Inside the Death Star, Governor Moff Tarkin and a Chief Officer stand in the control room surveying the scene.
“We’ve analyzed their attack sir, and there is a danger,” The Officer warned. “Should I have your ship standing by?”
“Evacuate? In our moment of triumph?” Tarkin questioned. “I think you overestimate their chances!”
Tarkin turned toward the computer readout screen. Flames move around the green disk along the center of the screen. Numbers read across the bottom.
“Rebel Base, three minutes and closing…” A voice spoke.
One way or another, Tarkin was seeing this battle all the way to the bitter end. But there was no doubt in his mind that victory was at hand. Soon the rebellion will fall, the Empire will rise, and the entire galaxy will be in the palm of their hands. No one in the universe will stop them now…
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Meanwhile, the battle heats up along the Death Star, as the Rebel fighters go head-to-head against the Empire. The Gold team recently perished in their attempt to reach the exhaust pole leaving very few of the Rebel fighters left. Red Leader looked over at his wingmen.
“Red group, this is Red Leader,” Red Leader spoke.
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Listening from the War Room, the Equestrians anxiously hear the commotion while Dodonna moved toward the intercom fiddling with the computer keys.
“Rendezvous at mark six point one,” Red Leader instructed, over speaker.
“This is Red Two,” Wedge answered. “Flying toward you.”
“Red Three, standing by,” Biggs spoke, over speaker.
“Red Leader, this is Base One,” Dodonna reported, over headset. “Keep half your group out of range for the next run.”
“Copy, Base One,” Red Leader responded. “Luke, take Red Two and Three. Hold up here and wait for my signal… to start your run. Element Three provide covering fire.”
“Roger Red Leader!” Rainbow Dash nodded.
The X-wing fighters of Luke, Biggs, and Wedge flew in formation high above the Death Star’s surface. Luke peered from his cockpit as two x-wings move across the surface of the Death Star. Red Leader’s X-wing dropped down to the surface leading to the exhaust port.
Red Leader looked around for TIE fighters, as he began to perspire.
“This is it!”
Red Leader roamed down the trench of the Death Star, as lasers streak across the black heavens. A huge remote-control laser cannon fired at the approaching Rebel fighters, who narrowly evaded the Imperial laser blasts. Red Ten looked around if any Imperial fighters showed up.
“We should be able to see it by now,” Red Ten spoke.
From the cockpits of the Rebel pilots, the surface of the Death Star streaked by, with Imperial laser fire shooting toward them.
“Keep your eyes open for those fighters!” Red Leader instructed.
“There’s too much interference!” Red Ten called.
Three X-wing fighters move In formation down the Death Star trench.
“Red Five, can you see them from where you are?” Red Ten’s voice asked.
Luke searched the Death Star surface below.
“No sign of any… wait!” Luke spotted.
Red Ten looked up and saw the Imperial fighters.
“We got fighters coming in point three five!” Rainbow Dash reported.
“I see them,” Red Ten confirmed.
Three TIE fighters, Vader flanked by two wingmen, dove in tight formation. The sun reflected off their dominant solar fins as they looped toward the Death Star’s surface. Red Leader pulled his targeting device in front of his eyes, applying several adjustments.
“I’m in range!” Red Leader reported.
Red Leader’s X-wing moved up toward the Death Star trench.
“Target’s coming up!”
Red Leader looks through his computer target readout screen, gazing through the device.
“Just hold them off for a few seconds.”
Meanwhile, Vader adjusted his control lever and dove toward the X-wing fighters.
“Close up formation,” Vader instructed.
The three TIE fighters move in formation across the Death Star surface. Red Leader lined up his target on the targeting device cross hairs. Vader and his wingmen zoomed along the trench, Vader rapidly approaching the two X-wings of Red Ten and Red Twelve. Vader’s laser cannon flashed below the view of the front porthole. The X-wings showed in the center of Vader’s computer screen.
Red Twelve’s X-wing fighter was struck by Vader’s laser fire, exploding into flames against the trench.
“They’re getting killed down there!” Rainbow shouted, through the headset. “We gotta do something—”
*BAM! BAM! BAM!*
Laser fire zipped passed Rainbow’s ship, drawing the Equestrian to look up. Additional TIE fighters were approaching their formation, firing toward the group. Rainbow Dash was not having it.
“Oh you did not just try to shoot at me!”
Rainbow Dash quickly broke from formation and furiously punched the button on the stick, sending a wave of fire power toward the TIE fighters. Most of the fighters exploded upon impact, the rest split off to avoid the mad fighter as Rainbow Dash pulled back trying to rejoin her squad.
Meanwhile, Red Ten furiously worked his controls, trying to avoid Vader’s fighter behind him.
“You’d better let her loose!” Red Ten called Red Leader. “They’re right behind me.”
Unfortunately for Red Ten, Red Leader’s focus was on his targeting device.
“Almost there!”
“I can’t hold them!” Red Ten panicked.
“Just hang in there Red Ten!” Rainbow called.
Vader and his wingmen whipped through the trench in hot pursuit of the Rebel fighters. Vader coolly pushed the fire button on his control stick. Darth Vader’s well-aimed laser fire proved unavoidable, striking Red Ten’s ship. Red Team screamed in anguish and pain, as the ship exploded and burst into flames.
“RED LEADER, TAKE THE SHOT!!!” Rainbow shouted.
Grimly, Red Leader took careful aim and watched his computer targeting device, which showed the target lined in the cross hairs. He took fire.
“It’s away!” Red Leader shouted.
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*BOOM!!!*
An armed Imperial stormtrooper was knocked to the floor due to the attack explosion. Other troopers scurried about the corridors, knocking against the wall and losing their balance.
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In the war room, Leia and the others stare at the computer screen.
“They hit it!” Pinkie shouted.
“But did he hit the target?!” Spike asked.
“Negative,” Red Leader spoke, over speaker.
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Red Leader looked back at the receding Death Star. Tiny explosions are visible in the distance.
“Negative! It didn’t go in. It just impacted on the surface.”
“Red Leader! Vader’s on the prowl!” Rainbow shouted. “Six o’clock!”
Darth Vader peeled off in pursuit, as Red Leader’s X-wing passed on the Death Star horizon. Vader swung his ship around for the next kill. Luke tried to spot Red Leader, scanning around the Death Star surface.
“Red Leader, we’re right above you!” Luke informed. “Turn to point o-five, we’ll cover for you.”
“Stay there!” Red Leader ordered, over headset.
A wary Red Leader looked about nervously.
“… I just lost my starboard engine.”
Luke looked excited toward Red Leader’s X-wing.
“Get set to make your attack run,” Red Leader concluded.
Vader’s gloved hands contact the control sticks, pressing their firing buttons. Just as Red Leader fought for control of his ship, laser bolts flung from Vader’s TIE fighter. The blasts connected with Red Leader’s Rebel X-wing fighter. Red Leader screamed as the ship zoomed toward the surface below.
Luke and Rainbow looked out their X-wing windows as a tremendous explosion ignited far below. For the first time, they could feel helpless of the situation.
“Celestia help us…” Rainbow prayed.
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In the meantime, Grand Moff Tarkin cast a sinister eye toward the computer screen.
“Rebel base, one minute and closing,” The intercom spoke.
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In the war room of Massassi outpost, Dodonna, Princess Leia, and the Equestrians, with 3PO beside them, listen intently to the talk between the pilots. The room’s grim after Red Leader’s death, as Princess Twilight Sparkle paced around the room.
“They’ve just lost both leaders,” Twilight panicked. “They’re on their own out there! What’re we going to do?!”
“Calm yourself Twilight,” Storm advised. “We’re not out of this fight just yet. All we can do is hope our remaining pilots can pull through.”
“Biggs, Wedge, let’s close it up!” Luke ordered, over speaker. “We’re going in full throttle. That’ll keep those fighters off our back.”
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The horizon twisted as Wedge pulled out.
“Right with you, boss,” Wedge confirmed.
The two X-wings peeled off against a background of stars, diving toward the Death Star.
“Luke, at that speed will you be able to pull out in time?” Biggs asked.
“It’ll be just like Beggar’s Canyon back home,” Luke replied.
The three X-wings moved in, unleashing a barrage of laser fire. Laser bolts returned from the Death Star. Luke’s lifelong friend struggled with his controls.
“We’ll stay back far enough to cover you,” Biggs spoke.
“I’ve got you boys covered,” Rainbow Dash spoke, looming over. “Those TIE fighters are not getting passed me this time.”
Flak and laser bolts flash outside Luke’s cockpit window.
“My scope shows the tower, but I can’t see the exhaust port!” Wedge spoke, over headset. “Are you sure the computer can hit it?”
The Death Star laser cannon slowly rotated as it shot laser bolts. Luke looked around for the Imperial TIE fighters. Thinking for a moment, he moved his targeting device into position.
“Watch yourself!” Luke warned. “Increase speed full throttle!”
Wedge looked excitedly about for any sign of the TIE fighters.
“What about the tower?”
“You worry about those fighters!” Rainbow shouted. “I’ll deal with the tower!”
Rainbow’s X-wing streaked above the trench, firing lasers.
Luke broke into a nervous sweat as the laser fire returned, knocking one of his wings close to the engine.
“R2…” Luke called. “… That, that stabilizer’s broken loose again! See if you can’t lock it down!”
R2 worked to repair the damages. The canyon wall rushed by in the background, making his delicate task seem more precarious. Two laser cannons fire toward the Rebel fighters. While firing at the towers, Rainbow looked up and spotted the TIE fighters.
“These guys don’t know when to quit!” Rainbow muttered.
Luje’s targeting device marked off the distance to the target, while Vader and his wingmen zoomed closer. Vader adjusted his controls and fired laser bolts at two X-wings flying down the trench. He scored a direct hit on Wedge.
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Leia and the others grouped around the computer board, watching anxiously.
“I’m hit!” Wedge spoke, over speaker. “I can’t stay with you.”
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“Get clear, Wedge!” Luke advised. “You can’t do any more good back there!”
“Sorry!”
Wedge pulled his crippled X-wing back away from the battle. Vader watched the escape but issued a command to his wingmen.
“Let him go! Stay on the leader!”
Luke’s X-wing sped down the trench; the three TIE fighters, still in perfect unbroken formation, tail close behind. Biggs, growing worried, looked around at the TIE fighters.
“Hurry Luke, they’re coming in much faster this time!” Biggs panicked. “I can’t hold them!”
The three TIE fighters moved ever closer, closing in on Luke and Biggs. Luke looked back anxiously at little R2.
“R2, try and increase the power!”
Ignoring the bumpy ride, flak, and lasers, a beeping R2-D2 struggled to increase the power, his dome turning from side to side. Stealthily, the TIE formation crept closer. Vader adjusted his control stick. Rainbow saw the TIE fighters approaching Biggs’ ship. Luke looked into his targeting device. He moved it away for a moment, pondering its use. He looked back into the computer target system.
“Hurry up, Luke! Quick!” Biggs shouted, over headset.
“Hang on Biggs!” Rainbow said loudly. “I’m coming!”
The cyan girl quickly turned her ship toward Vader’s direction, pushing full throttle speed toward him. Vader and his wingmen raced through the Death Star trench. Biggs moved in to cover for Luke, but Vader was gaining. Biggs saw the TIE fighters aiming at him.
“QUICK!”
Vader squeeze the fire button on his controls. Biggs’ cockpit exploded around him, lighting him in red. Biggs’ ship burst into a million flaming bits, scattering across the surface.
“BIGGS!!!” Rainbow yelled.
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Leia and the others stared at the computer board. The girls, Spike, and Storm were all in shock that Biggs was blown sky high. Fluttershy sobbed as she hugged Rarity closely, the latter trying to comfort her. Pinkie’s hair deflated once again, as her somber nature took over. Applejack hung her head low as she tipped her hat in respect.
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Luke, stunned by Biggs’ death, felt his eyes watering. But also, anger growing.
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Grand Moff Tarkin watched the projected target screen with satisfaction.
“Rebel base, thirty seconds and closing,” The intercom announced.
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Vader took aim on Luke, talking to the wingmen.
“I’m on the leader,” Vader informed.
“Oh no you don’t!!!” Rainbow yelled, turning the ship.
“Dash, what’re you doing?!” Luke asked. “It’s too dangerous.”
“No way I’m losing another friend to that big-masked moron! YAH!!!!!!”
Rainbow Dash furiously pressed the button on the stick, firing lasers toward Vader’s ship. Somehow Vader expertly dodged every shot, as Rainbow kept the ship in range. Eventually, Dash had no choice but to pull up to avoid crashing into Vader’s ship struggling to regain formation. While Dash kept Vader distracted, Luke’s ship streaked through the trench of the Death Star.
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Princess Leia returned her general’s worried, doubtful glances with solid, grim determination. 3PO seemed nervous.
“Hang on, R2!”
“They’re gonna make it!” Storm spoke nervously. “They have to make it! C’mon…”
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Luke concentrated his targeting device, as the three TIE fighters charged away down the trench toward Luke. Vader’s fingers curled around the control stick; Luke adjusted the lens of his targeting device. Luke’s ship charged down the trench as he lined the yellow cross-hair lines of the targeting device’s screen. He gazed through the targeting device, ready to take his shot.
“Use the force, Luke,” Ben’s voice spoke.
As the Death Star trench zoomed by, Luke looked up after hearing the voice. He started to look back into the targeting device but was having second thoughts.
“Let go, Luke…”
Grim determination swept across Luke’s face, as he closed his eyes and started mumbling Ben’s training to himself. Rainbow could see Luke’s fighter streak through the trench.
“What’s he doing?” Rainbow thought.
“The Force is strong with this one!” Vader thought.
Vader followed Luke’s X-wing down the trench. Luke looked through the targeting device, then away trying to decide what to do.
“Luke, trust me…” Ben’s voice insisted.
Finally, Luke’s hand reached for the control panel… and pressed the button. The targeting device moved away.
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Leia and the others stand watching the projected screen.
“He turned it off!” Twilight gasped, in shock. “Why’d he do that?”
“Luke, you switched off your targeting computer,” Base voiced, over speaker. “What’s wrong?”
“Nothing,” Luke’s voice answered. “I’m all right.”
Unable to take it anymore, Applejack grabbed a headset from a nearby technician.
“Rainbow! Can y’all hear me!” Applejack called out, distressed. “Why did Luke switch off his targeting device?”
“You tell me! I’m as confused as you are!” Rainbow answered, over speaker.
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Luke’s ship streaked ever so closely to the exhaust port, as the Death Star surfaced streaked by. R2-D2 turned his head from side-to-side, beeping in anticipation. Rainbow could see all the action from above.
“I hope you know what you’re doing old man…” Rainbow voiced her thoughts.
The three TIE fighters, manned by Vader and his two wingmen, followed Luke’s X-wing down the trench. Vader maneuvered his controls as he looked at his doomed target. He pressed the fire buttons on his control sticks. Laser fire shoots toward Luke’s X-wing fighter. A large burst of Vader’s laser fire engulfed R2. The arms go limp on the smoking little droid, as he made a high-pitched sound like a scream.
“R2!!!!” Rainbow shouted.
Luke looked frantically back over his shoulder toward R2, as smoke billed out around the droid and sparks began to fly.
“I’ve lost R2!”
And R2’s beeping sounds slowly died out. Rainbow, bearing witness to it, felt tears streaming down her face as she slammed her fists on the controls in frustration!
“VADER!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Rainbow screamed.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=RCmehd6NzM4
I almost forgot both Biggs and Wedge were together in the initial trench run at the start. Probably why all their Final Fantasy counterparts are often joined at the hip.
The battle heats up as mass casualties occur from both sides of the field. The clock is ticking as our heroes make desperate events to blow the Death Star to kingdom come. But after losing a veteran captain after a failed bombing strike, it's now up to Luke and the remainder of his friends to carry on with the attack plan. Leave it to Vader to not only be a powerful Jedi warrior but a skilled pilot too (Course, if we've seen the prequel trilogy it's no surprise). The stress of war is really taking its toll on both sides, no one can afford to make a mistake.
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It would be easy to forget because we're so caught up with all the chaos happening in the battle. Hence why it wasn't so easy to edit it as close to what the script said as possible.
Holy... I'm having a hard time breathing right now
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The space fight of Yavin is always the most stressful part of this movie. All the characters we barely know and we have to watch them get blown to bits. And you start wondering if you're keeping to that initial thought of joining the army knowing 'this' is a risk.
WE’RE 30 SECONDS BEFORE DOOMSDAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!
They've lost just about their X-Wing fighters, and now R2s offline. Luke needs to trust in himself and the force.
All we can do now is trust in the will of the force
R2222222222!!! Biggggggssss! Noooo!
Come on, Luke...use the Force...! You can do it...!
Cool chapter
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Oh so true
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The force better work into Luke's favor. Time is not on his side right now.
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Trust in the force... not very easy for beginners.
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*Insert Pinkie Pie scene here*
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It sure was a cool scene. And we're nearly done with the project.
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Heh...
Hello! Sorry I’m late. I just came from the Sonic Revolution convention and went out on a Father’s Day lunch with my dad.
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Sounds awesome! I just picked up the Father's Day package my sister and I vouched for Dad's day tomorrow. I already booked a reservation at his favorite German pub just yesterday and the reservation is for tomorrow night.
Here it comes...
A short, but intense chapter. For the first time, our protagonists, Rainbow and Luke in particular, can do nothing to prevent the deaths of their companions; and there are only 30 seconds left before The Death Star has them in range. To top it off, R2D2 has being shotted (Rainbow really got mad now).
However, Ben Kenobi's voice appears again to help Luke once more. Hopefully it will work.
Oh boy, this is getting intense now.
*hyperventilating*
Meanwhile, back in Discord's Cinematic Adventures Theater
Discord's Cut
Meanwhile, back on Korriban
In the Valley of the Sith Lords, the Rainbooms and their Shadowbolt friends in Mandalorian suits charge into battle to rescue Sunset Shimmer, who is still out cold.
Third Sister: "GET THEEEMMM!!!!"
The Stormtroopers all opened fire on the Equestria Girls, who quickly scattered, while a noticeable few projected shields to save themselves from the laser blasts.
From their vambraces, the Shadowbolts emitted shields to deflect the lasers, while Lady Marshmallow conjured a wall of crystal shields to protect herself, while also hurling several of them at the attacking Stormtroopers.
Activating her geode's power, Kellogg walked up to a statue of a Sith Lord. Mustering every ounce of her super strength, she picked up the massive stone figure and chucked it at the Stormtroopers, who immediately scattered, with a few unfortunate ones being reduced to Imperial pancakes.
Also activating her geode's power, Skittles became a blur of rainbows as she zips through the ranks of the Stormtroopers, tapping on their shoulders, and taunting them to fire their weapons at her, like Sonic the Hedgehog.
Third Sister: "KEEP FIRING!! BLAST THAT GIRL TO KINGDOM COME!!!" (The Stormtroopers kept on firing blasts of lasers at Skittles, who continues to outmaneuver them, and mocking them)
Skittles: "Nah nah!" (Does a ballet twirl) "Ha ha!" (Does a breakdance – the helicopter) "Hehe!" (Does a flare breakdance) "Nah!" (Pulls her eyelid and stuck her tongue out) "Not even close!" (Twerks her backside and slaps on it to add insult to injury)
Third Sister: (Grows irritated) "You dare to MOCK US?!"
Skittles: (Does the Russian dance and dodges more laser blasts) "Ha ha! Nah nah! Missed me, missed me, now you gotta kiss me!"
Pinkamena Diana Pie: "HEY DASHIE! TRY THE OL' STRIKE OUT!!!"
Skittles: "OKAY!" (Zips next to a Stormtrooper and waves to another Stormtrooper) "YOO-HOO! Over here~! WHOA!" (Dodges a laser blast which hits the other Stormtrooper) "Ah-ah-ah!" (Waves her finger at the firing trooper, after he accidentally blast another of his comrades and hits a third one) "Three strikes! YOU'RE OUT!" (Steps to the side, to avoid a missile blast from Numbuh 4)
Numbuh 4: (To Skittles) "You're enjoying this way too much." (Exchanges high-fives)
During the fight, the Captain Stormtrooper, who was carrying Sunset's unconscious body was trying to snuck by unnoticed, only for Juniper Montage and the Bashful Butterfly to stop him.
Juniper Montage: "HEY! Where do you think you're going?"
Captain Stormtrooper: (Whips out a gun) "Out of my way!" (Gets the shotgun whipped out of his hand) "AH!!" (Turns his head in time to get hit with a two-legged flying kick by Numbuh 1, forcing him to drop Sunset Shimmer)
Numbuh 1: (To Juniper Montage and Bashful Butterfly) "GET SUNSET OUT OF HERE! QUICK!"
With that, Juniper Montage and Bashful Butterfly both linked Sunset's arms around their shoulders and carry the girl to safety. Back in the fight, Pinkamena Diana Pie was throwing sprinkle bombs, when she finds herself surrounding by some Stormtroopers.
Pinkamena Diana Pie: "Can we talk?" (All the Stormtroopers jumped on her, proceeding to beat the stuffing out of her) "Guess not." (Somehow, manages to escape, unharmed) "Pitiful." (Proceeds to watch the Stormtroopers beat the ground)
Meanwhile, Kellogg was squaring off with a Stormtrooper, wielding a Z6 Baton. The strong girl barely avoided the vanes from the baton, pulsing with electricities. However, the Stormtrooper skillfully spins the baton and catches her in the chest, which resulted in a powerful and painful blast that sent Kellogg flying a good distance away.
Kellogg: "AAAAAAHH!!! OH!" (Clutches the inflicted area) "Oh!! That's smart."
Riot control Stormtrooper: "AAAAAAAHHH!H!!" (Was about to bring his baton down on Kellogg, only for him to be stopped in mid-air)
Sci-Fi Twi: "Watch your back, AJ!" (Telekinetically throws the trooper away)
Seeing how the tide's not rolling in their favor, the Inquisitors had enough and leapt into the fray, stopping Juniper and the Bashful Butterfly from escaping with an unconscious Sunset Shimmer.
Juniper Montage: "WHAT THE–" (Gets punched by one of the sisters, while the other back fisted Bashful Butterfly to the ground, and the third one picks up Sunset Shimmer)
This catches the Equestria Girls' attentions.
Skittles: "OH NO! OUR SUNSET'S IN TROUBLE!!!" (Before she had time to react, however, a Stormtrooper jumped on her) "UGH!"
Kellogg: "C'mon y'all! We have to stop them!"
The Inquisitor sister carrying Sunset Shimmer, suddenly hears the sound of jetpacks roaring and turns around to see two of the Shadowbolts flying towards her. However, her two sisters quickly did some impressive flips and intercepted the Mandalorians out of the sky. The Inquisitor with Sunset Shimmer was about to turn and leave, when–
Skittles: "RARRRGGGHH!!!"
*WHAM!!*
Inquisitor: "AAAH!!!" (Falls from the attack and dropped Sunset Shimmer. Gets up with a crack on her visor and looks at Skittles) "So you want a fight?" (Unsheathes her crossguard lightsaber) "So be it."
Indigo Zap: "YO! RAINBOW DASH!" (Tussles with the Fifth Sister and took Darth Malgus’ lightsaber) "CATCH!" (Throws the said lightsaber to Skittles, who activates it)
Skittles: (Does a few spin with the old lightsaber, warming herself up and getting herself in-tuned with the Force and her inner Jedi, before she assumes a fighting stance) "Bring it!"
In the theater
Gallus: "ALRIGHT, SKITTLES!!! TAKE THEIR HEADS OFF!!!"
Bulk Biceps: "YEAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!
However, just as Skittles charges towards the Inquisitor and moments before they clashed sabers, the movie quickly cuts back to the assault on the Death Star.
Gallus: (Pouts) "AWWWW, COME ON!!!"
Apple Bloom: "Three minutes?!" (Turns to Sugarbelle and held her hoof for comfort)
Sweetie Belle turns to Erik and held his hoof for comfort, with the Phantom of the Opera held Sweetie Belle's hoof with both of his hooves.
Scootaloo: "C'mon, Rainbow Dash! You can do it!"
Flurry Heart: "Mommy?" (Princess Cadence quickly wrapped her hooves around her daughter's head, holding her close for comfort as they anxiously watch the battle taking place)
Button Mash: (Wrapping his hooves tighter around Tempest Shadow's face, who's still in a timeout) "SHOOT THEM!!!"
The Student Six: "GET VADER! GET VADER!!!"
Smolder: "BLAST HIM! AVENGE BEN KENOBI!"
Discord's Cut – Battle on Korriban
Billows of smokes and sparks rain down, on the ground of the valley, as two lightsaber duelists continued to clash. Skittles, EQG Rainbow Dash, engaged in an epic battle with one of the Inquisitor Sisters, was desperate to win, to save her friend, Sunset Shimmer.
Meanwhile, the other two Inquisitor Sisters were being held back by Skittles and friends' Mandalorian friends. Both sisters wielded their lightsabers as they fought against all five Mandalorians. The Shadowbolts in Mandalorian armors were rapidly firing several laser blasts as the two Inquisitors, while airborne, courtesy of their built-in jetpacks. But these rapid fires hardly care less as the Inquisitors skillfully deflected them with a wave and a spin of their lightsabers. Still, the Shadowbolts refuse to give up as they continued to pour heavy fire on the Inquisitors.
Pinkamena Diana Pie: "SURPRISE!" (Startles one of the Inquisitors, who gets hit on the face of her helmet, by a laser blast, causing her to stumble) "PEEK-A-BOO!!!" (Lobs a custard crime pie onto the other Inquisitor's visor, blinding her, wide open for a missile from one of the Mandalorians) "AAAAAH Guh guh guh guh guh!"
The Audience: "OH NOOOOOOOO!!!!"
Thorax: "THEY LOST ANOTHER ONE!!!"
Random pony: "THEY'RE ALL GONNA DIIIIIIIIEEEE!!!"
Spitfire: "GET OUTTA THERE, CRASH!!"
Discord's Cut
Skittles continued to swing and slash the lightsaber of a late Sith Lord at the Inquisitor sister, who continues to block and parry with her own lightsaber. Though, every time it seems as if Skittles's got the Inquisitor backed up against a wall, the bad sister always managed to weave her way around and attempts to stab Skittles from behind.
Skittles: "AH!!!" (Ducks her head to avoid a slash) "Oh you wanna do this the hard way?! WE'LL DO THIS THE HARD WAY!!! RAAARRRGHHH!!!"
Shining Armor: "C'mon, you guys! C'mon! C'mon!"
Pipsqueak: "They've just got to make it!"
Princess Luna: "...Anakin, please. Don't do it..."
Pharynx: "There goes another one!"
Button Mash: "NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!"
Trixie: "Starboard engine? Starlight? What does that mean?"
Starlight Glimmer: "Well, starboard means right. So I guess it means he can't turn right, or...he's sitting duck!"
Sunburst: "You mean, he's done for?!"
Gabby: "L-L-L-LOOK OUT!!! DARTH VADER'S COMING IN FOR AN ATTACK!!!"
Spitfire: "GET OUTTA THERE!!!"
Pharynx: "BANK LEFT! LEFT!"
Garble: "....NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!"
Discord's Cut
Skittles: "UGH!!!"
Skittles was thrown to a wall by a push of the Force, looking up in time to see the Third Sister charging towards her, with and slashed viciously slashed her lightsabers left, right, up, and down. Skittles barely dodged the intensive fiery blade as it cuts into the structures of the rustic stone walls behind her, leaving behind the marks.
Skittles: "ENOUGH!!!" (Jumps over the Third Sister, doing a front flip, lands behind the Inquisitor and rolls to the side to dodge an attack)
Skittles looked to the side, seeing the unconscious Sunset Shimmer being tended by Juniper Montage and Bashful Butterfly. Being the ever so loyal girl that she is, Skittles tightens her grip on Darth Malgus's lightsaber as she stares down at the Third Sister.
Skittles: "We're gonna leave this place and take our friend with us! And there's nothing you can do about it!"
Third Sister: "Not unless I take you first!"
With that, the fight resumes between the Inquisitor and Skittles. Though, Skittles will have to admit, this is battle is more difficult than anything she and her friends have ever contend with, back in their world....
The Audience: "ONE MINUTE?!!!"
Thorax: "Uhhhhh..." (Collapses on the floor and fainted)
Spitfire: "PICK UP THE PACE, RAINBOW CRASH!!! You can crash on the runway faster than that!"
Gallus: "Too bad you can't put your money where your mouth is, Prince Storm Butt! YOU'RE ABOUT TO BLOWN TO SMITHEREEN BY A GIANT MOON-SIZED BATTLE STATION!!!"
Sandbar: "C'mon! Hurry up you guys!"
Scootaloo: "Go Rainbow Dash! GO!"
The Audience: "NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!"
Gilda: (Still in a timeout and sucking her thumb) "Can someone please turn me around?"
Thorax: "Well, at least he got away with a few bumps and bruises..."
Thorax: "Look out, look out, look out! LOOK OUT! LOOK OUT! LOOK OUT!!!"
The audience: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!"
Back in the theaters, many of the audience all exchange condolences, though a lot of them were all crying tears for the loss of Biggs. Gallus and Silverstream were both bawling and holding each other close, with Smolder crying with Norbert(a) in her arms, and Flurry Heart and Princess Cadence were both hugging an even sadder and grieving Shining Armor.
Cheese Sandwich was crying a waterfall of tears, before he gives his crying baby boy, Lil'Cheese, for Maud Pie to hold, as he takes out a photograph. Somehow, he was on Tatooine, and happened to snag a photo of himself with a young Luke Skywalker, with Biggs, Wedge, and the others.
Cheese Sandwich: (Hugs the photo close) "Why? WHY?! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!!!!!"
Tender Taps: "THIRTY SECONDS?!!!"
Rumble: "Oh great! THIS IS IT! WE'RE DONE!!! OUR FRIENDS ARE GONERS! AND WE'LL PROBABLY BE NEXT!!!"
Snips: "I've never even had a special somepony!"
Snails: "Somepony find me a wife, and tell her I LOVE HER!!!" (Breaks down crying)
At the same time
Prince Blueblood: "I'M STILL STUCK IN A CHIMNEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYY!!!!!"
The Wonderbolts: "OH COME ON!!!"
Soarin: "How did he do that?!"
Grampa Gruff: "Don't do that! Don't give us hope, you YOUNG WHIPPER SNAPPER!!!"
Gallus: "Luke, what're you doing?"
Gallus: "Luke! SNAP OUT OF IT!!!"
Ocellus: "Omigosh, omigosh! OMIGOSH!!!"
Yona: "Yona can't look!" (Hides her eyes)
Sandbar: "HE'S BEHIND YOU, LUKE!! BEHIND YOU!!!"
Smolder: "HE'S LOST HIS MIND!!!"
Smolder: "Ben! If you can hear us, WHAT'RE YOU UP TO?!!!"
Silverstream: (Grabs Gallus by the throat and shakes him like a ragdoll) "TURN IT BACK ON!!!" (Gallus's face was turning blue...well, bluer)
Pharynx: "Uh oh..."
Sandbar: "HERE IT COMES!!!"
The Audience: "NOT THE ROBOT!!!"
Sunburst: "Oh now they've done it. They've gone and made her mad!"
Discord's Cut
Sword Art Online – Swordland
Back on Korriban, as Skittles continued to square with the Third Sister, while clutching tightly on Darth Malgus's lightsaber, when she felt a surge of angry emotions coming from her Equestrian counterpart.
Skittles: "RAAARRRGGGHHH!!!" (Proceeds to viciously slash the lightsaber at the Third Sister, while also throwing kicks, who finds herself overwhelmed) "Gotta go faster!"
Third Sister: (Struggles to hold up her defense) "How did you get this strong?!"
Skittles: "Faster!" (Slashed her lightsaber in a downward cut, to which the Third Sister blocked with a high block.)
Following the momentum, Skittles bounces off and spins the lightsaber for a spin attack, which the Third Sister also blocked, before finding their lightsabers interwoven and brought to the ground, leaving an opening for Skittles to land a kick to her helmet, shattering a good portion of her visor open. Shaking off the blow, the Third Sister retaliated with a thrust of her hand, firing a Force Lightning at Skittles, electrocuting the cyan girl.
Skittles: "AAAAUUGGGGHHH!!!" (Her life flashes before her eyes as she recalls a vision of herself and her friends when they were younger) "RRRRR!!!"
Kelloggs and Pinkamena: "RAINBOW DASH!!!" (Tries to go in to save their friend, but were pushed back by the Third Sister's other free hand)
Bashful Butterfly: "STOP IT!! YOU'RE HURTING HER!!!"
Third Sister: "That's the idea!" (Pours more into the Force Lightning on Skittles)
Skittles: "AAAAAAAAAUUUUUGGGGGHHH!!!" (Recalls a memory of herself and her friends being divided by Sunset Shimmer) "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!" (Remembers Princess Twilight Sparkle amending their friendship to defeat Sunset's reign of madness) "AAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGHHHHH!!!" (Remembers herself and the Rainbooms, plus a newly reformed Sunset Shimmer, banding together and defeating the Dazzlings)
Discord's Cut – Wallflower Blush
As the battle rages on outside – In the Valley and in every corners of the galaxy – in the darkest depths of the Sith Lord, Marka Ragnos's tomb, Wallflower Blush lies helpless, battered, and trapped under the stone slabs the Inquisitors have buried her under. She's practically buried six feet underground, it would seem. The girl had been crying nonstop at her recent failure of securing Sunset Shimmer's rescue. Even with a genuine lightsaber, she couldn't fend off the Inquisitors and their Stormtroopers. How could she? She barely had any lessons of being a Jedi. She was just, as they say, a Padawan. Why did Discord ever sent someone as inexperienced, or as bumbling as her alone, to rescue her fiery friend, she doesn't know.
But none of that matters now. She needs to escape from the rubbles and get back up to the surface to pursue the troopers, before they take Sunset away again. The problem is, she's not as strong as Applejack, her wand is in her pocket, where she can't reached at the moment, and her lightsaber's out of her reach.
Wallflower Blush: "ARRRGGGHH!!! RRRRRAAAARRRRR!!!" (Struggles to move the stones off of her) "HEEEEELLLLLPPP!!!! SOMEONE! HELP ME!!! Anyone? HELLO? PLEASE! I'M TRAPPED!!! I'M STUCK!!! PLEASE HELP!!! Please...please...help..."
Of course, there was no reply. Except for a few ghostly whispers that echoed around the tomb's interior. Wallflower Blush breaks down crying even more. Never had she felt so helpless, or lost. Her insecurity of her cursed invisibility is increased tenfold, as a newfound feeling of dread overwhelms her.
Who would ever help her? Who can come down to the tomb to save her, let alone hear her? What if they're all gone? What if her friends are all killed? What if the Equestrian Heroes have failed on their part? What if the Star Wars have ended in the Empire's victory? What if it's too late to save Sunset? No one, but the Inquisitors even knew she's down there. No one will ever come. It's just her.
She's doomed to be trapped in the tomb, with the impending fate of death, slowly, but surely approaching her. Just as she thought about death, she looked up, and her eyes widened in fear, as she was certain to see a pair of cold, lifeless eyes, staring back at her.
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The wallflower's girl felt her heart beating faster and faster with every passing seconds. The ghosts have come to claim her. She cries even louder, with tears pouring. Is this how it will end for her?
Wallflower Blush: "Sunset Shimmer...I'm sorry...I've failed you..."
Past Wallflower Blush: "I'm so ashamed."
Wallflower Blush: "Huh?" (Looks up and sees herself in the past)
Past Wallflower Blush: "When I first found the Memory Stone, I only erased little things – awkward hellos, saying the wrong thing, literally any public speaking..."
Past Sci-Fi Twi: "I've had plenty of awkward moments I wish I could erase, too."
Past Wallflower Blush: "But it's no excuse. I was so used to erasing memories that I got completely carried away. I'm sorry for everything."
Past Sunset Shimmer: "It's okay. I'm sorry, too. I may have stopped being mean, but a Great and Powerful friend helped me realize I still wasn't very nice to you. Everyone matters, Wallflower. No matter how insignificant or invisible they feel."
Present Wallflower Blush watches as a the memory rewinds a bit to a particular scene that stands out to her.
Past Sunset Shimmer: "Listen. I used to be just like you. Sure, I was popular, but I was lonely."
Past Wallflower Blush: "You're nothing like me, and I'm not lonely, because I have... plants! That sounded less lonely in my head." (Present Wallflower Blush too cringed a bit at that scene, before she recalls another important memory from Harry Potter)
Past Sunset Shimmer: "Well girls. This has been...an exciting adventure for us. I know for sure the girls back home will never believe this."
Past Wallflower Blush: "You can say that again."
Past Juniper Montage: "I'm right here and I don't believe it! There's a school of magic and we get to do awesome spells and tricks with it!" (Fangirlling) "Forget about movie magic! When I get home, I'm showing off some cool new magic tricks to my uncle!"
Past Sunset Shimmer: "Whoa, easy there, Juniper. I know how excited you are, but let's try and keep these magic business to a minimum."
Past Wallflower Blush: "Since when are you so concerned about keeping magic under control?" (Sunset turns to glare at Wallflower) "Uh, I mean...these kind of things always happen to us, almost every day, even when we're not at Hogwarts. So...don't you think it's becoming...a norm now?"
Past Sunset Shimmer: "Yeah, well, things have gotten quiet lately, from back home? So let's keep it that way, for the sake of our friends and family, alright?"
Past Juniper Montage: "Fine." (Holds out her wand) "But...we still get to keep these, for some...practice, right?"
Past Sunset Shimmer: "Well, there is an alliance being forged between Equestria and the Wizarding World. And I'm an Equestrian, while you two have gotten a taste of Equestrian magics yourselves so...I don't see why not. Besides, we're all students here."
Past Wallflower Blush: "Yeah, and well...if I may. Personally, I can't think of better classmates than you two!"
Past Juniper Montage: "GROUP HUG!!"
The three girls in Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, and Slytherin clothes joined each other in a hug...Present Wallflower Blush smiled tearfully to herself at the fond memory. Her times at Hogwarts were the first times she's ever felt closer to Sunset Shimmer than she ever felt before. Then, she recalls of a wise conversation she and her Equestria Girl "friends" overheard, back on Tatooine.
Wallflower Blush: "...the Force...the Force! The FORCE!" (Hesitates and begins to doubt herself) "...But can I really do it?" (Shook her head) "No, no Wallflower. No time for that. Sunset needs you!" (Sniffles as she strains to concentrate and muster up her strength) "If the Force is like Equestrian magic. Then this...should be...a cinch! GRRR!" (Grunts loudly as she begins to move and squirm beneath the rubbles) "C'mon, friendship! Friendship is magic! Friendship is magic! Don't fail me now! GRRRRR!!!"
Soon enough, the rubbles begin to move as she starts to make progress and was able to stand up on her hands and knees. Though sore, aching, and slightly numb from the heavy weights she's endured, Wallflower Blush quickly stood her ground as she picked up the stone slab, off of her, and finally, with one last triumphant roar, she stood back up on her feet.
Wallflower Blush: "RAAAARRRRGGGHHH!!!!" (Throws the rock off of her, causing a cloud of dust to kick up, and she coughed, successfully banishing her the demons that have plagued her)
Holding her hand out, driven by instinct, Wallflower Blush summons her Lightsaber back into her hand, before she sets her sight back on the flight of stairs, leading the way out, and to where Sunset Shimmer is waiting for her. She limped and staggered a bit, since the rubbles did a number on her legs. But like her friends, Wallflower is undeterred.
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That was awesome as always, Doc! Also...
TMNT 2: The Secret of the Ooze reference!
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Excellent. Brilliant work!!!
.... How. How are you this good at writing. I've seen the film SEVERAL TIMES HOW IS THIS MAKING ME TENSE?!?!
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that what you get from great writer such as mr.e the way he brought the story to live is a work of art of it own
---Please Stand By: Reserved For Next Chapter---
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I surprise grey squadron has appear in this fanfic yet.
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You rock you know that
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Hard work and dedication to the craft. And it's vital to have a strong vision in mind.
More please
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Do I detect a hint of Spider-Man homecoming there?
If so, ingenious move my friend.
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George Lucas would be very proud
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George Lucas would be very proud
Bright and early, and ready, Mr. E.
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The last chapter should be up later today. Worked on it with Mr. E all last night.
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Wow, that was intense!!! Great job!