10158752 It may come out today! It’s pretty emotional, if I say so myself. And I know that there are a few clichés, but I’m a starting writer! I gotta use some tropes to get comfy. Thanks for all the criticism!
10158752 Also, yeahhh, starting in the Everfree Forest may be a bit cliched, but they won’t stay there much time, and they’ll go to a lot of places ( griffinstone, Minotaur land, yachtyackistan, etcetera, etcetera, etcetera), and I didn’t start balls deep in the Everfree, I started in a relatively safe one.
“That’s enough for the report, general. We want to capture the creatures as soon as posible since they could hurt more po- ejem intelligent creatures . Please do note that one of the creatures has been capable of hurt and win a direct confrontation with an earth pony, and it’s suspected that they are resistant to magic, as you already said. Avoid direct confrontation at all cost, and please be careful,” said Twilight, scorching herself for the intelligent creatures commentary.
That kinda sounds like she’s only looking out for ponies.
The skin crawling scream could be heard all across Ponyville. The two guards that where watching the street bellow looked alarmingly at each other, and so did the guard that was coming to replace the spot. The three pegasus did not say anything to each other, they simply flew to as fast as possible to the house just bellow, and occasion that two shadows took advantage while guffawing and carrying bags and a stick.
“STOP, ROYAL GUARD,” exclaimed the only male pegasus.
Did he see them?
“So that’s why she talks that way! Huh, interesting. Anyways, how do you think she’s in sex? A top, or a bottom,” asked the first mare pegasus.
That’s what guards talk about these days?
“Don’t say that. Those two are sneaky as fuck, and, if they are discovered, Hugo has a big stick to swing around, and Julio can punch al Jojo style.
What does that look like?
“Anyways, here’s the food. We have apples, pie, cupcakes, muffins, pickles, cookies, oranges, all that good shit,” said Hugo while getting out each mentioned food.
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Oh no, I get it, but that is not how it is gonna go. Pssst. Do you want me to tell you how it will go?
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C’mon, I’m pretty excited
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Hey, are you there?
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It may come out today! It’s pretty emotional, if I say so myself. And I know that there are a few clichés, but I’m a starting writer! I gotta use some tropes to get comfy. Thanks for all the criticism!
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Also, yeahhh, starting in the Everfree Forest may be a bit cliched, but they won’t stay there much time, and they’ll go to a lot of places ( griffinstone, Minotaur land, yachtyackistan, etcetera, etcetera, etcetera), and I didn’t start balls deep in the Everfree, I started in a relatively safe one.
That kinda sounds like she’s only looking out for ponies.
Did he see them?
That’s what guards talk about these days?
What does that look like?
Damn, they didn’t save Sugar Rush sh*t.