Spike must learn to "Forgive and Forget," but his demons won't let him.
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Sad, but cute. I kind of expected Fluttershy to be some type of yandere but wow just wow. I love the story dude, keep up the good work!
I loved it
I feel that last bit is rushed and with the way you portrayed Fluttershy in it...Do you hate her or you doing a sick joke?
Don't get me wrong in another story could be comical or dark but here...feels....stupid.
I mean you ended the chapter with Spike asking Rarity to marry him already...wow....
Also work on your grammar!
Ch.7 is gonna be interesting. I wonder how they’re friends are going to react to the marriage situation.
If you need someone to help edit these chapters, let me know. Good premise so far but the story would flow more smoothly with better grammar. Keep up the good work.
I still think Spike should give Fluttershy one date, even though he's taken now. Doesn't show anything about being exclusively to one girl in his grandfather's will....and I'm a bit if a sucker for FlutterSpike and Sparity.
I see you like Rarity
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Nope just giving the fans what they want, when it comes to shipping I have no idea of who to ship
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Gabby she has a super crush on Spike
Fluttershy