Good job on this chapter As someone who Did creating writing in high school and some time in college. I've never wrote a fan fiction before relic reading them because they're fun Sorry if like some words make no sense being there I'm doing this on mobile You gave the 1st chapter which caught my intention now I'm waiting for the rest to see where it goes further than that good job
10177504 seems like the best type of bad guy to be, can't think of any unusual downsides in his line of work that could come back to bite him in the ass later.
10222091 Fine, but it wont be in the same chapter. I've set it so that Astral is out in the field training, when he gets a call from Spike to do some work. When he gets back I'll do the flashback.
Great chapter!
lol spike took half of manehatten of i so wamt in on that
………… so dose that mean he has the 3 stooges wrapped around his little claw??
Spike being a merc is one hell of a story.
Good job on this chapter As someone who Did creating writing in high school and some time in college. I've never wrote a fan fiction before relic reading them because they're fun Sorry if like some words make no sense being there I'm doing this on mobile You gave the 1st chapter which caught my intention now I'm waiting for the rest to see where it goes further than that good job
I just hope that I can get some quick bits for helping him out.
I've said it once and I'll say it again, I'll only kill as long as I'm being paid.
As spike always says "take what ya can, give nothing back" jack sparrow
I already love this Spike💚... he's a bad guy but he's not heartless or a Mindless psycho.
things are going to be in interesting in the dragon kingdom, also Spike being awesome as I always knew he could be.
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seems like the best type of bad guy to be, can't think of any unusual downsides in his line of work that could come back to bite him in the ass later.
Just saw this in my feed, love it!
Love it.
incredible idea, super creative and well made, this new peak will also be very interesting, I can't wait to see the princesses when they hear the news
Are you going to update tomorrow?
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If not tomorrow then Friday but I’m updating most of my stories this week
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Ok.
Am I the only one who let you use their oc?
It's a yes or no question; you don't have to go into detail.
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Kinda a few of my friends gave me permission to use their oc’s when I need to but your the first to show up.
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I just thought that others had done so before me. I can't wait to see how Spike will meet Astral.
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That's the thing, I've changed it so that he already knows Spike, and is in his part time employ. Is that cool with you?
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Sure, as long as you include a short flashback.
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Fine, but it wont be in the same chapter. I've set it so that Astral is out in the field training, when he gets a call from Spike to do some work. When he gets back I'll do the flashback.
So spike is basically black hat from villainous... ok cool
A Business dragon.