it remind my how i lost my mother i cried so much it touch me but she with me my heart have been connected tied with the memories of herhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z3MfoZ_yX5Ekeep up the great work cant wait for future chapters from you
that was a sad chapter, on the bright side, their are some positive part in it including both he and Sunny Flare. Im was shocked that her dad came in and armed, and I figure things gets bad from their after that. How will it turn out with her dad is uncertain.
this is an emotional chapter but overall, it works well.
This was a sad chapter I know itโs hard to lose a loved one But donโt let that keep you down because they are always With you iโm hoping that the next chapter will be less sad
The next day, around 1:00 PM you were eating your lunch while sending some loving messages to Sunny. You both were making plans on where you two should meet to visit your Grandmother and tell her the amazing news.
"Don't you talk back to me like that, you little cretin! Iโm her father! I know what's best for her! Sunny is my daughter and you are nothing more than common trash! Now I'm only gonna say this once: Stay away!" he persisted, putting his taser close to your face. But then, Sunny stepped in and kicked her dad in the balls, making him lose his grip on his taser and toppled over in pain.
Oh! That's-a gotta sting like a super-scope to the NUTS! ๐๐๐๐ Among the depression of this chapter, it's nice to see some light-hearted humor.
You stopped as you saw one of your favorite TV shows playing: Code Lyoko. You used to watch it with your grandmother all the time when you were a little younger. It was about 5 friends who go to a digital world to fight an evil computer virus called Xana that wants to take over the world.
Oh god this was a heavy chapter. ๐ข
Itโs getting really good.
it remind my how i lost my mother i cried so much it touch me but she with me my heart have been connected tied with the memories of herhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z3MfoZ_yX5Ekeep up the great work cant wait for future chapters from you
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I'm sorry you lost your mother. May she rest in peace.
Yep, definitely needed that tissue box for this.
Thank you for another great chapter.
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thank you
Dude ummmm I really need a tissue box right now. Yu did a good job with this one and my tears are proof of that.
Whoa! Oh, my heart! Oh, it hurts!
that was a sad chapter, on the bright side, their are some positive part in it including both he and Sunny Flare. Im was shocked that her dad came in and armed, and I figure things gets bad from their after that. How will it turn out with her dad is uncertain.
this is an emotional chapter but overall, it works well.
good job and brony on
This was a sad chapter I know itโs hard to lose a loved one But donโt let that keep you down because they are always With you iโm hoping that the next chapter will be less sad
Oh! That's-a gotta sting like a super-scope to the NUTS! ๐๐๐๐ Among the depression of this chapter, it's nice to see some light-hearted humor.
Let me guess, there will also be a waifu fic with Sugarcoat, Lemon Zest, Sour Sweet, and Indigo Zap
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yeah
I love Code Lyoko!
Even before i got to the end of the last chapter i totally predicted the grandmother was going to die.
I actually cried reading this chapter
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I was crying as my friend and I were editing Vivian's passing