This feels very rushed and half-baked compared to Apples and Oranges: I think it might need a little extra time and attention before you go to release future chapters. The concept's cute and solid, but... Yeah, it just feels flimsy at the moment.

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I'd argue that with more chapters, I'm putting more time and development into this story than its prequel. So I would have to respectfully disagree, but thanks for the constructive criticism. I'll keep that in mind.

Did I already told you about a dragon having a griffoness maid?