10072916 Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I know it's a bit grim, but at the same time I felt it would help with the flow alot better, to show that not everything is lollipops and sunshine in a world being corrupt, especially in a world where the Tantabus is messing with ponies. If you'd like to learn more of the universe that this takes place in, the main story is linked and worth a check out, otherwise not needed to read through my side stuff that takes place in there.
Not gonna lie, little sad to see that happen to her but this is a good story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I know it's a bit grim, but at the same time I felt it would help with the flow alot better, to show that not everything is lollipops and sunshine in a world being corrupt, especially in a world where the Tantabus is messing with ponies. If you'd like to learn more of the universe that this takes place in, the main story is linked and worth a check out, otherwise not needed to read through my side stuff that takes place in there.
Man this is one of those stories that makes you forget it’s My Little Pony.
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Creating a world is harder than it looks, creating a world where people get lost in it is even harder to create.