9688808 I've written the first three chapters and half of the fourth. It's going to be finished tonight and all of it will be posted by a week from now at the latest.
I've learnt not to make promises I can't keep but I'm certain on this one.
Wait a moment, he is wearing a waistcoat and a belt? That is a serious fashion don't. There is no way Rarity would ok that. A belt with a waistcoat just draws attention to your junk and breaks up the clean lines of a properly tailored suit. He should be wearing suspenders under that waistcoat. And not the kind that clip on either. The kind where they button to the inside of the pants.
I am IN LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WITH EMBER. pless make part 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But yeah, teeth brushed, hair combed, beard trimmed, everything on point, or at least as close to it as you could get in the twenty minutes between being woken up and the guest being due to arrive. Truthfully, you sprayed your hair with dry shampoo. No, you weren’t ashamed.
You heard none. For a few moments, there was silence, and then: “Star—err, Twilight , what’s that thing holding the door for me, and why is it dressed like a piano?”
Ok I'll be the first to say this. This better not be abandoned cuz this needs to be finished.
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I've written the first three chapters and half of the fourth. It's going to be finished tonight and all of it will be posted by a week from now at the latest.
I've learnt not to make promises I can't keep but I'm certain on this one.
Are you going to finish this story
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I direct you to the comment beneath this one.
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And because of that I'm looking forward to this story. ^w^
Not gonna upvote this until it's completed.
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I remember that something happened irl that took you away from fimfictition, I hope everything is alright and that you are doing well.
dRaGoNs DoNt HaVe TiTtIeS bEcAuSe ThEiR nOt MaMmAlS RRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEeeEeeEEeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEE
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Leaving me excited to read more with one chapter ... Bravo
Aww yiss. This gonna be good.
I don't know why I got the impression it was actually titled (I Don't Even WANT To) Fuck You!
Would've been tsundereier that way.
Sauce for the cover image (very NSFW): derpibooru search
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You're a good man. I left the artist but not the ID, I'll put it in now!
9689236 No probs! Great story, by the way.
Okay, really wanna see more of this.
It's funny and has some hints towards some racy moments between Anon and Ember.
Too bad we'll probably never get to see Ember and Guilda meet on the show. I'd love to see Ember's abrasive personality go up against a griffon.
Wait a moment, he is wearing a waistcoat and a belt? That is a serious fashion don't. There is no way Rarity would ok that. A belt with a waistcoat just draws attention to your junk and breaks up the clean lines of a properly tailored suit. He should be wearing suspenders under that waistcoat. And not the kind that clip on either. The kind where they button to the inside of the pants.
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They're*
I am IN LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WITH EMBER. pless make part 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Bruh chill, it just came out yesterday
Ember has breasts?
So.....shouldn't this have an anthro tag?
I am quite intrigued
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Guess I shouldn't mention the argonians from the elder scrolls games then xD
Amazing first chapter keep it up
Where is the picture art used for this story? i want that busty Ember pic
Edit: NVM found it
And I thought Batman was the detective.
Que “Sharp Dressed Man”.
Methinks [him] should be [you], cuz, second-person and all.
There's an unneeded closing quotation mark there.
Pinkie has been teaching her the secrets of the fourth wall, huh? Neat.
Finally getting around to this story.
Anon might have been able to save himself with, "Just admiring your gorgeous figure. On my world, beauty is expected to be admired."
Or it would have gotten everyone killed.
Yeah he likes your ass Ember.
I'm loving this story so far it's super funny.
Dear diary today I learned two new words
Modicum
Herpetoligist
Study, study, study!
Lol, i like this!