Arrival Of A God
Marcus, being now a full blooded saiyan, had a huge appetite and ate a lot of food and decided to train a little bit. That was until Whis called him over.
“Marcus you might want to come over here. I think this will peak your interest.” He flew over to Whis and looked over his shoulder. There his staff had an image of a planet that seemed to harbor life. Marcus then cocked his head.
“Uhh what is this supposed to mean Whis? Is this another planet I have to destroy?”
“If you desire. But this planet is filled with multicolored equines called ponies. Their rulers control the sun and moon respectively.” Marcus nodded and let him continue. “It seems as if the land of where they reside is in some sort of danger. Knowing you, you would like to help and fight as well.” Marcus chuckled a bit.
“Well Whis can we go there now?” Whis nodded as Marcus started to brush his tail.
“Alright, lets go Whis!” And with a flash of light that engulfed them, they was gone.
With another flash of light, the two appeared in what appeared to be some sort of cave that they came in. Marcus floated above the ground with his arms behind his back until he heard voices from the other corner and so did Whis. This surprised Marcus and Whis when they turned to see two equines.
“The fuck?” Marcus whispered to no-one in particular as The pink unicorn pushes the purple one behind her.
“So you came to finish us off Changelings, but your disguise makes it obvious what you are.” Cadence spits out as Marcus rolled his eyes as Whis laughed at their ignorance.
“Changeling? We are no Changeling, but just go-” He was interrupted as Cadence shot magic at him which quickly was shot by Marcus’ ki blast. He then looked at her with an unamused expression.
“Looks like I’m no changeling. That kind of ignorance is punishable by me eradicating you from existence. But nah...” He said as he stretched.
“How did you do that?” Twilight asks in awe.
“Ki. some lifeforce energy of all living beings and Whis and I have God-ki. So are we cool?” Marcus said as she looked him up and down. She nodded.
Cadence comes up to him and bows apologetically, “Please forgive my actions, I am Princess Mi Amore Cadenza please call me Cadence.” He nods, understanding what kind of situation there is right now. He then gazed over to Whis who was currently talking to an occupied Twilight as he then cocked an eyebrow. She then gasped at her rudeness.
“Oh and I am Twilight Sparkle.” she introduces. He then bows respectively.
“Now my title might sound bad, but my name is Marcus. God of Destruction of this universe. This here is my associate slash mentor Whis.” Cadence and Twilight were shocked as Whis gave an affirmative nod.
“I am not here to destroy this planet, I am here to merely help. Think of it as my generosity.” Marcus said as they gulped out of nervousness. A cruel laughter echoed in the cave as Marcus ears and tail twitched.
“We have to get out of here.” Twilight says before looking at the two, “Will you two come with us to help stop her and meet Princess Celestia I’m sure she would be interested in meeting you two.” she asked him and Whis nodded.
“Alright girls, lead the way!” Marcus said as the four ran (except Whis and Marcus, they both floated at the two’s pace). Cadence was singing while they were running to the Minecart. Cadence tries to push the Cart with her strength but in her weakened State it’s not enough, Twilight uses her Magic to lift the stones out and put Cadence inside. Marcus then pushed the cart with ease, sending the four hurtling down a spiral deeper into the caverns before hitting a sudden spot sending up flying through the air. Whis and Marcus stabilized as the other two landed on a small rocky alcove blocked by a bunch of rocks.
“Oh no it’s a dead end.” Cadence says in panic pushing on the wall.
In the distance above they could hear the faint voice of Celestia speaking of the wedding ceremony.
“Oh, we’re never going to save him.” Cadence says in despair.
“We will just have to find…” Twilight says looking for another way.
“How about up there? I assume that's where the ceremony is at.” Whis said, pointing his staff to see a beam of light.
“Good eye Whis!” Marcus said as he smiled.
They were enveloped by magenta aura before finding themselves along with Cadence and Twilight on the upper part of the cavern.
“Well that was interesting.” Whis comment.
“You’re not going anywhere” Whis looked up to see Lyra Heartstrings, Minuette, and Twinkleshine walking towards them with Glowing Green eyes speaking in a Zombie like tone walking towards them.
Twilight and Cadence walked backwards reaching the edge of the cliff.
“What do we do?” Twilight asks.
“If only my Bouquet hadn't been destroyed, maybe we could have used that as a distraction.” Cadence laments. Marcus grabs them both which surprises them as he flies upward, but not before tapping his foot on the ground. Causing raw ki to knock them back. Whis followed.
“How did you-” “God ki. Be thankful and please, save the questions for later.” Marcus interrupted her.
“Right.” Twilight nods as well as Cadence as the four of them ran towards the wedding would be taking place.
‘Princess Cadence and Shining Armor, it is my great pleasure to pronounce you…” They hear the tail end of Celestia’s speech.
“STOP!” Twilight yelled out.
The crowd of Ponies were muttering and Rarity facehoof.
“Ugh, Why does she have to be so possessive of her brother?” Chrysalis-Cadence huffed out stomping her hoof.
Celestia looked as the Cadence next to her in surprise.
“Why does she have to ruin my Special Day?” Chrysalis-Cadence says trying to correct her mistake.
“Because it’s not YOUR Special day it’s MINE!” Cadence says walking into the wedding hall.
Everypony gasped seeing another Cadence, Marcus was leaning on a pillar outside the wedding hall so he was able to see but not be seen.
“What, but how did you escape my bridesmaids?” Chrysalis-Cadence asked.
“They had… a god’s help.” Marcus said, coming into view as his tail was swishing side to side as Whis was beside him. He yawned and stretched.
“Now then… I guess I’ll destroy you now.” Marcus said as he held out his hand as a ki blast formed at the end of it. Everyone gasped as Marcus had a calm expression.
“What in tarnation is that thing? A monkey?” Applejack said as Marcus then pointed his hand with the ki blast at her. Everyone felt his god ki, but couldn't sense it, only felt the pressure of the ki. He then made the ki dissipate. He then sighed.
“Don’t. Call. Me. That. Please?” He said calmly. She nodded rapidly.
“Oh that Outfit.” Rarity obviously had said that.
Whis and Marcus waved at them all casually “Hello there. I’m Whis and this young saiyan is the God Of Destruction Marcus.” Whis said calmly as Celestia bowed out of fear. True, there was no need for kai’s or Gods but they still heard about them from legends. However, Chrysalis did not believe this nonsense and just laughed.
“Hmph even if you managed to find bizarre looking creatures to help you escape the caves you’re still too late.” Chrysalis-Cadence taunts them.
“I don’t understand, how can there be two of them?” Applejack asks referring to the Two Cadences.
“She’s a changeling, she takes the form of somepony you love and gains power by feeding off your love for them!” Cadence reveals to everyone else.
Chrysalis's eyes glow green in rage before her body is enveloped in an emerald green flame tearing away her disguise revealing her true bug like form.
“Right you are, Princess.” Chrysalis says with an evil laugh, “And as Queen of the Changelings, it is up to me to find food for my subjects.”
“Equestria has more love then anyplace I’ve ever encountered my fellow changelings will be able to devour so much of it that we will gain more power than we have ever dreamed of!.” Chrysalis says descending down the steps from the altar stopping in front of Cadence.
Whis and Marcus teleported right beside Cadence.
“They’ll never get the chance, Shining Armor’s protection spell will keep them from even reaching us.” Cadence snaps at the being who had imprisoned her.
“Oh, I doubt that.” Chrysalis says with an amused snicker, “Isn’t that right, Dear?” she asks Shining Armor mockingly in front of Cadence.
“Mmm Hmm.” Shining Armor says with a blank nod.
Cadence tries to run up to her fiance but is stopped by Chrysalis.
“Ah, Ah, Ah don’t wanna go back to the caves now, do you?” Chrysalis threatens Cadence her horn glowing menacingly.
Cadence took a wary step back.
“No need bug. I already know your ki signature and will track you down with little to no troubles.” Marcus said, tapping his forehead. She growled at him but he didn’t care at all. Her power was very weak anyways.
“Ever since I took your place, I’ve been feeding off Shining Armor’s love for you every moment he grows weaker and so does his spell, even now my minions are chipping away at it.” Chrysalis says flying up to the altar and walking behind Shining Armor.
Everypony looked up at the roof in horror at the thought of an army just outside.
“He may not be my husband, but he is under my total control now.” Chrysalis says rubbing Shining Armor’s Muzzle.
Twilight and Cadence gasped in shock.
“And I’m sorry to say unable to perform his duties as Captain of the Royal Guard.” Chrysalis mocks.
“Not my Shining Armor!” Cadence says in horror. Marcus just started to play with his tail. He was weary to fight.
“Don't worry, he’ll be free from her grasp.” Marcus said as she gave him a determined look.
Chrysalis laughs, “You think you will be able to save this Pony, soon my changeling Army will break through first we take Canterlot and then all of Equestria.”
“No you won’t.” Celestia interrupts walking forward anger in her eyes, “You may have made it impossible for Shining Armor to perform his spell, but now that you have so foolishly revealed your true self, I can protect my subjects from you.” she says butting horns with Chrysalis before flying up unleashing a powerful beam of energy.
Chrysalis counters with a Green beam that goes back and forth for a moment before it overwhelms Celestia knocking her crown off and her down.
“Ah Shining Armor’s love for you is even stronger than I thought consuming it has made me even more powerful than Celestia.” Chrysalis comments. Marcus then suddenly attacked her.
“YOU DIRTY LITTLE MONKEY!” Chrysalis growled as Marcus smiled.
“Now then… show me what your pathetic love can do to a god of destruction!” Marcus yelled as she shot a beam at him, only for him to blast it with a ki blast. He then punched her in the gut to stun her for a little bit he then charged up his ki and then flew into the air while Whis accompanied the girls to get the elements.
“I’ll just consume more love to end you!” She shouted as Marcus shook his head.
“What a disappointment. I thought you would be stronger than me without feeding on him. But I guess not.” He then teleported in front of her and grabbed her, then put his hand on her face which she tried to shake off. Then, infusing a yellow ki into her through his palm by having it cover her body as an aura, then he releases and the ki explodes, injuring her and sending flying back.
“Such a pity.” He said as he made a ‘tsk tsk’ noise. Somehow a Changeling got the jump on him and hit him, but to no effect he then grabbed the changelings hoof tightly and by extending one of his hands, with his four main fingers straight up and his thumb crossing his palm horizontally, he said the magic word:
“Hakai.”
Suddenly, the changeling started to disappear into nothing as the Changeling screamed in agony as he then let it go. Chrysalis was terrified. What did he just do?
“What are you?!” Chrysalis yelled in fear. He still had a calm expression.
“A god.” He stated plainly as she was paralyzed by her own fear. Celestia watched in pure terror.
He then claps his hands together and creates a purple-colored atom-shaped energy sphere that he holds on the tip of his finger, able to bounce it with his hands, feet, tail, anywhere on his body. He then launches the attack by kicking it like a soccer ball towards his opponent, which inflicted a huge amount of damage. She was flung into the wall and busted right through two others.
“NOOOOOooooooooo…..” She screamed until he didn’t hear her anymore.
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Hey that’s pretty good
continue ?
This is a pretty good story
Nice! I am happy to say that I am enjoying this story! It's too bad that there aren't more chapters yet, so I will have to read something else until it's updated again. Go beyond! Plus Ultra!
Ok that was awesome
Congratz, you got featured. 3/20/2020
Writing isn't great...But I'll still give it a follow. It's early days yet.
Interesting. I look forward to seeing how this story goes. I give it two thumbs up. Keep up the good work
I'm sorry, but the writing needs quite a bit of editing, and some things that happen in the story don't make much sense.
Just to give one example, why would Cadance assume that a couple of weird creatures she's never seen before are changelings in disguise? Changelings (according to her) disguise themselves as somepony their intended victim loves. Turning into two bizarre strangers doesn't make any sense.
Finally I've been waiting for a fanfic that involves a god of destruction and i think this fanfic is not so bad i did enjoy it this far 😁
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Glad you liked it
here's a bulla and beerus pic
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Aww that adorable and thx 😁
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I want more!!!
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Alright, alright I'm on it. The next chapter would be probably out this friday. Until then, stay calm dude.
The dialogue seemed forced. No one acted like real people.
The story dialogue is to exact from the show. Besides that it's good.
That was a awesome chapter but a little cruel I feel sorry for Chrysalis.
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He could've did what he did to the changeling that jumped him.