Nice

“C’mon… c’mon! Do him again! Do it, you wienie!” She goaded in a hushed whisper, the sight of a stretching stallion gripping another melting her sensible brain into a lusty camera hell-bent on recording each sticky detail.

And so Twilight becomes Equestria's first yaoi fangirl.

Very very hot chapter, and the ending was great, cant wait for the next one :D

You just know twilight is going to send a very detailed report to celestia lol

Bro you gotta keep this going it has potential to be a rare and and even greater story like how will the rest of pony kind view this? But also the idea of derpi fighting off females is pretty funny but the more traditional ponies rarity,apple jack ect may have a problem with it so much potential.

Opened this expecting to fantasize from the MC‘s perspective, ended up fantasizing from Derpy‘s.

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I expected better from you than wanting relations with a human rather than sweet derpy. But ill forgive you, since you've shown me such kindness.

Man I wish you would post again

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So do I.

Ok, gotta give my two cents here.

Generally not into homo-erotic stories, not being attracted to human males its hard to imagine it for me. But I really enjoyed the story, fluff, sex and all. It was an enjoyable read. I could totally see myself being attracted to male Derpy
Cute is Justice!

I look forward to reading your Queen Umbra story now :)

*slowly desposits this into favorites*

>in a world where ponies are innocent there's no such thing as being gay

Is m/m love somehow more scandalous or indecent than any other kind?

Derpy debió ser violado en su niñez para ser así de desviado por el trauma. Lo normal es la heterosexual.

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Curioso.