes her wing along her daughter's neck) "I know sweetie. I'm scared to. But try and think positive for auntie Twilight...no matter scared you are..."
Wallflower Blush's Cut
Wallflower Blush: "And where do you think, you're going?" (Reveals herself to Starkiller, and wielding the green lightsaber she was given by Discord – in its pen mode)
Galen Marek: "Going off to help your friends? What's it look like?"
Wallflower Blush: (Clicks her pen and ignites her lightsaber) "You're not going anywhere!"
Galen Marek: "Hey, I mean it. I only want to help. Ok? So just–AH!" (Narrowly dodges Wallflower's attack) "Hey! That's not the Jedi way!"
Wallflower Blush: "Hmph! What do you know about being a Jedi? As I recall...YOU KILL JEDIS! You hunt them, just like your master!"
Galen Marek: "...That was me. But I'm not like that anymore. Remember? I was–AAAHH!!!"
Wallflower Blush: "You're not talking your way out of this one, Starkiller. All I have to do is keep you here, so you can't ruin another rescue for us, ever again!"
Galen Marek: "Rescue? Are you that delusional? I told you already, Sunset is gone! AAH!!"
Wallflower Blush: (Angry) "YOU'RE NOT FIT TO SPEAK HER NAME! Sunset is still alive! And you won't hurt her again, like you've hurt ME! AND my friends..."
Galen Marek: "...You? I don't even know you!"
Wallflower Blush: "You will." (Assumes a Jedi fighting stance)
Galen Marek: (Shakes his head and produces his busted up, but functional lightsaber) "Don't make me fight. But if I have to get through with you...then so be it!"
Button Mash: "WHOO!! Yeah! That's how you wreck-em, like Wreck-It Ralph!"
Rumble: "...You've watched way too many Disney movies..."
Sugar Belle: (Hugs Big Mac) "Oh no!"
Sweetie Belle: "HERE IT COMES!"
Discord's Cut
Puppy Spike: "Gotta stop that other Walker!"
Wallfower's Cut
Meanwhile, the intensive argument between Wallflower and Galen Marke continues.
Wallflower Blush: "That was for taking advantage of Sunset Shimmer!"
Galen Marek: "I would never!"
Wallflower Blush: "Then why did it happen?!" (Force pushes Galen away) "All you had to do was give Sunset back to us, when you had the chance, on the Death Star! That could've saved her and us ALL the troubles of flying halfway across the galaxy for NOTHING! NOTHING!"
Galen Marek: "I thought it was a sound plan back then! Look, I'm sorry I couldn't give her back to you then. I really am, but..."
Wallflower Blush: "HA! I'm sure your heart bleeds..." (Throws Galen into a wall) "You're not talking your way out of this one!"
Galen Marek: "OOF!" (Gets up and spits blood and glares at Wallflower Blush) "You're making it real hard for me not to pull any punches, girl. I understand wanting to get your friend back, and helping your other friends. But I'm NOT cool with anyone ATTACKING ME!"
Wallflower Blush: "TOUGH! You had this coming a long time ago!"
Galen Marek: (Outraged) "ME?! What did I ever do to you?"
Wallflower Blush: "THAT'S MY POINT EXACTLY! You don't have a clue because you never cared! And I'm sick and tired of it!"
Galen Marek: "Of what?"
Wallflower Blush: "What's the point of explaining to you? It's not like you ever cared! You never cared enough about Sunset Shimmer to let her go, when the going was good!"
Galen Marek: (Angry) "DON'T. EVER. SAY. I DON'T. CARE! You don't know what I've been through...or how HARD it's been for me, ever since I've lost the only family I've had to Darth Vader. All my life, I've never known what it means to be free, from the man who made me into this. Sunset was my second chance of–"
Wallflower Blush: "And you blew it!" (Forces Galen off) "I, on the other hand, at least made an effort to save her. But your Inquisitor friends tried to bury me six feet underground! But I got back up, while YOU WALKED OUT ON HER!" (Forces Galen to a wall) "THAT'S your problem! You're a quitter! You're a failure! But I have something to fight for. I'm gonna keep you pinned down so you'll never ruin this for us again!"
Galen Marek: "I'm not trying to ruin, anything. But if you won't listen to reason, then I won't pull any punches either!" (Weakly fires a Force Lightning attack at Wallflower, who quickly blocks the attack with her lightsaber, while Galen flees) "I'm getting out of here!"
Wallflower Blush: "GET BACK HERE!" (Catches up to Galen) "See?! This is how it always is! Starkiller the so-called lover of Sunset, runs off to save himself, while leaving Sunset Shimmer and her friends in the dark about the truth! Just how you sold her out to those 'loyal' Stormtroopers of yours!"
Galen Marek: (Irritated) "OKAY! I admit! Those Stormtroopers are on my conscience! Maybe it was my mistake to trust them in Sunset's care. How was I supposed to know those Inquisitors took them over? Let alone my former master, Darth Vader?"
Wallflower Blush: "You tell me! But you know what I think? I think you were lying to Sunset! YOU NEVER WANTED HER TO RETURN TO US! You wanted her to become ONE of you! You stole her from us, and from then on, you've been looking for ways to manipulate her JOIN THE DARK SIDE!"
Galen Marek: "GRK!" (Gets punched in the cheek) "Then how did you ever know so much I don't even know what you're talking about? I was following orders from my masters! ORDERS! I never 'stole' Sunset away. I didn't even know you existed back then, or that you cared so much about her! But even so...three years ago, I've been trying to return her to you! It was never my intention to manipulate her!"
Wallflower Blush: (Even more irritated) "She didn't even have a lightsaber on her! She wasn't even trying to put up a fight! And you still took her anyway!"
Galen Marek: "I don't even know if she knows of the Jedi, let alone heard of them. How was I supposed to know Sunset wasn't the enemy?" (Gets his butt kicked by Wallflower Blush) "AHK!"
Wallflower Blush: "YOU ratted us OUT, just like you RATTED HER OUT!"
Galen Marek: "I didn't even KNOW you were all hiding out here! How could I have ratted you out?!"
Wallflower Blush: "WHY don't you tell me?! You Siths can never be trusted!"
Galen Marek: "And what's your excuse for attacking me? What is it about Sunset that justifies you fighting me?!"
Wallflower Blush: (Angry tears in her eyes) "BECAUSE I LOVED HER!"
Galen Marek: (Startled) "What?! You? But...I thought...she..."
Discord's Movie Theater
The audience were all shocked at the revelation from Wallflower Blush.
Starlight Glimmer: "That was new."
Gilda: (Frowns) "Oh great. Another Applejack, or Rainbow Dash..."
Equestria Girls
Apple Bloom EQG: "Am I hearing that right? Wallflower?"
Scootaloo: "Has a crush..."
Sweetie Belle: "On Sunset?"
Wallflower's Cut
Wallflower Blush: "Don't say it like that!" (Breaks down crying and slashes her lightsaber in a temper tantrum) "She puts her trust in you and YOU SOILED IT!" (Stops for a moment to point an accusing finger at Galen Marek) "I don't care if the Sunset Shimmer I knew is gone! Or if she's been brainwashed! Or if she chose you over me! You promised you would return her to us, AND YOU BROKE IT!" (Wallflower continues to slash her lightsaber wildly as she looks up with pink eyes and tears streaming down her cheek) "She was everything to me! She meant so much to me! She helped me turn my life around and...YOU TOOK IT ALL AWAY FROM ME! Now her blood is on YOUR HEAD!"
However, another explosion shook the entire foundation of the base, interrupting their fight.
Galen Marek: "Listen...can we just talk about this later? This whole place is coming down on us. If we don't get to your friends now, then...we'll all be killed. And after we're done...you can kill me later..."
With tears still in her eyes, Wallflower Blush was breathing angrily. But she hesitated her strike as she glared at Starkiller for a long time, until she finally nodded in compliance.
Gilda: "MOVE IT OR LOSE IT, TIN-CAN!"
Discord's Cut
Skittles was still battling the Inquisitor she knew is Adagio, when the multi-colored Equestria Girl suddenly felt the pain from her Equestrian counterpart.
Skittles: "OH!" (Clutched her stomach) No...not now!"
Third Sister/Adagio: (Holds her lightsaber up, charging it up with Force Lightnings) "Hi–YAH!"
*WHAM! BLAST*
Skittles: (Manages to block the attack, but was knocked back by the explosion) "AAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!"
Discord's Cut
Kellogg was slashing her lightsaber, when she felt the blow to her face and felt a drop of blood from her nose.
Kellogg: "Ooh, that's smart..."
Discord's Cut
Skittles: (Feeling the pain from Rainbow Dash) "AAAAUUUGGH!!!"
Adagio/Third Sister: "Aw, what's the matter? Tired already?"
Skittles: "Not...tired...just hurt..."
Discord's Cut
Sci-Fi Twi: (Rubbing her pain inflicted arm, turns and sees her Equestrian counterpart in danger) "NO!!!" (Tries to run to protect herself, but fell to the ground, because of an injured foot)
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Spike: "TWILIGHT!!!"
Juniper Montage: "NO!" (Holds her wand out, but was hit on the head by a falling brick of ice)
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Standing not too far behind him, once again, doing a good job of using her innate invisibility, is Wallflower Blush.
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At that moment, the four remaining Shadowbolt-Mandalorians arrived.
Cobra Kai – Hallway Hellscape
Indigo Zap: "OH IT IS ON!!!" (Fires energy wires that ensnared two Inquisitors, headbutting into each other, before she proceeded to wallop one viciously as she and her fellow Shadowbolts join in on the fight)
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Indigo Zap: "YEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!"
Discord's Movie Theater
Bulk Biceps: "YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!"
Equestria Girls
The CMCs: "YEEEEEEAAAAAHHH!!!!"
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The Fourth Sister suddenly finds herself attacked from both sides, when two of the Shadowbolts flew in and landed a double roundhouse kick on her. She slashed her lightsaber at them, but the Shadowbolts managed to project a shield from their vambraces to protect themselves.
Reacting fast, one of the Shadowbolt fired her flamethrower at the Fourth Sister, scaring her into fumbling backwards, and tripping over another Shadowbolt.
Getting her second wind, Skittles wearily got back up, and high-fives Indigo Zap.
Skittles: "What took ya so long?"
Indigo Zap: "We hit a snow bank."
Both Skittles and Indigo Zap stood back-to-back as they fought off two of the Inquisitors, before trading place to fight both of their adversaries.
During the fight, both Skittles and Indigo noticed that Storm Shield was holding his own against General Grievous, but looked as though he still needed help.
Skittles: "Go help Storm! The Dazzlings are mine!"
The Shadowbolt-Mandalorians complied as they raced off to help Storm Shield. Meanwhile, Skittles sets her sight on Adagio.
Skittles rushed forward and slashed her lightsaber, cutting across Adagio's back.
Adagio/Third Sister: "AAAAH!!!" (Reaches out to touch the scratch and looks to see a drop of blood on her hand and glares angrily at Skittles) "Now you've done it."
Skittles vs. Adagio
Super Smash Bros. Brawl – Boss Battle 1
Adagio rushed at Skittles and bashed her up into the sky.
Bashful Butterfly: (Calls out to Skittles) "RAINBOW DASH!!!"
Rainbow Dash: "Huh? Someone called my name?"
Skittle: (Unsheathes her lightsaber) "BRING IT!"
With that, Adagio charges towards Skittles, with her double-bladed lightsabers, and together, the two duelists clashed blades with one another, exchanging blows and blocks.
Skittles slashed her saber at Adagio in a downward slash, with the dazzling blocking it with a higher block, before she swings spins it into a spinning wheel motion for a middle strike at Skittles, who quickly blocked it with a counter-clockwise downward block.
Focusing the dark side of the Force, Adagio fired a blast of Force Lightning at Skittles.
Skittles: "Not this time!" (Blocks the lightning with her lightsaber and activates her geode's power to run at lightning speed and viciously slashes her attacks at Adagio)
Adagio Dazzle: (Struggles to block) "How did you. Move. So. Fast?!" (Gets her shoulder cut in the process and used the Force to push Skittles off, and clutches her shoulder) "Argh!"
Skittles landed close to where Kellogg was.
Kellogg: "Skittles–Dash! Y'all right?"
Skittles: "I will be if those Dazzlings would just stay down!" (Gets up) "Gotta go faster!" (Her hand pulsed with Force electricities as she activates her geode's power again)
Kellogg: "Skittles! NO!"
Skittles started concentrating her raw emotional determination, tapping into the dark side of Force, until her whole body was pulsing with electricities.
Skittles: "Ready..." (Activates her geode, charging its power with the Force Lightning) "GO!"
Skittles successfully catches Adagio by surprise, and runs into a blur of multicolor, landing a devastating flying kick to the siren in Inquisitor's uniform's stomach.
Adagio Dazzle: "OH!" (Crashes into a snow bank) "RRrrrgh! Impressive, I'll give you that..." (Spits) "But you won't use the same trick on my again!" (Starts to charge up her Force Lightning)
With that, both lightsaber wielding duelists charged their Force Lightnings to the max, before they unleashed it towards each other. However, Adagio proceeded to fire lightning bolts, while Skittles used her lightning ability to make her go even faster.
Skittles: "Who says lightning can't strike twice?"
Both Skittles and Adagio continued to clash lightsabers with one another, and the air sparks with electricities as their Force Lightning clashes together in an impressive light show.
Applejack: "Sweet mother of Faust!"
Bashful Butterfly: "R-Rainbow Dash...?"
Rainbow Dash: "Wow! Look at them go!"
Storm Shield: "I've never seen a Jedi use Force Lightning like that before! Then again...not many Jedis ever liked the idea of using the Force Lightning for offense..."
However, from the looks of it, Adagio was getting exhausted and was having trouble keeping up with Skittle's superspeed. It got to the point where their battles took them up into the mountains, creating a path of destruction in their awakes, before they took their fight back to the battlefield.
General Grievous: (Alarmed) "AAAHH!!" (Struggles to dodge the crossfire of their fight, with Storm Shield, and the Shadowbolt-Mandalorians) "Oh! OW! Ah!" (Gets blasted and kicked in the end) "AAAAAHHHH!!!"
The Shadowbolt-Mandalorians: (Also got caught) "AAAAAAAHHHH!!!"
Sonata Dusk and Aria Blaze: (Too got blasted in the crossfire) "AAAAAHHH!!!"
Equestria Girls Movie Theater
EQG Scootaloo: "Omigosh! Omigosh! Omigosh! Omigosh! That is so AWESOME!"
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Kellogg: (Holding her hands out) "WAIT! Don't come this way!!" (Gets blown away) "AH!"
Sci-Fi Twi: (Gets knocked) "Whoa!" (Bashful Butterfly narrowly dodged, and Pinkamena Diana Pie, ends up getting blasted by lightning attack)
Soon, both Skittles and Adagio were locked together in an impasse, as they held their lightsabers against each other, in a struggle to overpower each other.
Adagio Dazzle: "Wow, your impersonation of a Jedi has certainly improved somewhat."
Skittles: "I have you to thank for that! I'll make it easier for you, if you tell me how we can change Sunset Shimmer back!"
Adagio Dazzle: "Hmph! Maybe I will. Or maybe I won't. But you won't get anything out of me!"
Skittles: "We'll see, you old codfish!"
With that, the two duelists broke apart and resumed clashing sabers at one another. This time, though, they've also charged their lightsabers with Force Lightnings, resulting in electric explosions that knocked each other apart. Activating her geode's power, Skittles rushes in to land a jab at Adagio, who immediately repulses the fast girl and sent her flying away. Then, she charges after Skittles, jumps into the air, and spins her double-bladed lightsaber, before slamming the saber into the snow. Skittles had rolled out of the way, and resumes using her Force Lightning to increase her speed, slamming herself and Adagio through snowbanks, mountains, and hills.
Adagio Dazzle: "ENOUGH!" (Knees Skittles in the chest)
Adagio then swings her double-bladed lightsaber, trying to cut at Skittle's legs, who leapt and kicked Adagio on the helmet. Skittles then does a backflip and rushes in for another attack, but Adagio uses the Force to repel Skittles back, before firing several lightning bolts at Skittles. Reacting fast, Skittles thrusted her lightsaber out to catching the lightning bolt and deflect it to the side in a spin, skillfully blocking another strike from Adagio's lightsaber. Both duelists then followed the movements, following the bounce of their sabers, trying to catch each other at the chests, but blocked. Growing more frustrated, Adagio summoned a powerful blast of lightning from her hand, which clashes with Skittle's lightning-fueled-lightsaber, resulting in a shockwave explosion.
Skittles and Adagio: "WHOOOOOAAAAAA!!!"
Skittles and Adagio were both floating in the air, singed and burnt by each other's lightning attacks, and their lightsabers floating besides them. After a moment of regaining their composures, they regained their weapons and resumed fighting. Though, they were both too worn out from their lightnings.
Adagio lunged towards Skittles, who moved to the side, before activating her geode once again to quickly catch Adagio by the hands. With that, Skittles proceeded to deliver fast punches from the left and right, as they descended towards the ground, before Skittles uses the Force to thrust Adagio even further down. Reacting fast, Adagio used the Force to propel herself upward, to slow her descent. Unfortunately for her, Skittles had curled her body into a roll and landed a powerful axe kick that breaks the visor, shattering it to pieces, and dented the helmet so badly, it looked as if Adagio was hit in the face by a running train.
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Gilda: "YEAH! That's the way to KICK 'EM!"
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As a finishing move, Skittles stuck her leg out in a kick, and used the Force to literally 'force' herself onto Adagio, increasing their decent faster and faster towards the ground.
*BOOM!!*
Both Adagio and Skittles crashed into the snow, in a large mushroom cloud of snows, until Skittles emerged from the cloud.
Bashful Butterfly: "OH! Oh dear goodness...are you alright?" (Catches Skittles, who is completely burnt out)
Skittles: "...I did it...for Sunset..." (Passes out)
Just then, Adagio/Third Sister emerged from the dust, clutching her rib, limping away.
Both Theaters
Sweetie Belle/EQG Sweetie Belle: "OH COME OOOOOON!!!"
Gilda: "You should've gone for the butt!"
Gabby: "Ew! Gilda..."
Gilda: "What? It's effective. Gross, sure. And a little embarrassing. But effective..."
Gabby: (Horrified) "SPIKE!"
The Audience: *Gasps*
Me: "SPIKE!!!"
Ember: (Enrage) "Oh that's it! DISHONOR! Dishonor on your whole family!"
Me: (Clenching my fist) "Never. I repeat. Never, abuse Spike in front of me...again..."
Mina: (Turns to Ben Kenobi) "He has a soft spot for the little guy."
Zephyr Breeze: "Oh ho-ho. Now you're in trouble!"
Meanwhile, the audience were all shocked and aghast at the display of ferocity in Fluttershy.
Mrs. Shy: "Oh."
Mr. Shy: "My."
Zephyr Breeze: "Sister..."
Ember: "She."
Garble: "Is."
Gilda: "AWESOME!"
Tender Taps: (Whimpers) "I think I'm going to wet myself..."
Rumble: "Steady...."
Equestria Girls
Gloriosa Daisy: "...And she's the shy one?"
The CMCs: "Eeyup."
Timber Spruce: "...It's always the quiet ones..."
The CMCs: "Yup."
Vignette Valencia: "Hmmm. BYBB~"
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Bashful Butterfly: "Oh my!"
Discord: (In rebel uniform) "What a woman~"
Juniper Montage: "(To Discord) "Hey! Q! Do your magic and just...STOP THEM!"
Discord snapped his finger and tries to stop, but for some odd reason, his magic won't stop the fight.
Discord: "That's strange...I had this in for a tune up!"
Cosmos: (Off-Screen and in Discord's head) "Bad boy, Dissy dear! Why end the game so soon? it was just getting interesting!"
Princess Eris: (Off-Screen and in Discord's head) "And need I remind you the Dazzlings, General Grievous, Seraphina, Demetria are all our game pieces. You can't just take them like chess pieces...yet! HA HA HA!!!"
Discord: (Annoyed) "Oh poo..."
Cheese Sandwich: "YEAH! Take that ya stupid golden codfish! That's my girlfriend you're messing with!"
Me: "Your wife, Cheese Sandwich. Your wife."
Cheese Sandwich: "Even better! My wife!"
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Pinkamena Diana Pie: (To...well, herself) "You said it, girlfriend!" (Both girls did a secret handshake of the sort) "Glug-glug-glug-glug!"
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Skittles, having fought the hardest against Adagio, rubbed her eyes and was in total denial.
Skittles: "Are you kidding me?!"
Me: "Riddle me this...what just happened? That's a no brainer. She's had a really bad day."
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Skittles: "...It's that simple?"
Kellogg: "Yup."
Meanwhile, the Shadowbolt-Mandalorian went over to the Sister who fell in the snow.
Indigo Zap: "START TALKING! HOW DO WE GET SUNSET BACK?!!"
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Runs over to Princess Twilight.
Wallflower Blush: "Sorry. I know I'm supposed to guard him but..."
Princess Twilight Sparkle: "It's okay. I understand." (Strokes Wallflower's cheek) "But it's a good thing you let him go..."
Wallflower Blush looks back up to see Darth Seraphina.
Wallflower Blush: "Sith or no Sith. I'm not giving up on my friends!" (Activates her lightsaber and disappears into the fray)
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What Darth Seraphina failed to notice, Wallflower Blush was the only one who stayed behind and quietly followed her...friend.
Wallflower Blush: "Invisibility, don't fail me now..."
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Button Mash: "Oh no! It's the BIG GUY!"
Tender Taps: "Oh no! Our friends are dead! They're goners!"
Gilda: "Ah phooey."
Gabby: "Think positive you guys!"
Button Mash: "I am positive. I'm positive our friends are gonna die quickly!"
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Discord: (To the Equestrian Heroes and Equestria girls, while still in disguise) "Okay people. Not to put more pressure, but ya might to move it ASAP. Because DV is ITH."
Everyone: "What?"
Discord: "DARTH VADER'S IN THE HOUSE!"
Pipsqueak: (Sitting close to Princess Luna's unconscious body) "C'mon. Hurry up!"
Me: "And I'm also willing to bet he won't be a happy camper when he returns to the ship to find it in...shambles and his bestie, Luna...missing..."
Mina: "Sucks to be him."
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Satisfied that she was able to protect Luke, Sunny Flare talks into her ear bud.
Sunny Flare: "Luke's safe. How are the others?"
Lemon Zest: "We're okay, dudette! We're about to leave and we're just waiting for ya."
Sunny Flare: "Copy that. I'm on my way."
Starswirl the Bearded: (To Celestia) "How many more surprises does your boy have?"
Princess Celestia: (Shakes her head) "He's just like his father..."
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In the meantime, Sunny Flare went to check on everyone to see if they're all here and accounted.
Sunny Flare: "Is everyone here? Rainbooms? Shadowbolts? Juniper, I see you. "Great. Looks like that's–"
Juniper Montage: "Wait...WHERE'S WALLFLOWER?!!!"
Gilda: "They just don't give up!"
Flash Magnus: "That's war, griffin. That's war."
Snails: "Well, that was a dud..."
Snails: "C'mon! FLOOR IT ALREADY!!!"
Me: "Ooh! I'll bet that's smart."
Big Mac: "Yup..."
Ember: "Gee. The Star...Destroyer...guy, is actually using his brain for once. He must be getting smarter..."
Rumble: "YEAH! Take that ya flying eyeball!"
Gilda: "Yeah, don't think for a fact that you're in the clear yet, kid."
Grubber: (Does a Dick Tracey impression) "Galen Marek! You're under arrest!"
Crankey Doodle Donkey: "The kid's lost it..."
Steven Magnet: "Ooh! I can't bear to watch...but I must peek..."
Gilda: "THAT'S A NO BRAINER! He's your prisoner now! I say interrogate him! Kick him!"
Ember: "STOMP HIM!"
Grubber: "MAKE HIM TELL THE TRUTH! Make him confess! Argh! Where's Tempest Shadow when you need a good interrogator..."
Sweetie Belle: "Speaking of whom..." (Turns to Erik) "Where do you think she and the Knights are?" (Erik simply shrugs in response)
Ben Kenobi: "I...believe it's time I...take my leave..." (Disappears out of the theater)
Princess Celestia: "Oh sister. Wherever you are. Please be safe..."
Me: "I think we're about to see for ourselves. Look!" (Point to the screen)
Meanwhile, with the Nightmare Knights
After escaping the Imperial Fleet, the Nightmare Knights and Princess Luna all exited from the stolen TIE Avenger...or what was left of it.
Tempest Shadow: (Boastful) "Do I know how to fly an aircraft, or what?"
Her fellow Nightmare Knights all left, but with shock running all over their bodies.
Stygian: "Uh...yes...Quite...the experience..." ((0_0))
Trixie: "Now that's flight Trixie wishes to never do again..."
Capper: "My nine lives flashed before my eyes...and I may need a litterbox..."
Princess Luna: (Still trapped in her prison orb) "I have to say, Tempest. A for piloting. A- for aerial combat. F for landing..."
Tempest Shadow: "Hey. When working with the Storm King, he never did quite grasp the concept on...wheels. Says he never trusted them."
Trixie: "Trixie can relate."
Princess Luna: (Felt a disturbance and looked like she has the willies) "Whooo-hoooo-hooo!"
Stygian: "Your majesty? What's the matter?"
Princess Luna: "Just now, I...I felt a disturbance in the Force. On another world...our friends...they battled the Empire...and have retreated...and...oh no!"
Tempest Shadow: "What? What is it?"
Princess Luna: "The Empire...they're already deploying troops for hunts. They must be onto us already."
Capper: "Well...can't we help it if we left a...lasting impression on them? I mean after all. We DID rescue you!"
Tempest Shadow: "And I blew up about half of their troops."
Trixie: "Oh! And don't forget! I did help with the escape. Nopony is better at escape tricks than the Great and Powerful...TRIXIE!!!"
Stygian: "How can you all be so proud of yourselves of this moment? We've just become Wanted Outlaws by the Empire! We have to move...now!"
Tempest Shadow: "And move to where exactly? We're in the middle of nowhere!"
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As for Wallflower Blush, the green girl followed close behind Darth Seraphina, being careful not to give herself away – if she ever had the choice, one way or another. All the same, Wallflower couldn't help but remember a talk she had with Galen Marek.
Flashback
Wallflower Blush: "What's the catch?! Is this another of your mind tricks?"
Galen Marek: "No tricks. I mean it this time. To be honest...I loved her just as much as you do. There's just something about her that's...captivating. Enchanting even...Granted, I used to think she was the enemy. But the more I got to know her, the more I...I began to question myself. About what I was doing with my life and...she was able to look inside and brought out...something in me. Something I haven't felt in a long time, and it was so good. It's hard to let it go."
Galen Marek begins to shed some tears as he walks up to Wallflower Blush.
Galen Marek: "I thought I was doing the right thing, but...In the end, I failed her. I failed you. And I wish I could take it all back, and get a second chance to make it right. But I can't. I can't bring her back...And I know it will never change the fact that I let this happened." (Touches Wallflower on the shoulder as she wipes her tears) "But now, I'm asking you to give me a chance to help make things right...for her. I'm not asking for forgiveness...but I just want you to know, I'm truly sorry I hurt you."
Wallflower Blush: (Drying her eyes) "Don't make me regret this..."
I’VE NEVER FELT SO ALIVE
Ahem. And now, a special song tribute from Cheese Sandwich.
Oh man. The migraines...I really don't like writing angsty scenes. So much emotions, so many dramas, in so little time...
And this is where I CRASH and burn…
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Brilliant commentary thus far Doc.
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Ah yes, talk about epic action times ten.
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They are definitely going to be in for some surprises later during this story.
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Which “They” are you referring to exactly?
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*Smirks* Exactly...
I could be referring to any of the groups featured. Or maybe... 'all' of them.
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Still, be honest though. Judging by the little amount of upvotes I’m receiving, I don’t think everybody’s enjoying the commentaries like before.
What does this mean? Am I losing my touch? Have I overdone them?
Give me your answer, but as a critic, what’s the issue?
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Or it's just very late (Especially my time) and everyone else is asleep by now. But relax, more upvotes will come in due time.
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Worry not my dear Doc, you are not losing your touch by any means. I’m sure that the upvotes will come flocking in very quickly. Just gotta give it a little time
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Great Commentary Doc!
Me: (To Cosmos) BTW Lady, You're Not Cosmos.
Cosmos: Uh, wha? I am so Cosmos!
Me: No... (Points to Tempest Shadow) She's Cosmos! (Then points to Cosmos) You are just a corrupted gem from Steven Universe.
Tempest Shadow: What does he mean by that?
Princess Celestia: I have no idea.
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Great Performance Cheese Sandwich!! Here's some Pinkie Emoji's!!
Huh, so those two know each other. Who knew.
Glad he didn't do the whole "last I heard, Kenobi killed you" line, but then again I don't know if he had full involvement in the Clone Wars or not.
Oh come on, it wasn't her fault, she didn't know what was going to happen, besides, Galen didn't know the emperor knew because the Dazzlings were onto you from the start.
(mumbling) and I'm not the one who felt for their and the emperor's lies, considering you saw right through them the first time.
Huh, so he does have feelings for her after all. The other's reactions should be interesting.
Hah!! Pirates of the Caribbean reference.
Uh oh. You made her very angry. You wouldn't like her when she's angry.