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An accidental origin of raricow, and you have an appropriate cover for it too. Where did you find it?
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Cover image's artist is Mechacockzilla and the full picture is visible on Derpibooru (#588350).
Hmmm
Nice
Good stuff!
Sequel with rarity and applejack?
Thank you for commenting and liking the story! Really enjoyed writing this one and may write some epilogue soon ^^
Moo
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Very nice and primal the way she gets mounted, and the part with the milking machine is also a highlight of the story.
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“Uhhh… oh right… I’m sorry Applejack I just wanted to visit you but feel tired all of sudden, think I will go and take a lady nap” she yawned, she was so confused and just needed to rest “Sure sugar cube, I hope you will rest well” waved Applejack-- needs a new paragraph for a new speaker, has problematic punctuation and improper dialog tags. Overall in this story, grammar and typos are a major problem. This is just one particularly egregious example.-The narration is just as unfocused and sketchy as Rarity's thought processes ... and I'm not sure whether that's a good thing or not.
-Very cute how Applejack is in on it at the end.
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To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 83/100
Allure: 72/100
Enticement: 80/100
Immersion: 64/100
Prose Quality: 60/100
Total Score: 359/500
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I really hope you do as well. I did not know i was into cow rarity until I read this.
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The best clopfic by someone who's never published anything on Fimfic before. Don’t be nervous -- everybody’s a little awkward with it their first time.
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Funny story, now it looks like Applejack will be using Rarity as a cowgirl herself in her own "experiments"