A idea for the last day of the potion effect, the Princess's setup an orgy and all four use an enhancing spell of him but it effects the potion as well, making it More potent (per spell) and makes it Permanent after the forth is cast?
Pretty good so far! Nice touch having Rarity and Sweetie Belle at the same time, and then a shower scene with Twilight. Very nice. Only thing is, and forgive me for saying this, but Ace kinda comes across as a little too perfect for my taste. Seriously, everything about him is just so ideal, it kinda makes him boring. But that’s my only complaint. The rest is good, and I can’t wait for more.
You know I have a doubt at the end the girls will end up falling in love with ace I say it from twilight about that flash and the way he likes it and zecora also will fuck her
Ah, so this is the story that you were talking to me about yesterday.
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why thank you
Great fic and to all to come.
A idea for the last day of the potion effect, the Princess's setup an orgy and all four use an enhancing spell of him but it effects the potion as well, making it More potent (per spell) and makes it Permanent after the forth is cast?
Great Story Friend Cant wait for the Next Chapter
Pretty good so far! Nice touch having Rarity and Sweetie Belle at the same time, and then a shower scene with Twilight. Very nice. Only thing is, and forgive me for saying this, but Ace kinda comes across as a little too perfect for my taste. Seriously, everything about him is just so ideal, it kinda makes him boring. But that’s my only complaint. The rest is good, and I can’t wait for more.
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Great story pls keep update it
This was a beyond awesome beginning I hope he bangs both Princesses and the other CMC including Babs.
You know I have a doubt at the end the girls will end up falling in love with ace I say it from twilight about that flash and the way he likes it and zecora also will fuck her
HOLY CRAP!!! THAT WAS AN AMAZING START!