Prologue: Your wish is granted.
In an unknown room, two shadowy figures are currently watching on the human surface from far away.
"Young sister."
"Yes Elder brother?"
"Have you heard recently on the surface?"
"Yes, I did. It truly is a tragic fate. A rare sight of a human wishing both heaven and hell after experiencing a cruel harsh life in his human world. He doesn't deserve this at all."
"Indeed sister, now let us decide for a moment on what to do."
"Of course."
The two of them think for some time before the elder brother nodded his head.
"Very well, we shall grant his wish. On a few conditions."
"How so elder brother?"
"Firstly, we must descend into the human world and disguise ourselves. Then we march straight into his school to have a little "Friendly chat" with the school board meeting. Whether if they want to hear it from us or not."
"Agreed, hopefully it'll decide the fate of this "despising" human world and "hers" as well."
"Of that, we can both agree on, young sister."
Meanwhile, in the human world. . .
???POV:
Huh? What happened?
Oh yeah, I tried to kill myself by jumping off the cliff and into the ocean.
Maybe it's a slower death? I don't know.
Yet for the first time, I feel . . . happy. Now that I don't have worry anymore of beating, neglect, abuse, embarrassment, harassment, all of it. I can die in peace.
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Unbeknownst to me however, before closing my eyes shut, there was a small shadowy figure swimming straight towards me and lifts me to the surface.
"How is the patient doctor?"
"He's stabilized, but sadly the boy's in a coma. Although, I can't determine of why he tried to kill himself."
"Shall I contact on the phone if his family wants to see him?"
"Go ahead nurse."
"*sob*P-Please be okay and w-wake up, I-I don't *hic* want to l-lose you."
*Beep. . .* *Beep. . .* *Beep. . .* *Beep. . .*
Strange, why do I hear beeping sounds? Am I still alive?
My body feels like it can't move nor my head, except for my eyes.
I open eyes up a little bit. The whole thing in my vision feels funny and hazy.
I see two figures each separate on this bed side, hearing them snore in their sleep.
Were these the two who saved me? I'm not sure exactly. Everything feels fuzzy.
Just why? Why would anyone save me? Say something dammit!
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Too tired, I better get some sleep. . .
I woke up the next day, but something felt odd and different in this room.
My hazy vision notice this whole environment looks different, did I get picked up into a weird place?
Lost in my own thoughts, I heard a loud door closing and someone else is in this room.
I look on my left bed and see a hazy dark big figure looking down at me before speaking up.
"Hello there."
I hear it's a male voice. Who is this man and what's he doing here?
"I have heard of your wish and accepted it, but under a few condition rules."
Wait a minute, accepting my wish? Few condition rules? What's he talking about?
"Once you will be able to recover by the end of this year, your wish shall commence on a year."
He's leaving, wait come back here! Don't leave me! Please!
"Fare thee well, until we meet again."
"AH!"
I gasp in pain waking myself up with some sweat on my head. I began to breath in and out.
Thankfully, I could move my right arm to remove some sweat off of me. I tried to recollect on what happened. Let's see, I tried to kill myself by jumping off and into a lake, heard weird noises, found two figures sleeping, and a big guy talking to me about my wish.
Wait a sec, he heard about my wish and accepted it? Who is he and how does he know?
While thinking things over in my head, I get interrupted when a doctor enters in this room.
He closes the door behind him and walks over to greet me.
"Hi there kid, my name is Dr. Jeff."
I tried to speak up, but for some reason I only got a few coughs from my mouth.
The doctor notice this and sighs.
"Your vocal cord has been damaged so we had to repair it. It'll take some time before your cord recovers."
Dr. Jeff then gives me a pen and a sheet of paper to write on with my hand writing.
So I took the pen and wrote my words down before revealing my sentence.
'How am I alive?'
"If you must know, those three little girls who visited you earlier have saved your life."
I wrote my message down again.
'Three little girls you say?'
"Yes, Applebloom, Sweetiebelle, and Scootaloo."
My whole frozen stiff as was my writing. Those three bully's sisters were the ones that saved me? No, this can't be right. There has to be a mistake. It has to be. There's no way they would-!
"I'm sure that you have a lot on your mind kiddo so I'll leave you alone for now."
I didn't write to him as my hands are bawling up into shaky fists and a few tears leaking out of my eyes.
"I'll come back to visit and you best try to get some sleep, okay?"
I only nodded to him as he closes the door walking away. Once the doctor is away, I immediately threw both the paper and pen to the door in sorrow anger as my eyes are filled with tears.
'Why? Why did they save me? WHY CAN'T THEY ALL LEAVE ME ALONE AND JUST LET ME DIE!'
'LET ME DIE IN PEACE INSTEAD OF TORTURING ME FOREVER!!!!!'
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'Just let me die in peace. . .'
Elsewhere. . .
3rdPOV:
A young student girl is seen walking towards Canterlot hospital to meet with her close friend.
"I better go visit him again and see if he's finally awake."
The teenage girl has some goodies and a pair food for him when he wakes up.
"I wonder if he would like peanut butter or chocolate? Hmmmmm."
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Interesting
Oh please do go on!
?
.....You keep referring to Sunset as HE/HIS.
Is this gonna continue?
General Kenobi
This is a good so far. It’s still a start so it’s hard to say for certain how it’ll turn out (if you continue
). It’s still rough but with a little bit of fixing (some grammatical errors here and there) this might turn out to be a good read.
I really hope you do continue this
. I want to know who your MC is, how much time actually passed and what his wish was (and if it came true). Well, thanks for this short story and hope you are doing well out there.
Where is the other story before this