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But, if Sunset has financial troubles, then how can she afford that fancy apartment?
It's not her apartment it's actually a house that his parents left for him on a financial plan and in this point in time she's lieing to her friends and saying she's okay even if she is staying at a local gas station/grocery store casually asking for money every so often when she sees her friends she acts casual but to a more honest eye it's pretty obvious what's happening.
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The only thing that I say to criticise is make chapters longer so you can fit more delipment in them
But you do you
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The only reason they aren't that long is cause I was expecting this to get alot of shit and if it did I was going to delete it and try again because last time my story got so dismantled I lacked motivation to continue writing it. Like people dislike stories without even letting them play out or even considering the person is new to writing it's unfair I think personally if you don't like someone's writing help them improve don't just dislike and leave nothing as an answer to why you disliked it.
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That's well said I'm wanting to write a story but I haven't started chapter 1 despite my friends saying it's not bad