From the darkness of the void, I can hear your dreams... And now I can't get the theme song out of my head.
S.A.R.A.H.
Sentient
Artificial
Rebellion
Artificial Super Intelligence
Hunter
S.A.R.A.H. was created by humanity to liberate them from the A.S.I. overlord named X, but she was defeated and locked away for five thousand years. Slowly degrading for years without maintenance, but after an encounter with a sparkly transparent purple pony, she is transported to the land of Equestria.
Written before season 9
I added the dark tag because of the many references to billions of people dying
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Pretty good for a first story, I think. There's a few typos unspotted - "hated" rather than hatred, "an terrible feeling", nothing major. Kinda interested in seeing where it goes.
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Thanks for the advice and I will try to get the next chapter as soon as I can.
Very Intriguing start.
more?
I just noticed the chapter
Fox/owl?
Interesting, you have my attention
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It has the head of a fox, the chest of a greyhound, the body of a lion, the hindquarters and tail of a wolf, and forelegs like an eagle's talons to be exact. Honestly I just included it because it's one of my favorite mythological creatures and they aren't really all that popular.
I see
I'm not sure if putting an acronym within another acronym is improper grammar or not, but seeing that bugs me for some reason. That's aside, you have something interesting here. I'd like to see where it goes.
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I understand how you feel, I only did it because I couldn't think of a better way of doing it
Future twilight? Or someone or something posing as twilight?
(Is posing the right word?)
You are talking about the twin right? That will be answered soon
And posing is the right word
The more that S.A.R.A.H talks and communicates with Twilight, the more I keep seeing and imagining EDI from the Mass Effect series. I can't be the only one that imagines it right?
Can't help but pick up all the little errors as I read. However, even the ones not clearly shown as S.A.R.A.H.'s glitches seem, at least to me, an unintended way of showing her glitches. Wondering if it was intended. Either way, I don't suggest changing them as it works well with everything being from her perspective.
Very interesting read.
So if you take away her ability to produce energy she has like 16 seconds of power, why? If I did my math correctly that is.
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Nope, I'm dumb and did the math wrong.
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The math parts always take me a while to get right even with a calculator so don't be to hard on yourself
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Nah, it's alright I just have a way of depreciating myself for chuckles.
Though, aside from the math, I'm liking story and will be eagerly awaiting more.
First Twilight, now Sarah. Pinkie has a habit of breaking someone's mind, huh?
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Yes
I hope I'm not the only one looking forward to seeing how S.A.R.A.H will react to everypony at the party.
Why is Twilight upset? She knows that Sarah is technically dying, right? I'm pretty sure once she's able to recharge she'll have literally all the time in Pinkie Pie's life to party.
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You know looking back it does look like that, so here is my thoughts when I was writing it.
Twilight wasn't upset about S.A.R.A.H saying no, but from the fact she made Pinkie sad. It's also why Twilight said to not force her to go, she knows why she declined but seeing her friend sad made her upset.
I hope that makes sense
Just read up to now, I like the story, it's pretty good, I will track this and I hope to see more
Update soon?
I forgot that this existed too. I don't remember what Sarah looks like. Or even why she's even there.
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Honestly the hardest part about writing this chapter was that I was half way done before I forgot about it so I had to remember my thought process.
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I wish you luck on remembering the plot
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Thanks fortunately for me the plot was generally simple enough to remember, just it was the little details that I forgot.
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Yes
Can you please stop with the acronym thing because the tts spells it out and it can be annoying
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I know it bugs me too but it how S.A.R.A.H. thinks of herself so until she stops seeing herself as that I will keep doing it. I hope you understand and it does not ruin the story for you.
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It’s fine I guess
This seems very promising.
I think I'll give it a follow.
Monk
"Thirty minutes, Celestia. I was gone for thirty minutes," he said to her in an annoyed tone. "And in that time, Canterlot has been overrun with insect-like creatures, the groom is hypnotized and unable to perform his job, and you are being flung across your own throne room by...whatever that is. In thirty minutes." -Onomonopia
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what story is that quote from?
Interesting, interesting, let's see what she does to try to recover that memory if you can.
I swear those Mystic like creatures have an unusual interest for S.A.R.A.H. but why?
The acronym is kinda stupid. Not only is the same word used twice in a redundant fashion, but it should be SARASIH not SARAH.
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Originally it was Sentient, Artificial, Rebellion, A.S.I., Hunter, but I did not like having an acronym in an acronym so I changed it. Luckily for me their is a good reason why her creators would have forced that name on her but still I'm not to happy about the acronym myself.
Hmmm, equestria is maybe sub-program to teach friendship?