Hun interesting chapter, loved the sissification, but I was hoping for something more unexpected in the twist then using Poison joke, but I guess there was only so much you could do in that floor. Hum maybe letting out something more ominous behing everything would have added to the tention of the situation. Happy to see that he is still a stallion, the mental shift is interesting, I wonder what is the effect on draining his magic? I hope he gets to see to see in a mirror soon, I wonder if this would bring a form a narcissus to him. I expect the next one will be about his or her, will be getting a new mane style very soon. Still, this was still a great chapter, keep it up.
10026296 Yeah, this will be one of the shortest chapters of the fic by far, just because there wasn’t much to do this time around. But now that he looks the way he does, what I have planned for the fifth floor will be a ton of fun.
I really wondered if he was going to become full-mare. But I'm glad he just became feminine instead of losing his most precious treasure between his legs! Still, I wonder if it would shrink down at some point. c:
One of the few types of flora the guard manual warned about. The sticky residue it produced had it ill-fortuned effects on any pony foolish enough to touch it. It looked so similar to the photos he had seen. By why weren’t they blue?
To ascend, sample it’s unique power.
when i have to use it's/its i read over the sentence using It is instead
Shining knew what regular poison joke did to him. Hazing Week in the Canterlot barracks had taught him that much. But he doubted these flowers where going to make bubbles come out of his mouth.
Still there, and growing stiffer by the second as of to prove it.
Eventually he lip started quivering
Finally, after waiting who knows how long, Shinging realized
Oh, my! Sissy Shiny is certainly in quite the predicament. And, given 'Broad swords' aren't inclined to bleed out urine like a 'Poket Knife', he... she? is either going to have to let out some 'Shiny Sauce', or be in for some of the most uncomfortable feelings a fine stallion can have when it is gunning for a '2 in 1'.
This tower has totally played poor Shining like a Harp From Tartarus. Though, honestly, it's his pride that is causing him so much trouble. Perhaps he'll come to realize that by the journey's end?
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I like the idea of 'Pink Poison Joke'. It made for a nice scene for all that took place in this part of the tower. Again, the 'Dodongo's Lair from OoT plays well to all the goings on per floor with those epic N64 sounding torches. :)
ohno
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Oh yesss!
Hun interesting chapter, loved the sissification, but I was hoping for something more unexpected in the twist then using Poison joke, but I guess there was only so much you could do in that floor. Hum maybe letting out something more ominous behing everything would have added to the tention of the situation. Happy to see that he is still a stallion, the mental shift is interesting, I wonder what is the effect on draining his magic? I hope he gets to see to see in a mirror soon, I wonder if this would bring a form a narcissus to him. I expect the next one will be about his or her, will be getting a new mane style very soon. Still, this was still a great chapter, keep it up.
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Yeah, this will be one of the shortest chapters of the fic by far, just because there wasn’t much to do this time around. But now that he looks the way he does, what I have planned for the fifth floor will be a ton of fun.
I really wondered if he was going to become full-mare. But I'm glad he just became feminine instead of losing his most precious treasure between his legs!
Still, I wonder if it would shrink down at some point. c:
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Naturally he has to keep it. I've got plans for him still.
when i have to use it's/its i read over the sentence using It is instead
i hope this doesn't come off as annoying :p
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Not at all, I appreciate the help.
You're quite evil, and I love it so much. Keep up the good work!
I'm not typically into this kind of diaper stuff but sissies in in it I adore. Hopefully he ends up taking something big later on.
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Glad you're able to find something you like about it!
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Oh, I know I am.
Nice touch changing Shining's pronoun to 'her' at the very last paragraph
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Just a little glimpse of what's going to happen in the next chapter. Glad you liked it.
Oh, my! Sissy Shiny is certainly in quite the predicament. And, given 'Broad swords' aren't inclined to bleed out urine like a 'Poket Knife', he... she? is either going to have to let out some 'Shiny Sauce', or be in for some of the most uncomfortable feelings a fine stallion can have when it is gunning for a '2 in 1'.
This tower has totally played poor Shining like a Harp From Tartarus. Though, honestly, it's his pride that is causing him so much trouble. Perhaps he'll come to realize that by the journey's end?
***
I like the idea of 'Pink Poison Joke'. It made for a nice scene for all that took place in this part of the tower. Again, the 'Dodongo's Lair from OoT plays well to all the goings on per floor with those epic N64 sounding torches. :)