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Dr Sharaz Jek
Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!
Dr Sharaz Jek
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Nice story.
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Thank you! Bon-Bon's my fave background pony, would love to write her more someday!
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-It’s not every day you see a pony and a human sharing a double-ended cucumber ... but the novelty is just about the only appeal this story has.
-The opening sounds like hammy actors rehearsing a play, not genuine things people might say.
-It’s nice to see the unusual combination, but I’m not sure what benefit this story gets from Bon Bon being human. It could have done far more with Bon Bon teasing her with hands and such.
-The ending is even more rushed than the already rushed story.
-Nice how you gave them physical differences when humanized and also gave them some differing personality traits.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 40/100
Allure: 35/100
Enticement: 20/100
Immersion: 60/100
Prose Quality: 90/100
Total Score: 245/500
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Two Pump Dump
Just because it didn't take very long doesn't mean it wasn't fun! And you can always go again after a little breather. Your clopfic was the shortest by Fimfic's word count!