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Poor Cream.
Four views, 15 ratings. What the hell?
Non-consensual?
DOWNVOTE!
I bet that's what it is.
It was perfect
Just read it. looks good, but I feel there was a lot of emotion left out of this. Like, she could've pleaded her husband for help while being raped and he'd just tell her to shut up or something while he sleeps. Or when she was about to scream, the intruder could've smacked her face against something to keep her dazed, but aware of what's happening.
And I couldn't work with the antagonist's attitude about the situation. Like, I didn't see his sick lust through this. If he could at least produce some type of sickening moan in her twitching ear of how much he was enjoying her body, or just relish in her gasps of air as he pumped, I'd appreciate it just a little bit more.
That's all I got. just my own thoughts.
Great premise, great writer, terrible execution. The 1000 word limit completely neutered this story. Gonna be a down vote from me chief
I don’t get 1000 word challenges. It doesn’t work for porn.
Stop makeing fics
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Yeah, the 1K Challenge is meant to challenge me to write a story in the exact 1,000 words. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't.
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Excuse me?
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I get that, but the execution of using clever tactics to insure an audience would be intrigued was lacking. I like the idea, but I believe it should've been approached with a more direct mindset to fit your goal. I mean, she's getting raped here, there's a lot to say about it emotionally in 1k words.
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I agree, there would normally be a lot of deep emotions, thoughts and desperation to escape the assault. But I wanted to see if I could try that in an exact 1K. Next time I try dark rape, I'll try and space it out a lot more.
Hot
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Or just, no rape
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I wanted to try something different.
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I get that, just want to let you know this wasn't, too good I get you tried to do it in exactly 1k words, also the ending wasn't good, I mean she could just go get the guards/police at anytime.
Imagine getting ass blasted because someone wrote some rape fic but they didn't make it "logical enough"