Spike has no choice but to undertake another mission for the Dragon Lord that will take him to Salem; a town known for its witches and those who hunt them. Perhaps he can come to an amiable agreement with a pair of lovely beauties he encounters?
10111360 Readers might be more eager to see the rest of the mane six, Sunset, or Starlight, plus anyone else I might add on a whim, so I can't make any promises, especially since Spike just traveling around to lay women might get too repetitive and stale for me; still, I'd like to do so eventually, but might need a break especially since like any series the ratings have diminishing returns!
10111407 If you need plots I kind of have one lol, word spreads of a diplomatic dragon and it soon reaches Luna and celestia, they send for him so he can help negotiate with them and the dragon lord over territory, same can be used for the changelings if you ever want to hook chrysalis up with spike, easy way to get anyone from canterlot into the story.
10111444 I'll keep it in mind but it's unlikely it will play out like that, as I'm thinking Celestia and Luna are so powerful in this world they don't typically interact with anyone. Chrysalis I haven't considered much as I don't want to get ahead of myself; try to keep my options open!
10111407 Hmm, well you can always use Sunset and Starlight as members of the coven during a return visit.(I assume Spike will visit them again) though I'm personally interested in Rainbow Dash.
If I may use her appearance in Dungeons & Discords as inspiration, I would say that after Spike returns from the Coven, he is informed by his harem that the ruby Rarity gave him was stolen by a notorious thief and goes after her.
He catches her, only to realize that she has already sold the jewel, which awakens his Dragon instincts, and rutting her is the only thing he can do to avoid killing her.(it'd lead to a nice moment-of-doubt Character Arc when he comes to his senses)
Now quite addicted to his sperm, Rainbow Dash then helps him track down the ruby's buyer.
Off the top of my head, I can see Tempest as a warlord being the buyer, though I could probably think of others given time.
...I just realized I got way too carried away with this idea(I just wanted to say Rainbow Dash as a thief and the rest wrote itself.)
10112869 Probably won't add anymore major characters to the coven; definitely not Sunset as I have another idea in mind for her. Starlight I haven't thought about much yet.
I do like your ideas for Rainbow Dash, though I was thinking something a little different so I might meld the two concepts. She's also tied with Applejack as admittedly my least favorite of the mane six, and as a result they're both characters I really struggle to write, but I will get to her eventually!
10112929 Well, we all know that Applejack's still a farmer so...Spike ends up having to rest in the barn for either A: he made a pit stop on a long flight(possibly across continents) or B: he was injured for some reason.
10133213 My writing has been delayed due to real life junk, but I hope to get the next chapter out this week! One of those characters will briefly appear in this story!
Nice chapter!
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Thank you!
Even Moon Dancer wants the Double Dragons.
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Can't blame her!
An idea for a later volume, Princess Celestia at war with Chrysalis.
Loving this Volume so far, is the moon symbol an indication that Luna is the coven's Grand Witch?
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Not sure whether I'll use Celestia or Chrysalis, but I'm quite fond of both so it's possible!
As for the moon symbol, I'm thinking Luna may be Goddess or demi Goddess figure the coven worships, although I've intentionally left it ambiguous.
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Well you can use one for Vol.6 and another for Vol.7 if you want.
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Readers might be more eager to see the rest of the mane six, Sunset, or Starlight, plus anyone else I might add on a whim, so I can't make any promises, especially since Spike just traveling around to lay women might get too repetitive and stale for me; still, I'd like to do so eventually, but might need a break especially since like any series the ratings have diminishing returns!
10111407
If you need plots I kind of have one lol, word spreads of a diplomatic dragon and it soon reaches Luna and celestia, they send for him so he can help negotiate with them and the dragon lord over territory, same can be used for the changelings if you ever want to hook chrysalis up with spike, easy way to get anyone from canterlot into the story.
10111444
I'll keep it in mind but it's unlikely it will play out like that, as I'm thinking Celestia and Luna are so powerful in this world they don't typically interact with anyone. Chrysalis I haven't considered much as I don't want to get ahead of myself; try to keep my options open!
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understandable, just trying to make it smoother cause i dont want to see a story get wrecked by writers block
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Thanks, no problem, I'm always open to suggestions from readers even if I don't end up using them, so long as they're polite!
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Hmm, well you can always use Sunset and Starlight as members of the coven during a return visit.(I assume Spike will visit them again) though I'm personally interested in Rainbow Dash.
If I may use her appearance in Dungeons & Discords as inspiration, I would say that after Spike returns from the Coven, he is informed by his harem that the ruby Rarity gave him was stolen by a notorious thief and goes after her.
He catches her, only to realize that she has already sold the jewel, which awakens his Dragon instincts, and rutting her is the only thing he can do to avoid killing her.(it'd lead to a nice moment-of-doubt Character Arc when he comes to his senses)
Now quite addicted to his sperm, Rainbow Dash then helps him track down the ruby's buyer.
Off the top of my head, I can see Tempest as a warlord being the buyer, though I could probably think of others given time.
...I just realized I got way too carried away with this idea(I just wanted to say Rainbow Dash as a thief and the rest wrote itself.)
10112869
Probably won't add anymore major characters to the coven; definitely not Sunset as I have another idea in mind for her. Starlight I haven't thought about much yet.
I do like your ideas for Rainbow Dash, though I was thinking something a little different so I might meld the two concepts. She's also tied with Applejack as admittedly my least favorite of the mane six, and as a result they're both characters I really struggle to write, but I will get to her eventually!
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Well, we all know that Applejack's still a farmer so...Spike ends up having to rest in the barn for either A: he made a pit stop on a long flight(possibly across continents) or B: he was injured for some reason.
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I actually have a different idea for AJ; just internally debating if it seems too left field for this fantasy Equestria!
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Oh? I'm interested. Would you mind PMing me?
so this hit over 9000? even goku would be proud.
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The first in this series did!
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very nice. maybe we get the clip somehow in here.
This was a chapter can't wait for more (no rush) I do hope Celestia and Luna will join along with Chrysalis and Ocellus.
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My writing has been delayed due to real life junk, but I hope to get the next chapter out this week! One of those characters will briefly appear in this story!