Hatred runs rampant in the chaos of Anon-A-Miss, demon-like creatures are on the prowl in Canterlot City, and Sunset is the only one with the power to cut them all down...
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Shining Armor may be too good a detective. Then again having an ally on the inside, someone who can cover her ass wouldn't hurt.
I mean it worked for Batman right?
The whole situation with the snow covered rock was awesome. Pinkie I applaud you . You're truly the epitome of a real friend.
So Jeanne d'Arc had the Witchblade? Interesting. And I'm excited to see what you do with the other thirteen artefacts and who wields them.
Hey, a bit of constructive criticism, I noticed you tend to reuse words a bit too much. It happens too often to list all the cases but just as an example:
You used "right now" twice in the same sentence, a possible alternative could be "how... attractive Pinkie looked at the moment"
Another case:
You used Sunset's named too often, try and mix it up with pronouns or other alternatives, for instance:
Just as a possible example.
All right. You are going to make me dig out my Witchblade comics and re read them. At least the ones I have. I think I made it through about half way before real life distracted me.
oOOOoO this was a nice chapter, I really would have thought that the Main 6 learned their lesson by now.
Wow. This is certainly intense.
And Shiny's being a good cop. Wonder when his sister will start looking into things. And meeting a certain Witchblade...
Glad Sunny made it out of that scuffle with Gilda and Lightning alright.
And, looks like the girls are starting to get savvy to Sunset maybe, just maybe, not being Anon-a-Miss.
Also, don't think I didn't notice Sunset enjoying the pleasant plushness of Pinkie Pie's perky, puffy pillows pressed perfectly into her back earlier in the chapter. Clearly the Witchblade and Ray ship it too.
Cliffhanger! Gah, curious to see what he finds. So many stories handle Sunset's papers moment differently to the point where I kinda look forward to the "papers, please" moment.
On a side note, I've never really liked Pinkie as a whole (she's just too much of... well, everything), and thus I've never really liked SunPie, yet, lately some of the fics I've been reading have been rolling with the SunPie ship and now I'm really enjoying it. So, yeah... I support SunPie!
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Glory to Arstotzka!
I just found this and thought it'd be relevant to this chapter:
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9918884 Indeed, very appropriate.
If the student body lynched Sunset, it most likely would be a blood bath
I appreciate it when writes take the time to note that the HuMane 5 have direct reasons to believe that Sunset is the one behind Anon-A-Miss. People tend to forget that Applebloom immediately tried to have Applejack think it was Sunset, which she brushed off. Unfortunately the sleepover at Rarity's happened and they only used photos from Sunset's phone. Even then the girls asked if Sunset had lost her phone before they started accusing her.
Because of this it would be hard to convince them that she isn't involved. It's disheartening that they're still feeling that way after what they heard from Pinkie, but it's good to see that seeing something happen right in front of them is getting their heads out of their asses.
I always have imagine eqg Gilda to look like that
Sorry for bad inglish
That one friend; you all know the one
I look so much forward to the can of whoopass Sunset will unleash on the Cutie Mark Crusaders for their bullshit.
This thing is a pervert.
Thanks god this world isn't like DXD.
He is a pervert , true, but most importantly, he is a homie.
Those 4 bitches will need to kneel before Sunset to ask for forgiveness, as well as paying lunch, snacks (sweet or salty) for a month, as well as helping paying for either a bike or a new car
And seriously, i usually hate the idea, but i wonder if the belt wouldn't be appropriate to the Crusaders at this point.
Dear Lord Allmighty i hope it hurted.
Except Pinkie, all of you are trash
Well, now to be fair, Celestia is literally the human version of the closest thing she had to a adoptive mother.
The press
Hum...
So, if i understand, Anon-a-miss is before the Friendship Games, i wonder how will that happens.
"choke out" does not mean strangulation. Choking someone out involves using your arm to block the blood going to their brain, harmlessly rendering them unconscious as long as you stop after they pass out. That's not what lightning is doing here.