In the fractured land of Equestria, hundreds of floating island scatter the sky's. Many factions reside in the sky's, but one of the most peculiar are the Storm Dragons.
Hrmmmm never thought I'd say this lol but A same as with twins swords you have 100% free reign to use red if you want only thing is ask make him hilarious and same as the show goes with different faction's that are not on either side or a badguy would be interesting to see him portrayed as a badguy lol but I love this and I love snarky spike
you're missing the apostrophe before the s there. A common error, I see far too often. Just remember to keep the rules about apostrophes in mind moving forward.
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Hrmmmm never thought I'd say this lol but A same as with twins swords you have 100% free reign to use red if you want only thing is ask make him hilarious and same as the show goes with different faction's that are not on either side or a badguy would be interesting to see him portrayed as a badguy lol but I love this and I love snarky spike
This was a awesome lore chapter.
This reminds me of an old TV series called storm hawks
you're missing the apostrophe before the s there. A common error, I see far too often. Just remember to keep the rules about apostrophes in mind moving forward.
You might want to look into getting a writing aid, like Grammarly, it can help to spot those little grammatical errors that can have a tendency to escape notice a first glance.