Me, after reading the first chapter: https://youtu.be/AgyLeF3zYDo

This is really good so far, your description of the dead world is outstanding, and it almost feels like I'm reading a new Metro book. Great feeling, great atmosphere. As a huge fan of the post-apoc genre, I say this is very, very promising

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Thank you :D

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I'm afraid I don't quite understand. Are you wondering who's in the picture or who took it or what..?

Technical point, if it failed to penetrate, it should've dented it at best. Sounded like a normal or hunting softpoint .308. A hole means he should have one in himself and should be having a bad day.

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He's wearing a ceramic plate. When you shoot them, there's always a hole in the front. It might be tiny, but it's still a hole.

Seems good so far. The portrayal of the world after the apocalypse is realistic. No "Hey, look at that tactical AR-15 with at least three mags" crap. I wonder how many years have passed since the apocalypse - humanity had a huge storage of things, including bullets and food, in many places. With how few humans are still left, those storage places would last a lifetime for those lucky enough to find them.

I've only recently seen you've posted this story and I finally got around to read at least the first chapter.
I like it so far. Kind of gives off a Fallout meets My little Dashie vibe. Let's see where this is going...

Hmm an interesting start, felt his exploring the building was a bit....not sure....draging.....go to this point, go to this point, go to this point.

Felt stiff and robotic so to speak.

Also aren't couches made of wood same with recliners. Least the ones I've seen.

Only points I had a bit of an issue with but enjoyed the rest.

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Well it can happen if you do it enough times women who were nurses in war said the only way to efficiently help is to basically go 'robotic' they shut off there emotions and thoughts to do their job right.
So to put it short and this can happen to a person if they've done it enough times where it's basically a second nature.

Well shit...I like this story already!

This first chapter was kind of rough in a couple of places, minor typos and things like that. The premise however is solid and I fully intend to keep reading.

while his eyes scanned through the falling snow for any sign of life in the decadent city.

Mmmm decadent city sounds tasty. Lol, I think you meant "desolate".

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https://www.dictionary.com/browse/decadent

"P-please... don't eat me..." She whimpered.

I don’t know, I’m alone in a wasteland near hypothermia and just a can of expired beans, I could use a pony soup to go with those beans