When a pegasi stallion sees a LMP style car in Paradise City... a tale that will change Paradise City forever will begin!
This story was heavily inspired by Akula966's Burnout Equestrian Paradise story, I recommend you read all of the current chapters, especially chapter 9!
What's LMP stand for? Did you mean MLP?
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No, LMP stands for Le-Mans Prototype
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Oh btw, I did get held at gunpoint by Oscura.
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Fixed the errors.
Oh my, well. I'm not the only one who thinks Starlight should drive a Racing 500 GT What a coincidence. Is this completely seperate from the other story or will this the in eventually?
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I'm not sure but a guestimate tells me it's separate, but the rest mane 6 i.e. Twilight, Pinkie, Rarity etc. won't appear until later on.
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Now that I think of it, I did tell Akula that I had Starlight in that car. And I see those comments. I assume this is based on the other story right? It just needs to catch up since Dash is still in her P12 and is just fine.
Ah nevermind, good work though.
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I also think the few chapters of this is set before Twilight enters Paradise City, I might want to make that clear and don't worry, Rainbow will still be in the P12.
Ok that actual clears up A lot. Not sure I mentioned this but Viral appears shortly after Twilight gets her Cavalry. She kind of just hangs out by the stadium practicing something unique when Akula's groupnraces past. At least, that's the idea.
Chapter 2 is out!
Hey! I'm driving a GT Concept.
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Sorry?
Don't be, I'm fine with it. I was under the assumption that every character has a unique vehicle. But with only 75 cars that may be tough to pull off.
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Plus downloadable content
Any ideas for Chapter 3?
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Really, I must have had my shades on when creating that line?
What can do to make Oscura… well... apocalyptically mad?
I'm sorry, but the term is Facehoof. Regardless, I think I'm starting to enjoyn your silly style of writing. Misery is funny.
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Oops! Sorry
Wait, Twilight. What... tf
Twilight what are you doing here?!
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I was wondering that too.
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So, you don't know why Twilight is here?
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No, not really
Possibly, Akula. But I would have given her a Krieger 616.
All of this is just confusing enough to keep me interested but still making me slack jawed to the point of wtf.
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I know, I get that feeling when I read Perfect Shift for the first time
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In theory, far from it.
Thanks.
As this side of the story comes to a close, I thought I'd do a sequel in the future.
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I've haven't published it yet, it will need some work on it.
I prefer having Sunset Shimmer driving a Hunter Hotspur but the Phoenix works perfectly fine.
In that case, could you please link to that story?
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Of course
Burnout Equestrian Paradise - Fimfiction
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Thanks, now you should put that link in the story's synopsis. Unfortunately, I don't really know how to do that... Please respond to this comment.
What happened in chapter nine of Akula966's Burnout Equestrian Paradise story?
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Danger made an appearance