This story is great so far, keep it up. Cant wait to read more, also what happend to his rifle? It's like after luna ported him into the castle all his gear is gone.
10010214 His rifle along with his other belongings were taken from him when he was moved over to the castle. This was due to him being emotionally unstable and from Luna seeing its main function first hand when they met. Ch3 will go into more depth as to why everything was taken.
God, it's been so long since I seen an MiE story, it brings back good feeling. I'm gonna have to take a look at this in the next day or two. Glad to see something like this around.
Really enjoyed this. Not the typical soldier in Equestria story where the protagonist just dies and wakes up in Equestria. Really liked the way you handled him transferring him there. And I love how you gave the teleportation spells a little effect on him. Anyways, keep up the good work!
10010708 The current date in the story when he was brought to Equestria is mid-1918 near the end of the first world war. The second chapter confirmes this date.
10011543 Glad to see that you're liking the story. With current holidays next chapter is about 1/3ed done. who knows maybe I'll crank it out when I'm done replying to these comments.
10011714 10011877 I appreciate the praise. I hope I do not let you down as the story continues.
10011856 Shows that if you get enough likes you can change a story's name. Amazing suggestion, was kinda half asleep when I was coming up with the name. Cheers!
10011891 It's nice to see that my approach for the story is coming through to the readers. Thanks for the support!
10011635 Yes it was. Huns was what the Uk called Germans due to a speech during the Boxer Rebellion where the Kaiser said that they would be the Huns reborn to the Chinese rebels
This story is great so far, keep it up. Cant wait to read more, also what happend to his rifle? It's like after luna ported him into the castle all his gear is gone.
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It's set during ww1 and from chp2 his current year is 1918.
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Thanks but I haven't read chapter 2 yet and I knew it was ww1 because it was the only war that has used gas masks on the battle field
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His rifle along with his other belongings were taken from him when he was moved over to the castle. This was due to him being emotionally unstable and from Luna seeing its main function first hand when they met. Ch3 will go into more depth as to why everything was taken.
Very good story so far please keep it up!
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why are they already talking about integration instead of talking about getting him home? do they know something he/we do not?
Awesome story! Keep up the good work
I love it. Keep up the good work.
God, it's been so long since I seen an MiE story, it brings back good feeling. I'm gonna have to take a look at this in the next day or two. Glad to see something like this around.
One of the more well written stories I’ve seen, keep it up! I’m looking forward to what you have in store!
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Nope Huns was used for the Germans, not Austro-Hungarians.
Shouldn’t the title be “We Brave Few?”
So far so amazing! I can't wait to read more!
My god, am hooked on this story.
It’s good, slow, and dosen’t rush. It also paints Leo’s personality well, a man tainted from the trenches of the western front...
Really enjoyed this. Not the typical soldier in Equestria story where the protagonist just dies and wakes up in Equestria. Really liked the way you handled him transferring him there. And I love how you gave the teleportation spells a little effect on him. Anyways, keep up the good work!
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The current date in the story when he was brought to Equestria is mid-1918 near the end of the first world war. The second chapter confirmes this date.
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I appreciate the support and will continue putting all my effort into every chapter I make.
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who knows?
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Glad to see that you're liking the story. With current holidays next chapter is about 1/3ed done. who knows maybe I'll crank it out when I'm done replying to these comments.
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I appreciate the praise. I hope I do not let you down as the story continues.
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Shows that if you get enough likes you can change a story's name. Amazing suggestion, was kinda half asleep when I was coming up with the name. Cheers!
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It's nice to see that my approach for the story is coming through to the readers. Thanks for the support!
Hmm. Worth a look.
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Yeah no.
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1/10
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Posting another chapter so soon. C'mon, tell us. Who's your secret editer?
10012770 thank you for your feedback. I put tremendous value upon it.
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You have no clue why I rated and down voted your comment.
10012818 you should write a review of it on your blog, www.creedthoughts.gov.www/creedthoughts.
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You are right I should make a blog post about it. Oh that link did no work.
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Yes it was. Huns was what the Uk called Germans due to a speech during the Boxer Rebellion where the Kaiser said that they would be the Huns reborn to the Chinese rebels