9744290 I agree that it would be nice to know which fetishes are being explored in each chapter, but at the same time, the unpredictability of it is what makes it interesting.
9744290 Yes, Thank you. This is what I was going after.
9744325 It has nothing to do with predictability. I don't need to know what each chapter is going to be about, I'd just like to know what themes/fetishes are going to show up in the story. It's not fun to have something that's a turnoff popping up unexpectedly when I'm getting invested in a story, causing me to drop it.
9744325 Then for the sake of anyone trawling the comments, I'll get these points out of the way.
I am trying to write a story that I would want to read. And that want has since evolved past just fetishy smut to include tender and heavy moments too.
And the following subjects/fetishes will never have a place in this or any other story that I may produce: -scat -watersports -snuff -pedophilia/foalcon (or whatever this community calls it and I feel filthy just writing those words)
Honestly this chapter seems a bit less entertaining than previous ones. I still liked it, just not as much as the previous ones.
... I was laughing too much to properly enjoy the sex.
9744290
I agree that it would be nice to know which fetishes are being explored in each chapter, but at the same time, the unpredictability of it is what makes it interesting.
9744290
Yes, Thank you. This is what I was going after.
9744325
It has nothing to do with predictability. I don't need to know what each chapter is going to be about, I'd just like to know what themes/fetishes are going to show up in the story. It's not fun to have something that's a turnoff popping up unexpectedly when I'm getting invested in a story, causing me to drop it.
Damn.
Now I'm jealous.
9744325
Then for the sake of anyone trawling the comments, I'll get these points out of the way.
I am trying to write a story that I would want to read. And that want has since evolved past just fetishy smut to include tender and heavy moments too.
And the following subjects/fetishes will never have a place in this or any other story that I may produce:
-scat
-watersports
-snuff
-pedophilia/foalcon (or whatever this community calls it and I feel filthy just writing those words)
Now, back to the writing desk.
Not to sound impatient, but it there an update regarding the next chapter of this story?