It's just so saucy! Oh but they're so cuuuutttee though! And all the little details! Ballet, mentions of former boyfriends, acknowledgements of differences, the riding, oh!

Then it got raunchy and I had to read between my fingers, obviously. But still.

“Look, Lulu, we’re consummating!”

im dead

This was extraordinarily fun to read!

“You… don’t need to prove anything to me, you know. This won’t change how much I love you.”

That doesn't seem like the way Celestia would speak.

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How do you mean?

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Ending a sentience with "you know" like that, it doesn't seem like something Celestia would do. Her speech (if I remember correctly) has allays been more formal, and more organised then that.

But on the other hand: This is both a flustered Celestia, and a male Celestia. Either of those things could cause her speech to be different from the Celestia we're used too.

Holy shit, you're from Flint, aren't you?

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A few towns west of there, but I used to drive into Flint for my old job all the time. Still go there from time to time for a few errands.

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Thanks for the tips on that, I went and tweaked that line, as well as a couple more. I appreciate it!

Unexpected after blow talk. Got me of guard Great chapter

This was the big L. She knew it. Luna knew it. He even knew it. Raven wasn’t wrong about those rumors. They’d had some very romantic moments in the gardens at night in the last few months, getting more comfortable with each other than they had in the past. Simply spending time with each other was grand, the best, A Plus, Number One. Baseball, Hot Dogs, Applegate Chevrolet… huh, that was a commercial she’d forgotten about until now.

just looked it up, its apple pie not applegate, and it's a really old commercial, from the '80s or '90s when an advertising campaign built around nationalism alone was a viable strategy